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[The scene cuts right into the golden gates of Heaven where Charlie and Vaggie are shown to be outside as the portal closes behind them.]
Charlie: "Vaggie, look at this place! It's so clean! Isn't that amazing?"
Vaggie: "*sarcastically* Yup, super cool. Heaven. Wow."
[Charlie and Vaggie approach the front desk where St peter pops up from behind his desk.}
St. Peter: "Hiya! Welcome to Heaven! Can I get your name please?"
Charlie: "Oh! Uhm, uh, Charlie Morningstar!"
[Peter opens the book of reservations that are supposed to be a list of names they've cataloging for those who are to enter heaven.]
St. Peter: "Charlie Morningstar, hmm, *mumbling names from list* I'm not seeing you on my list here, that's so odd."
Charlie: "Uh, uhm, my dad got me this meeting, so maybe..."
St. Peter: "[in background] Oh, Dad! Okay!"
Charlie: "Try Lucifer... Morning... star?"
[Peter realizes who Lucifer is.]
St. Peter: Oh, fuck! "*nervously* Yeah, hoooo, hehe. Yikes, am I right? Are you sure you're in the right place? Because I think you might be a little lost."
[Peter nervously flies down from the desk to Charlie and Vaggie. Vaggie is unamused of St. Peter, crossing her arms in disappointment.]
Vaggie: "Oh, here we go."
Charlie: "No, uh... we're, we're here for a meeting."
[Just then, high above the three of them, Sera and Emily suddenly appear in their angelic forms before turning into their humanoid forms as they land in front of Charlie and Vaggie.]
Sera: "St. Peter. We can take it from here. Greetings, daughter of the Morningstar. I am Sera, the high seraphim of heaven. You are gifted to be here."
[The other angel, Emily, is super-excited to see outsiders from Heaven that she squeals and comes forward to greet them.]
Emily: "*squeals* Hi! I'm Emily, the other seraphim, though you can call me Em! Emmy, E, whatever you want, I go by whatever. *giggles* Welcome to Heaven!"
[Peter flies overhead to get the gates open and starts to sing "Welcome to Heaven" begins. The gates open to reveal to Charlie and the unamused Vaggie the world of Heaven, a beautiful, clean paradise that is the complete opposite of Hell. Even the Angels looked completely different than the demons.]
St. Peter: "Dearly beloved, it is my pleasure to say onto thee...♫ Welcome to Heaven, oh oh! ♫"
St. Peter: "♫ Where the virtuous reside, 24/7, oh oh! ♫"
"♫ People are happy that they died, cause here we got no worries, got no burglaries, no strife. It's the perfect afterlife! Welcome to Heaven, oh oh! ♫"
[St. Peter flies amongst many advertisements in Heaven.]
"♫ Check out our sick decor! The spirits leaven, oh! ♫"
"♫ Please keep your brimstone off the floor, we've got the best and brightest, the politest of the lot. ♫"
[St. Peter poses with lots of other angels.]
"♫ And ev-ery-one is hot! ♫"
Emily: "♫ Gosh, I'm so pleased to show some outsiders around. After you see our realm, you'll never wanna go back down! ♫"
Sera: "♫ Of course it is just temporary, I'm sorry you can't stay. ♫"
[Emily and St. Peter grab hands and fly up together, before falling back down and posing with some other angels.]
St. Peter and Emily: "♫ Cause every single day in Heaven is a happy day! Welcome to Heaven!" ♫
St. Peter: "♫Yeah!♫ [He pants after finishing the song]"
[Charlie, Vaggie and Emily run hurriedly, unexpectedly passing Adam, who is drinking a soda, and Lute. They both immediately pause as they see Charlie and Vaggie.]
Adam: "Holy fucking shit balls, am I seeing who I think I'm seeing?"
Lute: "What is she doing here? How did she even get up here?"
Adam: "Who cares? I'm handling this shit right now."
[Adam goes to challenge Charlie and Vaggie, but Lute stops him.]
Lute: "Wait! You want to start a fight on the promenade in front of everyone?"
Adam: "Better than waiting for the fucking extermination!"
[Lute immediately grabs Adam by his collar and pulls him to shush him harshly.]
Lute: "SHHH. Sir, what was the Seraphim's one rule?"
Adam: "Uuughhh, "No one but the exorcists can know about the exterminations". I know fine. *slurps drink* Don't fucking shush me, bitch."
[Just before they can settle this, Sera suddenly appears behind them both, teleporting them to an office-like building with just one sway of her wings. The light goes white on the screen before reappearing to show Adam and Lute being confronted by a stern Sera.]
Sera: "You should listen to your lieutenant, Adam."
[Adam turns around and looks at Sera with shock.]
Adam: "Fuck! Sera! You can't sneak up on a guy like that, jeez."
Lute: "Your highness, forgive me, but what are the hell-spawn doing here?"
Sera: "Well, you failed to control the demons' unrest, and now Lucifer is involved, setting up an audience for his misguided daughter. I never would have agreed to your...*Adam slurps his soda drink* 'yearly activities' if I thought it would bring trouble to our doorstep. Keeping Heaven safe was my only reason for allowing it."
Adam: "What do you want from me? I'm just one guy."
Sera: "I want you to do whatever you need to do to keep this problem from getting any worse. Are we clear?"
Adam: "Yeah. Got it."
[Vaggie and Charlie are shown in their hotel room, Vaggie putting their big tons of luggage down as Charlie sits on the bed excitedly.]
Charlie: "Okay, I love Heaven! Vaggie, did you see the ice cream shop? They had sprinkles made of rainbows!"
Vaggie: "Those are just rainbow sprinkles."
Charlie: "*stands up excitedly* Emily's going to take me to a zoo where all the animals are actually soft! You coming?"
Vaggie: "Uh, I need a break. But hug a koala for me."
Charlie: "O.M.G! Can you imagine an actual koala? *squeals happily* see you later!"
[Charlie zips right out of the door, leaving Vaggie alone for herself. She lays on the bed and sighs, but there is a knock on the door a second later. She answers it, revealing Adam, barging right in to greet her.]
Adam: "Hey there Vag-asaurus!"
Vaggie: "Charlie will be back soon, you need to get out now."
[Adam enters the room, Lute behind him]
Adam: "I'm not looking for the blonde, babe. I'm looking for you."
Vaggie: "Why?"
Adam: "Maybe 'cuz you left the band; you tried for a solo career, or I guess it's more of a... duet!"
Vaggie: "I don't know what you're talking about."
Adam: "Do you really think I wouldn't recognize one of my top girls just cuz you're out of uniform?"
[Vaggie immediately grows pale when she realizes how Adam has never forgotten her. A flashback cuts to show a past Extermination. Exorcists come flying down with swords and spears as they hunt and kill every Demon Sinner they find. Screams can be heard as many demons are being massacred by the Angels. An Exorcist flies down and kills a demon, before taking her helmet off, revealing it to be Vaggie with a shorter hair.]
Adam: "(voiceover) You were on the front lines, I wouldn't forget a bad bitch like you. It's why I named you after the best thing ever. Vaggie."
[Cuts back to the present with the annoyed Vaggie.]
Vaggie: "Actually, it's pronounced Vaggie.
Adam: "Hmmmmm- no. Anyway, you sure fucked up, didn't you?"
[Cuts to a flashback of the Extermination. As Exorcists kills a demon, a sinner child is running away while being chased by a vicious Vaggie as an Exorcist. The child runs into an alleyway where he reaches a dead end. He turns, and starts crying where he is prepared to meet his demise. However, Vaggie hesitates, seeing the innocent child right before her eyes crying in fear. She reconsiders her decision.]
Vaggie: "[whispering] Go, run. Now!"
[The sinner child flees from Vaggie right before Lute's shadow appears behind herr. Vaggie realizes she has been spotted before Lute stabs her eye out. Vaggie screams in pain. Her eye falls before Lute steps on it. She steps on Vaggie.
Lute: "Sinful filth like you has no place in heaven."
[Lute brings up Vaggie's head and rips her wings off. Vaggie pants as she watched Adam appear before her in a shadow silhouette before Lute throws her discarded wings away and sword before she and Adam leave. The scene then changes to Vaggie stumbling down an alleyway, now with only one eye. She collapses against a dumpster, before Charlie and (Name), in the past, spots her. charlie puts a bandage over her missing eye and (Name) places her finger over the bandages which glows a dim (F/c) which helps soothe the pain, Vaggie smiles. In return, Charlie and (Name) smile back.]
Adam: "To think someone as worthless as you landed those little hotties and on top of that one of those little hotties is Lilith's. 'Grats on that I guess."
[The scene cuts back to the present where Lute is disgusted of their relationship.]
Lute: "Their love is vile and blasphemous."
Adam: "Hot as fuck though. But I wonder what your bitch would think if she found out you are actually one of us, hmmm?"
Vaggie: "What do you want?"
Adam: "Simple, you work for me again and at the hearing, you're gonna help me shut this kindergarten snowflake bullshit down for good."
Vaggie: "Never!"
Adam: "Oh yeah, you know, that's totally cool. I guess I'll just tell little miss butterflies and rainbows that she's been fucking someone who's killed-- thousands of her people. I'm sure your relationship will be fine. See you in court!"
[Adam and Lute leave the room, Vaggie scared. The camera goes to charlie walking down the halls looking around until she is grabbed by a random angel.]
Random angel: " You're the girl from hell correct."
Charlie: "uh yup that's me. * She tenses up awkwardly*"
Random angel: "Oh that's good you, um my name is Michelle, and you don't know me, and you don't necessarily need to but i just need to know, do you know (Name)?"
Charlie: " Oh yeah she's one of my closest companions and- how do you know her name."
Michelle: "That's not important i just need to know she's ok."
Charlie: " yes she's great but how do you know her."
Michelle: "It doesn't matter i just needed to know she's ok. Thank you so much."
[Michelle quickly walks away leaving Charlie dumbfounded and confused.]