Criminal Hearts

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"Love can be a crime, but when two criminal hearts meet, justice prevails." Presenting My 2nd Romance/Thrille... अधिक

Introduction & Character Aesthetics
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Epilogue

Chapter 1

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Person 1: 'Bhai ye lot aaj ke aaj nikal jana chahiye... Pichli bar tumne der kar di thi aur dant mujhe padi this sir se...'

Person 2: 'Tu bilkul tension mat le yaar.. bas thodi der rukja... ye ilaka thoda sunsaan ho jane de fir bass... hum dheere dheere sara saman load kar lenge...'

Person1: 'Ohh bhai zara dhyaan se ...sara maal antique hai. Kuch bhi toota na, to sir hame tod denge.....samajha na tu??'

Person 2: 'Aree haan re theek hain theek hain ... vaise ek bat bata...tu ye smuggling ke business main aa kese gaya, darpok tha na tu??'

Person 1: 'Aree dheere bol pagal... koi sun lega!!'

A person, who was the khabri was listening to all of this, hiding behind the trees.  After escaping from there safely he came to an isolated area and dialed a number. . .

On call:

Khabri: 'Hello sir...'

Chief: 'Haan bolo kya khabar hai?'

Khabri: 'Sir, mein yahan chor bazaar ke pass vale jungle se bat kar raha hun. Yahan bohot bade level pe smuggling chal rahi hai, antics ki. Aaj raat ko bhi ek lot nikalne vala hai.'

Chief: Accha. Aur kuch?

Khabri: 'No sir,  baki information main pendrive main dal ke kal morning tak apke pass bhijva dunga.

Person: Sure, no problem. Kisi ne tumhe dekha to nahi na, ya kisi aur pe shak..? 

Khabri: 'No sir bilkul nahi.'

Chief: 'Well done ab tum vahan se nikalo!'
                               
Khabri: 'Jai Hind Sir!!'

Chief: 'Jai Hind!!'

Call Cut

Next morning

A car was moving with full speed on the road as the person who was driving the car was late for his duty. Finally after 20 minutes of super-fast driving he parked his car and entered into a building which was totally safe from any kind of threat.  

Yes the building was the CBI Bureau. 

He directly approached towards the Chief's Cabin.

Him: 'May I come in Sir?'

Chief: 'Finally, my best officer is here...! Mr. Krish Mehra. . . What made you so late today?'

Krish: 'Jai hind sir!.. I'm really very sorry. Actually there was some work at home that's why I couldn't reach on time. But, is there anything serious sir?'

Chief: 'It's Alright. Yes, there is something serious going on currently, jispe we need to focus.'

Krish: 'What happened sir?'

Chief: 'Serious smuggling of antics has been going on in the city since a while. I got this info last night and further info, I am yet to recive.'

Krish: 'Sir, this is a serious issue. We quickly need to to do something about this.'

Chief: 'Yes, that's why I called you. Now you do one thing...Gather all your team members, and see what you all can do, till then I will collect the info in the pen drive and then give it to you.'

Krish: 'Ok sir.'

Chief: 'Also, Krish, one more thing. A very talented and dedicated officer is coming here from another CBI branch. She will also join the team from tomorrow.'

Krish: 'Ok sir, no problem. Jai Hind!!'

Chief: 'Jai Hind!!'

After this conversation Krish left the Chief's Cabin and went to his own Cabin where his whole team was waiting for him. 

He entered sat down on the chair in frustration.

Avinash: 'So, why is Mr. Mehra so late this time??'

Krish: 'Mein tereko yeh sab baad mein batata hoon. Abhi apan, jo naya case aaya hai uske baare mei baat kar lete hai.'

Ajay: 'Haan Krish. Tell us what the chief told you.'

Krish: 'Dekho guys, city mei bahut bade level pe antiques ka smuggling chal rha hai and, we need to find the main culprit behind this.'

Aarohi: 'But, hamare paas koi bhi information nhi hai..!'

Krish: 'Koi na... Chief, mujhe thodi der mein pen-drive de denge jisme saari info, hume mil jaayegi. We'll start our investigations tomorrow as ek nayi officer aane wali hai, kal, in our team.'

Rhea: 'Oh that's great. Uska naam kya hai waise?'

Krish: Mujhe woh nhi pata, and Rhea Madam, let us focus on the case we have got, and not on the officer's name who is not even present here!!'

(Rhea frowns)

Krish: 'So, thik hai, apan jo info hamare level pe collect kar sakte hai, woh collect karna chalu kar hi sakte hai...till we don't get the pen-drive from the chief'

Everyone agrees, and go to work. 

Krish, too starts his work with complete focus and soon, in the evening, he gets the pen-drive from the chief. He analyses and studies all information in detail...

Around 8 p.m.:

Avinash: 'Bas kar Krish...kitna kaam karega?? Ghar nhi jana kya? Saari raat yahi pe rukne ka iraada hai? Sab already chale gaye'

Krish: (while furiously typing on his Mac) 'Sab chale gaye, toh tu yahan kya kar rha hai?'

Avinash: Yaar, meri car start nhi ho rhi...kal mechanic ko deni padegi. Toh, mei tujhse lift mangne ke liye aaya tha, but tera aaj modd nhi hai yaha se hilne ya jaane ka...'

Krish: (while closing his Mac) 'Lo ji, band kar dia kaam, aur aapka hukum maan liya. Koi aur hukum hai toh woh bhi bata dijiye Avinash Sahab!'

Avinash: 'Badi meherbani hogi, agar aap hume aapki gadi mei baithakar ghar chod denge, warna hum dhoondenge koi cab. . .'

Krish: 'Oyee, bas kar nautanki...Tu lift maang rha hai ya bheek?? Vese bhi tu mera bhai jaisa hai...Tu gaadi uthake bhi le jaayega na, fir bhi mei kuch nhi kahunga'

Avinash: 'Finally....Krish mood pe waapis aagya tu'

Krish: 'What is this Krish Mode??'

Avinash: 'Pahle yaha se chal, fir bataunga.'

In the car:

Krish, was driving the car silently lost in his thoughts...When, suddenly, Avinash bombarded him with his questions...

Avinash: 'Sunna Krish, TU AAJ SUBHAH MUH FULAAKE KYU GHUM RHA THA?'

Krish: 'Yarrr, tu na kisi din mere kaan phad ke hi dam lega.'

Avinash: 'Dekh bhai, zyada mat bol aur bata mujhe ki kya chal rha hai??'

Krish: 'Aree vahi yaar...Meri mummy and dadi ko ek hi bukhar chada hua hai utar hi nahi raha.'

Avinash: 'Hainn..? Aisa kaisa bukhar hai unko?  Tu davai dennaa dono ko!!

Krish: 'Aree bhai dawai unke liye hai... Mere liye to zahar hai!!!'

Avinash: 'Dekh pahelian mat bujha. seedhe seedhe bata, kya hua hai?'

Krish: 'Yaarr meri shaadi karane ke peeche pade huye hain dono...Mujhe nhi karni shaadi..'

(Avinash bursts out laughing)

Avinash: 'Bhai, to tu itni si baat pe muh bana ke ghoom raha hai..hahaha'

Krish: 'Bhai, tere liye itni si baat hogi mere liye bohot bada problem hai.. Mujhe nahi phasna in sab cheezon main abhi..

Avinash: 'Dekh bhai, baat to teri bhi sahi hai, but koi na, tu try karta reh ek din jeet teri hi hogi' 
The car was moving in a good speed...

Idhar, ek sunsaan raste par, a girl was walking alone with a bag. She was normally walking, but suddenly 3 men started following her. This did not affect her and she continued walking. 

Man1: 'Madam help chahiye...? Hum hain na, hum bag utha lete hain aapka...'
She didn't respond and continued walking

Man2: 'Aree... badi strong lagti hai madam...'

Girl:(in mind) 'ye mere haanth se peet ke hi maanenge..'

Man3: 'Are madam hum bol rahe hain na, hum help kar dete hain...'

Girl: 'Maine aapse help maangi?...nahi na.... to apna kaam karo.....(she again started walking)

Meanwhile Krish's car was crossing from that road and Avinash asked him to stop the car.

Avinash: 'Bhai car rok!'

Krish: 'Kya hogya..?'

Avinash: 'Voh udhar dekh voh 3 bande ladki ko tang kar rahe hain... Chal help karte hai'

Krish: 'Ruk pehle dekh to sahi, kya ho rha hai...'

One man held her hand and stopped her...
Now that was it... she totally fumed in anger.

She jerked his hand and he directly fell on the road...

In the car

Avinash: 'Dum hain bhai ladki mein...'

Krish didn't say anything, rather he was just silently observing her moves. . .

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