Anecdotes of Abi and Vetri

By msbhrn

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About: These are short and long anecdotes of the serial couple Vetrichelvan and Abinaya from the serial Thend... More

Story 1 - Accounting Abi
Story 2 - Vetri the Problem Solver
Story 3 - Vetri the Patient or Man Cold
Sagas of in-laws - Part 1 - Progress with Limits
Saga of in-laws - Part 2 - Headway with Small Stones
Saga of in-laws - Part 3 - Cars and Calculus
Sagas of in-laws - Part 4 - Discussions and Decisions
Sagas of in-laws - Part 5 - Ice cream with Akka
Sagas of in-laws - Part 6 - Progress and Plans
Sagas of in-laws - Part 7 - Teachers and Students -1
Sagas of in-laws - Part 7 - Teachers and Students - 2
Sagas of in-laws - Part 8 - Discussions and Decisions
Sagas of in-laws - Part 9 - Results and Problems
Sagas of in-laws - Part 10 - I - Surprises Galore
Sagas of in-laws - Part 10 -II - Into the Lion's den
Sagas of in-laws - Part - 11 Tรชte-ร -Tรชte
Saga of in-laws - Part 12 - Family and Family
Sagas of in-laws - Part 13 - Aftereffects
Sagas of in-laws - Part 14 - Filling the Gaps
TVET 2.0 - Divorce and Invitation
TVET 2.0 - Vetri teaches Sudar to Borrow
TVET 2.0 - Vetri-Abi Square Off- Round 1 - Abi retires hurt
TVET 2.0 - Vetri - Abi Square off - Retreat, Recoup and Rejoice
TVET 2.0 Vetri-Abi Square off - Round 2 - Cactus and not Jasmine - Part I
TVET 2.0 - Vetri - Square off - Round 2 - Cactus and not Jasmine - Part 2
One Shot - Vetri rescues Abi (Abi rescues Vetri)
Second Shot - Vetri rescues Abi (Abi rescues Vetri)
TVET 2.0 - Vetri - Square off - Break Time - Vetri Tastes Fatherhood
Third Shot - Vetri rescues Abi (or Abi rescues Vetri)
Tvet 2.0 - Vetri and Abi Square Off - Fathers and Daughters
Tvet 2.0 - Vetri and Abi Square Off - Tearing and Fixing
Tvet 2.0 - Vetri and Abi Square Off - Are we there yet? Part I
Tvet 2.0 - Vetri and Abi Square Off - Are we there yet? Part II
Tvet 2.0 - Vetri and Abi Square Off - Epilogue
Fourth Shot - Vetri Rescues Abi (Or Abi Rescues Vetri)
Fifth Shot - Vetri Rescues Abi (Or Abi Rescues Vetri)
Atrocious Aunt or Adavadi Athai - part 1
Adavadi Athai or Atrocious Aunt - Part 3 -a
Atrocious Aunt or Adavadi Athai - Part 3 - b
Atrocious Aunt or Adavadi Athai - Part 4
Atrocious Aunt or Adavadi Athai - Part 5
Atrocious Aunt or Adavadi Athai - Part 6
Atrocious Aunt or Adavadi Athai - Part 7
Atrocious Aunt or Adavadi Athai - Part 8
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkarignar Vetriyum - Part 1
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkarignar Vetriyum - Part 2
TVET- IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum Part 3
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Part 4a
TVET- IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Part 4b.
TVET IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Part 5
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum -Chapter 6
TVET -IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Part 7
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Part 8
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkarignar Vetriyum - Part 9
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkarignar Vetriyum - Part 10
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Part 11
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Part 12
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TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkarignar Vetriyum - Part 13
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetri - Part 14
TVET - IAS Abiyum and Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Part 15
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkarignar Vetriyum - Part 16
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkarignar Vetriyum - Part 17
TVET - IAS Abiyum Vazhakkaringnar Vetriyum - Epilogue

Atrocious Aunt or Adavadi Athai - Part 2

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Vim: Vetri! Namma pechukku comma than pottirukken! Full stop illai.

Vetri looks like a tornado went through him.

Some time later.

In the second-floor balcony, Vetri is talking to Chitappu.

V: Chitappu! Innum rendu moonu naal inga than iruppen. ... pakkalam. Nadantha nallathu than ... Sari athai vidu! Ethukku koopitta? ...oh! Athuva! Ponnu padippukkunnu antha annan kettaru! Koduthuru! Vatti ellam venam. Antha ponnaiyum vara solli velaikku ponathum thiruppi kodukkanumnu naan sonnennu sollu! Naan appuram avungalai paathu pesaren. Vera enna? ... Avungalai wait panna sollu. Oru rendu moonu naal arapotta avunga kovam ellam konjam kuraiyum. Appuram naan nerla vanthu panchayathu panren.  Athukkulla Pappa school poga arambichuduva! Sari! market vasool ellam sariya poguthu illai? .. Sari vechudaren.

Behind him, Athai is sitting on the chair in the sit-out area in the second floor and reading a book. She looks up from her book and gives Vetri a smile when he turns back.

V: ( mv: ivunga muraicha bayamma irukkuthunna, siricha innum bayamma irukku! Ippo enna keppangalo?) Eppo vantheenga periamma? Ungalai disturb pannittena ? Vanthappove solliruntha naan vera idathula pesiruppen!

Vim: irukkattum! Ithula enna disturbace? Vanthu ippadi ukkarunga! Ippothaikku inga yaarum varamattanga! Itho flaskla tea irukku. Kudichikitte pesalam. Ippo neenga naan kekkara kelvikku bathil solli than aganum. Unga vazhkai mattumillama oru ariyatha kuzhanthai vazhkaiyayum sethu neenga ellarum kedukkareenga! Unga prachinai theeranumnu ninaicha enkitta pesunga! Nee yaaru kelvi kekkannu ninaicheenganna sollidunga! Naan rendu naal chumma nakkal gelinnu irunthuttu poiduven.

V: Illai Periamma! Naan ippo ethavathu athisayam nadanthu Abi manasu marathannu than irukken. Paithiyam pidicha mathiri irukku! Eppadi ponalum thadai podara! Enna panarathunnu puriyama muzhikkaren. Ungalala enakku ethavathu vazhi kidaikkumna enakkum nallathu than.

Vim: Abi manasa matharathu kashtam than! Abiyoda pidivatham ungalukku nallave theriyum. Ava ungalai thavira vera yaarum venamnu pidivathama ninna! Ippo neenga mattum kattayam venamnu solra!  Enna karanama irukkumnu yosikkareenga?

V: Athu than en saabakkedunnu solrene? Evvalo mannippu kettalum othukka mattengara!

Vim: Saabakedunnu en solreenga! Karanamillama saabam kidaikkathu Vetri! Saabamngarathu oruthanga romba manasu udainjupoi, thannala ethuvum seyya mudiyalaingara kaiyalagathanathala varra kovathula kodukkarathu! Ungalukku yaaru appadi saabam kodukkaporanga? Neenga enna thappu pannineenga?

V: Vera yaarukku enna thappu? Abikku than! Avalai vittutu jailukku ponathu drogam thane? Athukku than intha palanai anubavikkaren!

Vim: En poneenga Vetri? Pillaithaichu ponna, unga mela uyiraye vechiruntha ponnai vittutu en poneenga Vetri? Athuvum jailukku? Avakitta sollittu kooda pogalai illai? Ava enna thappu panninanu appadi poneenga?

V: Poirukka koodathu than! Ana athu en thalaiezhuthu! Vera vazhi illai! Athanala poga vendiyatha pochu!

Vim: Athu Abikku theriyuma? Ungalukku vera vazhi illama pochunnu? Avakitta sonneengala?

V: Ava ennai purinjuppannu ninaichu naan sollalai! Athu mattum illai, jailukku porathukku munnadi ava santhoshama irukkarathai paakkanum; antha ninaivoda jail thandanaiya kazhichudalamnu ninaichen! Porathukku munnadi antha konja neramavathu ava santhoshama irukkanumnu ninaichen!

Vim: Sari! Neenga jail ponathukku Abi entha vithathilavathu kaaranama irunthala? Illai antha thappula avalukku ethavathu pangu irunthatha?

V: Ava enna thappu pannuva Periamma? Ungalukku theriyatha avalai pathi? Ava entha thappum pannalai! Nadanthathula en pangu irunthathu; naanum oru Karanam. Ennai kattikittathu than ava panna ore thappu.

Vim: Sari! Appo Abi panna thappu ungalai nambinathuthangareenga! Neenga panna thappukku ungalukku jailukulla thandanai kidaichuthu; Abi pannathukku avalukku jailukku velila kidiachuthu. Sari! Ippo neenga antha thappai thirumbi seiveengala? Seiveenganna, neenga Abi ungalai mannikkanumnu ethir pakkarathu thappu! Neenga antha thappa seyya matteenganna, Abi mattum ava panna thappai eppadi thirumba seyyanumnu ethirpaakkareenga?

V: Periamma! ippadi ketta eppadi? Appuram naanga rendu perum ippadiye irukka vendiyathu thana? Pondatti irunthum pullai irunthum naan orutharum illama irukkanuma? Neengale Abikku ennai kitta sekkathennu solluveenga pola?

Vim: Naan ithai sei athai seinnu unga kittayo Abikittayo sollave matten. Neenga rendu perum chinna pasanga kidaiyathu. Naan oru torch lightnu vechukkunga! Iruttula velicham than kattuven. Poga vendiya vazhiya kandu pidichu poga vendiyathu neenga than. Ithellam sollikuduthu seyya koodathu! Unga rendu perukkum nadula irukkara anbukku athu asingam.

V: Appo engalukkulla anbu irukkunnu nambareengala?

Vim: Unga anbula mattum illai, unga rendu per melayum enakku nambikkai irukku Athu illaina unga kitta ippadi pesikittu irukkamatten! Sari! Sollunga! Ava kitta sollittu pogalai! Jail lenthu letter ethachum potteengala?

V: Jailla namma anuppara ellathaiyum padichu pappanga! Ithu engalukkulla irukka thanippatta vishayam mattum illai; ithula vera oruthar ragasiyamum irukku! Athanala naan letter podalai!

Vim: Sari!  Velila vanthuttu avalai contact panneengala?

V: Unga annan unga kitta sollaliya, naan vanthu pathennu?

Vim: Avar sonnathu irukkattum! Naan unga vaayala nadanthathai kekka virumbaren. Avaru enna irunthalum Abiyoda Appa! Avaru thappa sollirukkalam illaiya?

V: Naan nera avunga veetukku than ponen! Appo than avaru Abi enga pappava kalaichutta; Oorla vittum kankanama poittannu sonnaru!

Vim: Appuram! Neenga thedi poneengala?

V: En kuzhanthaiya vendamnu konnava enakkum venamnu naa thedi pogalai periamma! Appo en mananilai appadi!

Vim: Ava kuzhanthaiya kalaichiruppannu nambiteenga! Eppadi oru tharam enga Annan sonnathum nambineenga? Ungalai kolai pazhila kaithu panninappa, neengale unga vaayala othukkitta pothum, Abi unga mela thappu illainnu nambina illaiya? Athan enga Annan unga lawyera vathadinaru! Appo neenga eppadi Abi unga kuzhanthaiya konniruppannu nambineenga? Avungappa sonnarunna?

V: Amanga! Avungappa oru periya judge! Athanala avaru en poi sollapporarunnu ninaichen!

Vim: Judge agarathukku munnadi enga Annan lawyer. Vakkeel ellam oru case jayikkanumnu evvalavo poi solluvanga! Enga annan oru nermaiyana vakeel than! Ana avaru client mela thappu illainnu thonichunna, vera vazhi illainna poi kooda solluvaru! Evvalavo court case-nnu pathirukkeenga! Ungalukku ithu theriyatha? En unga lawyers kooda ungalukka poi sollirukkalam. Illainnu sollunga?

Vetri is silent.

Vim: Sari romba nerama pesareenga! Keezha oru coffee kudichuttu ennai Ekambareswarara pakka koottitu ponga! Antha kovil enakku romba pidikkum. Anga amaithiya pesa niraiya edam irukku! Oru 5 nimishathula keezha varen. Thanni bottle mattum eduthukkunga! Abittayum sollidalam.

Vetri and Athai go down. Abi is working on the sofa. And Sudar is coloring next to her.

Vim: Abimma! Enakku Ekambareswarar kovilukku poganum. Ippo sayanthiram nadai thiranthiruppanga! Naan poittu varen enna!

A: Thaniyava poreenga! Iruttidum vera! Kathala seekiram polama? Naan office porathukku munnadi poittu varalam. Neengalum naanum poi romba naalachu!

Vim: Abi! Munnadi nee en marumaga mattum than. Enga vena suthalam. Ippo nee Collector! nee vantha antha amarkkalam than irukkum. Naan unkitta eppavum solluvene, yaathum suvadu padamalnu Appar swamy sonna mathirinnu, appadithan enakku ponum. Ippo than Vetri irukkare! Avaru kootittu pomattara?

A: Athai! Avanukku kadavul nambikkai ellam kidaiyathu athai! Athuvum avan kovilukku ponale ethavathu vivakaaram than izhuthuttu varuvan! Suvadu padamal ponumna vetri kooda pogave koodathu!

V: (muttering) naan izhuthuttu vanthathulaye periya vivakaaram nee than!

Abi hears this and glares at him. Vetri returns her look. 

S: Illaiye! Enkooda Simba varuvane! Simba namma Nandhi Samiya kooda paathome! Avaru than naan kettatha enakku innum kodukkalai! Ana nallathu than! Athanala Abi sad agiduva! Athanala enakku athu venam!

Vetri looks very sad and Abi looks at both of them and realizes what Sudar meant. She looks away.

Vim: Nee ennada ketta?

S: Athuva ...

Abi wants to divert the topic.

A: Nee eppodi Vetri kooda kovilukku pona? Enakku theriyama engellam suthineenga?

S: Athuva athu eppavo ponom! Romba naal munnadi! Simbakkum Kanmanikkum Kalyanam achu ana agaliye! Athukku munnadi! Illai illai! Namakku accident ache! Athukkum munnadi!

V: Ei! Paappa! Shh...

Vim: Ennathu? Enna sonna?

V(mv: iyo! Abiya maatta porannu patha namakku balla thiruppi vidarale! Kudumbama round katti adikkarangale! Innikku kovilukku porathukku munnadiye archanai, abishegam ellam enakku nadakka povuthu! Udamabai irumba akkikoda Vetri!) Athu onnum illai Periyamma! Pappa etho solra! Neenga kandukkatheenga.

Vetri looks embarrassed at Abi and Abi glares at him. Vetri squirms.

Vim: Illai! Neenga neliyaratha paathale etho irukkunnu theriyuthu. Sudar! Nee sollu Chellam! Simbakku kalyanam achu ana agalainna ennada? Athu yaaru Kanmani? Unakku theriyuma? Abi! Unakku theriyumaa? Sudar kooda sappidarache Kanmani veedunnu solla vantha! Abi cut panninale! Vetri! Ithu enna? Ivvalo neram pesinom! Enkitta sollave illaiye? Abi! Enna nadakkuthu?

A: Athai! Enakku therinju Kanmani than Vetriyoda lawyer. Mathathellam neenga Vetriya than kekkanum!

Vetri looks at her pleadingly and Abi ignores him.

Vim: Unakkum theriyuma? Sari than!

S: Paatti!  Enakku nallave theriyum. Naan than Simbatta Kanmaniya kalyanam pannikkonnu sonnen! Avan munnadi romba sad-a irunthan.  Appo Kanmani sonna Simba kalyanam pannina happy-a iruppannu! Athanala naan Kanmaniya kalyanam pannikkonnu sonnen! Vijimmavukku kooda ithu theriyume?

Viji just enters with coffee for Athai and Abi.

Viji: Iyo! Sudar! athellam mudinchu ponathu! Ithai poi paatti kitta sollikkittu! Neenga coffee kudichuttu kovilukku kilambunga! Naanum vena kooda varattuma? Vetri! Ungalukku tea pottu eduthuttu varen.

Vim: Illai illai! Abikkum velai irukku! Sudarukku ethavathu venumna Nee othasaiya iru. Naan Vetri koodave poren. Avaru ippo than flaskla iruntha tea kudicharu! Appadi venumna naanga vazhila ethavathu kudichukkarom. Vanga Vetri!

S: Patti! Enakkaga Nandhi Samitta message solreengala? Last time engappava autola vanthu enkooda irukka sonnen! Ana ippo avaru varalainna paravallannu sollidunga!

Everyone look shocked an concerned. Athai recovers first. 

Vim: Enda Chellam appadi solra? Ungappava Unakku pakka vendama?

S: Enakku asaiyathan irukku! Ana avaruthan Abiya azha vecharu illai! Avar Abi venamnu thane ponaru! Abiya venamnu sonnavaru enakkum venam. Athan anuppatheengannu solla vanthen.

Vim: Abi! Ennada ithu? Pappa ennada solra?

A: Sudar! Unakku vara vara vai romba jasthiya pochu! Akka! Neengalum ippo ivanum kodukkara Chellam than.

Vi: Abi! Ava valanthuttu vara! Un ponnu! Unnai vida yosikkara! Ennai sollathe.

Vim: Sari! Sari! Muthalla naan kovilukku poi unga ellarukkagavum vendikkaren! Abi! Unkitta naan appurama pesaren. Nalai marunaal leavu thane Unakku! Appo pesalam. Neenga vanga Vetri! Namma pora vazhila pesikitte polam.

Vetri goes to start his jeep and Athai walks with him. They hear Abi telling Sudar that she is talking beyond her age and Athai gives him a smirk.

Vim: Padma Anni Abitta ithethan solluva! Thinam thinam ava Ammatta ethavathu vakkuvatham pannitte iruppa! Annan appavume pasanga buthisalithanama pesaratha thadukka koodathunnu solluvaru! Hmmm.

V: Naan motha mothalla Sudartta pesarache enakku Abitta pesara mathiri than irunthathu! Athe mathiri pattu pattunu pesina!

Vim: Sari pecha maathaatheenga. Mothallenthu varuvom. Neenga enga thangi irukkeenga? Yaaru intha kanmani? Eppo intha kalyanan nadakkama pochu? Kalyanam varaikkum erpadu panneenganna divorce vangiteengala? Naan innum divorce vangalainnu ninaichen! Enakku onnume puriya mattenguthu! Oorukku vanthathulenthu naan kelvi padarathu ethuvume sariyave illai. Irunga irunga! Neenga nalanju kelvi onna ketta mazhuppiduveenga! Mothal kelvi. Neenga enga thangi irukkeenga? Inga Abiveetula ippo thangi irukkennu sollidatheenga! Nijamma ungalai scale-ala adichuduven!

V: Naan ippo  Sudar sonna antha Kanmani veetula than thangi irukken. Abi sonnale athu than. Kanmani our advocate; ennoda lawyer. Naan than ava kudumbam romba kashtathula irukkarache law padikka vechen. Jail lenthu vanthappuram ava veetula than irukken.

Vim: Sari ippo konja neram munnadi yaaro oru ponnukku padippukku panam kodutheengale? Antha mathiriya? Appo next avunga veetula poi thanguveengala? Intha mathiri niraiya pera padikka vekkareengannu thonuthu! Avunga veetulellamum thanguveengala? Illai intha Kanmani mattum specialla?

V: Periamma! enna pesareenga? Naane intha vishayathula adipattu nonthu poirukken! Neenga vera kuthi kilaratheenga?

Vim: Neenga nonthu poirukkeengala? Ungalaye malai mathiri nambina enga ponna vechikittu athe oorla neenga innoru ponnoda kalyaanam varaikkum poveenga! Antha ponnu vettulaye thanguveenga! Ketta nonthu poirukkennu solveenga! Sari! Ithai sollunga! Antha ponnu kazhuthula thaliyavathu kattittu ava kooda irukkeengala illai athuvum illaiya?

V: Periamma! Neengangarathunala chumma vidaren! Ithe vera yaaranum solliruntha avvalothan!

Vim: Enna pannuveenga? Adippeengala? Illai vandilenthu thalli viduveengala? Chumma bayam kattatheenga! En kelvikku bathil sollunga first! Naan ennamo Abiyum neengalum pidivatham pidichikittu thaniya irukkeengannu ninaichen. Inga sikkal romba athigama irukku! Ava ennadanna petha kuzhanthaiyai yaaro pullainnu sollikkittu thiriyara! Antha pullai Ammavaiyum Appavaiyum koodave vechikittu Abi, Simbannu koopitikittu irukka!  Neenga ennadanna yaaraiyo kalyanam pannikka thayara irunthirukkeenga; ava koodave irukkeenga! Ithula rendu perum periya padippu padichavanga vera! Ungalukku paadam sollikodutha vathiyar ellam avamanthula thookula thonganum!

V: Periamma! konjam amaithiya irunga! Naane ellathayum solren. Kovil vanthuduchu! Koottam varathukkulla sami pathuttu pesalam. Vanga!

Vim: Neenga thappikkalamnu mattum ninaikkaatheenga! Nijamma sudaroli mathiri oru kuzhanthai ungalukku intha Ekambaranathane kodithirukkaru! Veetukku muthal kuzhanthai! Athai kondadi vechukka theriyama ellarum senthu antha kuzhanthai vazhkailla vilayadareenga! Neenga rendu perum than ippadi irukkeenganna, unga  renduperoda Appa, Amma, Annan yaarume antha kuzhanthaikkaga ethuvum seyyara mathiri illai. Naan ippo mudivu pannitten. Intha tharam evvalo naalaanalum inga thangi unga ellarttayum pesama naan poga porathillai. Archanai thattum maalaiyum vangittu polam vanga!

V: Periamma! neenga solrathu ellam sari! Ana onne onnu mattum sollunga! Neenga irukkara varaikkum naanum unga kooda Abi veetula irukkalama? Athukku mattum unga marumagaltta permission vangi koduthidunga!

Vim: (giving him an exasperated and angry look) Vetri! Ungalai naan inga adichennu vechikkunga unga manam mothama paranthudum. Mariyathaiya idakku pesama vanga!

They both go into the temple.

Preview: Kamala meets Vimala in the next episode.

To be contd.

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AN: Hope you all like this Athai! I appreciate all your comments and votes.

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