Twisted

By kai960

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Raven Carnell is a beautiful sociopathic murder with a fetish for killing any one that crosses her path. The... More

Twisted
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten

Chapter Six

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By kai960

Hunter:

There was something nerve wrecking about sitting in the backseat of Jax's truck while he and Billy talked quietly so he couldn't hear them. He sat shaking with his hands clasped tightly in his lap while he glanced occasionally out of the window. They had been traveling down a road he didn't recognize for a good fifth-teen minutes and they had yet to pass any other car which made him even more anxious. He didn't want to appear nervous but the longer they drove the more his heart raced in his chest.

"So Hunter you live around here?" Jax spoke up distracting him from his thoughts.

"Yes I've lived here all my life" he responded with a timid smile.

"That could be useful for the next time we go hunting" Billy hinted with a smirk that had Jax nodding in approval with a look that had Hunter even more on edge but instead of panicking he just breathed in then out to calm his nerves.

After a few minutes the car disappeared from the road and through a path hidden behind thick trees that covered the sun. It seemed like a very calming and peaceful area that had Hunter feeling much better as Jax parked the truck in front of a tree. They got out, while Hunter took in the view Jax grabbed the duffel bag and started off in a direction deeper within the trees and they followed closely behind.

"Where are we?" Hunter asked stepping on withered branches that crunched under his feet.

"There's a tiny shack up here where few people like to hang out. There's a river behind it so it's the perfect spot" Jax answered still walking.

"I thought we came to hunt?"

"We are" Billy answered this time as they approached a worn down shack.

The shack was in shambles, drenched in dark moss and dirty it was ready to collapse. The windows were cracked open slightly with spiderwebs on them. A rusted door was tilted off its hinges and there was a strong rancid odor coming from it. Hunter covered his nose and tried not to breathe in the horrible stench of dead animals that made him sick. He started to ask could they hunt somewhere else, when high pitched giggles sounded from behind the shack. They sounded once more as Jax motioned them to remain quiet then walked around the shack. They followed quietly, next to a rushing river were two girls giggling and playing in the river. One was in a bathing suit splashing the other who only put her feet in the water.

From a distance they both seemed young and pretty maybe about sixteen or seventeen. The one splashing in the water had long golden curly hair to her back with a flushed tan skin to match. She wore a light green two piece bathing suit. The other one had short pixy red hair with really pale skin with baby blue eyes. She wore faded shorts with a red bikini top which matched her hair.

"Perfect" Jax whispered then said suggested with a wicked expression "Hunter why don't you take the bag and wait for us inside. Billy and I are going to invite those girls to join us".

Without questions he took the duffel bag from Jax and headed inside the shack. Once he was in he placed the bag on the floor then looked around; it was much worse on the inside. There was dirt and spiderwebs everywhere and the smell grew stronger with every step he took; it was making him nauseous. He never really had a strong stomach for most things. Ignoring the smell he dropped to his knee, opened the duffel bag and was taken aback. With astonished eyes he gasped at the hunting tools in the bag. There were sharp knives, needles, tape, handcuffs, scalpels, hammers, pliers and scissors.

What kind of hunting tools were these? He thought wildly with fear.

His hands reached to close the bag until high pitched screams rang through his ears. He was on his feet quickly and through the door in time to watch Jax slam the blond haired girl face first into the dirt. She screamed trying to crawl away but he kicked her legs until she was sobbing for him to stop. Billy was dragging the red haired girl by her hair towards the shack. He was ripping strings of hair from her scalp. She was struggling to free herself from his meaty hands.

"What are you doing!" Hunter screamed loudly.

Billy laughed hysterically as he picked the girl up and slammed her on her back. She screamed when he balled up his fists and began punching her in the face.

"Stop!" Hunter cried out "Stop it!"

"Billy take her inside now!" Jax ordered snatching the blond by her foot then dragging her inside the shack. Hunter tried to muster up some courage and block his way but Jax shoved him to the wall and growled.

"Stay the fuck back and watch!"

Petrified he stood by the wall with his chest heaving heavily as the girl reached frantically for him; pleading desperately for his help.

"Help me! Help! Help me please!" she sobbed and he felt his stomach knot and his knees go weak. Billy yanked the girl up by her feet then pushed her inside where she collapsed instantly. She cried out in pain as a broken piece of wood pierced her knee forming a bloody gash. Hunter stood watching and gasping from afar; he couldn't do anything but watch as they tortured the girls.

The blond was putting up a fight trying to scratch Jax with her tiny nails but he easily knocked her hands away but not before delivering a powerful punch to her face again...and again until there was blood running down the left side of her cheek. She screamed loudly and he growled taking a piece of tape and securing it over her mouth. He could still hear her heart wrenching screams from beneath the tape. Ignoring her pleas Jax straddled her waist and began taping her legs then her hands above her head.

Billy was laughing psychotically as he continued to punch the red haired girl in the face. He tore the piece of wood from her knee creating a deep gash that oozed blood. She screamed wildly reaching up and scratching the side of his face.

"Bitch" he roared angrily moving towards her bleeding knee and taking a huge bite out of her. Billy held the hanging bleeding skin between his teeth then slurped and swallowed. She wailed at the top of her lungs but was quickly silenced as Billy's hands captured her thin neck between his hands and snapped it. Seeing that Hunter could no longer contain the rush of emotions through him or the wave of sickness in his stomach. He crouched over in the corner and vomited profusely. The contents of his stomach lay splattered on thick wood as he wiped his mouth but continued to sob and close his eyes. For the first time in his life; He wanted to go home.

"Tammy!" the blond wailed under the tape, tears streaming down her face mixing with blood and dirt. Jax cast a glance in the dead girl's direction and laughed bitterly.

"What a shame Billy we didn't get to have fun with her" he glanced back to the blond "Looks like we'll just have to play with her".

Billy nodded as Jax ripped the girls clothes off until she was naked in front of them. Horrified Hunter closed his eyes tightly not wanting to see or hear what they were about to do to the girl.

"Billy why don't you have some fun first" Jax suggested switching positions with Billy who quickly unbuckled his pants, removed the tape from her legs then started raping her. Even though his eyes were closed he could still hear and imagine everything which made the sickness soar through him again. He tensed when he heard the footsteps approach him and a hand touch his shoulder.

"Open your eyes and watch Hunter" Jax told him softly and he shook his head in defiance.

"Look!" he ordered aggressively.

"No!" Hunter yelled loudly "Your sick! The both of you! What's wrong with you! Why are you doing this!"

"What's wrong with us!" he repeated the words maliciously. He grabbed Hunter by his throat, yanked him to his feet and forced him to open his eyes as Billy raped the girl on the floor.

"You wanted to know about our family this is it. We kill people. We eat, kill, and rape because we can. This is who we are. What we all are including Raven" he paused then continued softly in his ear.

"What about the girl who you wanted to make happy? What if I told you she was a serial killer.What if I told you she planned to kill you the first night you met. What if she wanted to make you a killer too?" he growled throwing him to the ground easily like he was a rag doll. He landed on his back in a puddle of blood that was flowing from the dead girl's wound. It coated the back of his arms and shirt making him vomit once more. It burned his throat leaving an awful taste in his mouth but it was nothing compared to the screams from the girl and hoarse moans from Billy.

"Raven said she wanted you to become the perfect killer like us.....but maybe she was wrong. Maybe you can't be like us and if you can't then there's no use for you" he said unemotionally leaving him shaking in the puddle of blood while him and Billy continued their assault on the girl. He prayed it would end there but it didn't as Billy finished loudly and Jax took his place and raped the girl. Hunter hugged his knees to his chest, rocking back in forth in the blood. His thoughts jumbled from the sounds of sobbing, moans and the realization that Raven and her family were sadistic serial killers. She was a killer.

Wrapped in his thoughts he didn't hear Billy approach him or swing something in front of him. His face twisted in horror and disgust when he realized it was a severed arm dripping blood.

"You hungry Hunter cause I'm starving" Billy laughed putting the arm to his mouth and taking a huge bite out of it. He laughed loudly making the chewed flesh in his mouth drip down his lips onto Hunter's shoulder. He shrank away from it but Billy caught him, forced him on the blood covered floor and shoved a piece of flesh into his mouth.

"No!" he groaned through the hot flesh searing his tastebuds and filling his mouth with the rancid taste of blood. He tried with all his strength to spit it out but some made its way down his throat. Billy laughed and forced more down his throat and Hunter screamed shoving him away then getting to his knees to vomit again.

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