Unnai Pirinthal.....(If I Sep...

By Halcyon_g

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Two families were on downstairs waiting for the couple who went to talk alone....both of their parents were t... More

Prologue
Characters
I want Daughter
Shiva......
who is he...
Mother's Love.....
Nila....
Found her... but...
Yov Grey shirt uh....
Don't make people wait.....
What's mine....
Do you still want me in your life???
Is that possible....
Crazy.....
Gowri - The treasure
How are you sure.....
It was me who was obsessed
Treat me like your wife....
First Day...
Moments to be cherished...
Time has more power..
Romance 🧐🧐🧐😜...
Samaikaporom -ft. Mynthu and her appa
I saved for our daughter
Different yet same.......

Yours alone

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By Halcyon_g

Author's POV..

Gowri was working in her office she was tired too...untill her phone ringtone disturbed her

"Maarbodu pinni kondu
Mani mutham enni kondu
Madiodu veedu katti
Kaadhal seiguven
Udal konda aasai alla
Uyir konda aasai endhan
Uyir pogum munnal
Vazhvai vetri kollume"

(Knitting to the chest
Counting the your kisses
 I will Build a house on lap and will  make love.
Its not the desire of body ;its the desire of my soul
Before my life goes away
I will conquer life )

All her tiredness went away just by the ringtone because she knows who it is..... With a bright smile he picks the call...

Gowri : Athukula kelambitiya.....
Enaku inum inga office la vela mudiyira mariye therila inum half and hour agum...
Mudinjathum tan nu veliya vandhurein pick up paniko da....

Aparm amma vera call panite irukanga ena nu therila....konja nala vetla kalyana pechi adipaduthunu sona la athuva kuda irukalam.....
Atha call attend panama irukein... And....

(is your work done this soon.....

I am packed up here it might take me half an hour more to leave ....I will call you once I am done you come and pick up me.......I don't know what is the matter amma is calling me non stop.....in recent times there is some talks going on about my marriage may be its might me that ....that's why I didn't attend her call ...and..... )

Shiva : shhhhhhhh..... Calm down..... Nala mocha iluthu vidu..... Konjam achu gap vidri..... And ethana mura solrathu unaku yarachu call pana hello nu solu athuku bathila ipadi moochu vidama peasatha nu

(shhhhhhhhhh....calm down....take a deep breath .....leave some gap while talking dii....and how many times I should tell you ....if someone calls first you should say hello )

Gowri : ama na hello sona tha yar nu unaku theriyuma... Na evlo mukiyamana visayam solitu iruka unaku hello solathathuthan perusa theriyutha eruma madu...

Thadithandavaraya..... Enaku nee manners soli tharatha shameless fellow......

(yeah sir only recognize me if I say hello right.....buffelo I said that much important issue all you care about was the missing hello.....Thadithndavaraya....you are teaching me manners?? shameless fellow )

Shiva : yei...yeii.... Pothum di apram ena thitalam ipo konjam ena pesa vidu...

(Yeii yeii....that's enough dii ....you can scold me whenever you want... now let me speak..)

Gowri : ipo ena pesanum  atha ena pick up pana vara la apo pesikalam.....

(Now what you want to speak....tell me when you come to pick me up now leave it..)

Shiva : actually.... Athu......

Gowri : Inaiku vara mudiyathu nu sona savadichruvein da unaiya...

One week achu una pathu rendu perume busy ah irukom... Inaiku tha time kedachathunu patha... Iniaikum mudiyathu nu sola pora athane....Enata pesave pesatha... Phone ah vai...

(I will kill you if you say you can't come today too.....

its been a week I didn't see in you in presence we both were busy ....today only we got some free time and you are going to say no now right...don't talk to me ....cut the call)

Shiva : Eiii chellama... Enaku mattum ena aasai ilaiya dii.... Even I am missing you badly... Nethu unga vetu compound sever la eri kuthichu vantha una paka... Nee family oda etho function ku poita.....

(Yeii chellama..even I am dying to see you dii....I am missing you badly.....I even surpassed  your house compound wall and entered into your room climbing the pipe yesterday...you already left for some function with your family.. )

Gowri : Na unaku call pana nee edukala aparam message panitu thane ponein...

Athulam pakama vetuku una yar vara sona... Anga Vanthutu phone pana na ena pandrathu morning tha nanga thirumbi vanthom...Unakelam ethuku phone iruku ne therila.....

(I called you idiot you didn't pick up then I message you regarding the function before I leave....who asked you to ignore them and come to empty house and call me after that...we came back morning only ....I have noo idea why you even have a phone that's useless...)

Shiva : Sari sorry dii... En phone switch off anathe na pakala anga poi tha on pana

(okay sorry dii...my phone switched off that's why I didn't saw your message and i noticed only after reaching there...)

Gowri : Ama sir en room la thane charge eh poteinga....

(Yeah sir charged your phone in my room only right)

Shiva : Solra la phone ah kavanikala nu...... Un room la night fulla wait pana atleast ne varuva pathutu  poidalam nu ana madam ku tha en mela akaraiye ilaiye direct ah office poita.....

Just miss un amma sound kudukama kathava thoranthurutha ne tha nu nenachu avangala hug pani kiss panirupa...

(I am saying right I didn't noticed......and I waited for you whole night expecting you would come at least in the morning but madam went to office directly .....

just miss if your mother didn't gave sound before entering your room I might have thought her as you and kissed her )

Gowri : Karumam karumam.... Vaya kaluvu da...

Nala  vela en amma thapichanga.... Ila Ramakrishna oda janaki ore kooti panjathu vachurukum....Una yar da angaiye paduthu thonga sona... Na tha sona la morning direct ah office appa kutitu poga chance iruku oru important meeting nu.... Apove poga vendiyathu thane...

(karumam karumam....wash your mouth...

god's grame my appa escaped or else Ramakrishna's Janaki would have gathered the ground and kept a panjayath there itself....who asked you sleep there itself man....I said you right as there was important meeting me and appa might go to office directly....why didn't you left then itself )

Shiva : Solluva di.. Avlo tired laiyum compound sever eri kuthichu pipe la pudichu eri vanthu patha nee ila.... Pasi vera thirumba kela poga thembila.... Tired la angaiye paduthutein dii.....

(why won't you ask like this.....it was me who climbed both wall and pipe eventhough I was already hell tired...I was hungry and surely didn't have that much energy left in me to climb down again and go somewhere to eat....eventually I slept due to tiredness)

Gowri : dei.... Ethachu saptiya ilaiya... Call pandrapove soliruntha na shanthi akka kita soli veta thorathu unaku ethachu senju thara solirupein la....

En room la iruntha snacks lam kayal saptuta da.. Fill pana maranthutein.... Romba pasiya..... Sorry da....

(Deii  did you ate something or  not....if you said yesterday when you called I might have called Shanthi akka she would have came inside cooked something for you right...

Kayal finished all the snacks in my room da...I thought of refilling it but forgot.....were you that much Hungry.....sorry da..  )

She said sadly..... She knows he can't withstand hunger...... Shiva didn't liked her sad tone he knows she will be cursing herself for yesterday... Even it's not her mistakes....

Shiva : Aiii.. Ethuku ipo sad agura.... Naa kalaila en amma senja idliya oru kattu katitu tha dii office pona....

You have nothing to do with that... Enaku kolupu na phone ah pakala...

(yeii why are you getting sad now...I ate almost 12 idlies cooked by my dear mother for breakfast after coming back from your house......you have nothing to do with that....its my fault that I didn't checked my phone..)

Gowri : Nejama saptiya da....

(you are telling the truth right.....)

Shiva : ama dii... Nee athaiye yosikatha vidu....

(yess.....you don't overthink about the same now...)

Gowri :hmmm ..
Sari nee etho sola vanthiye ena...

(hmmmm.......okay you said you want to tell me something right what is that...)

Shiva : Ipovachu kekanumnu thonuche.....

(Atleast now you asked )

Gowri : Soli thola da....

(just say it da...)

Shiva : Nala mariyatha dii....

(Good respect dii..)

Gowri : Etho sir mattum va ma poma nu pesura mari solra..... Ena solanumo atha solu da pakki....

(Don't ask like you address me as come maa go ma...what ma.........shut that nonsense and tell me da pakki ...)

Shiva : Sirapu..... Sari... As you guessed inaiku nama meet pandra plan la en amma mana alli potutanga atha sola tha call pana...

(Wonderful.....okay...as you guessed my mother spilled  water in our date plan...I called you to inform the same )

Gowri : apdi ena da pananga....

(what she did??)

Shiva : therila dii na ipo office la irunthu kelambanum.... Udane va nu call... Enaku therila poi patha tha theriyum.....

(No idea...I have to leave from office now ...and she informed me I called you immediately after that....I can get to know only when I reach there)

Gowri : ena da unga veetla ponu paka arambichitangala..... Mavane ena thavira yaru kaluthulaiyachu thali kattuna.. Angaiye un kathaiya close panitu nanum sethu poiduvein.....

(what man did you family started searchig for anyother girl for you.....if by chance you let anyone else in your life except me .....I will kill you first then kill myself )

Shiva : aiiii ena di pechu ithu...... Na unkuda life fulla valanum di.... Ena nambu di neeye sonalum na una vitu poga matein.... Enaku nee mattum tha diii wife uh....

(yeiii what kind of talks is this....I wanted spend my whole life with you....trust me even if you say yourself I won't leave you .....you will be my only wife forever)

Gowri : Athu nyabagam iruntha sari.... Okay en attha wait panitu irupanga nee kelambu... Romba neram avangala wait pana vaikatha da...

(its good you remember....okay go home fast don't make my mother in law wait more )

Shiva : Saringa madam.....

(your wish ...madam)

Gowri : hmmm....

Shiva : Chellama....

Gowri : ena da..

Shiva : I love you diii...

Gowri : hmmm

Shiva : Thirupi solri..

(say it back dii)

Gowri : Thonuna solren.... Ne phone ah vachitu vandi otu.....

(I will tell you when I want....now cut the call and concentrate on the road )

Shiva : sari bye...

He said in grumpy tone making her role her eyes at his childishness...

Within a second she recived call from her mother asking her to come home...

Gowri felt suspicious still she went home early only to be begged by her mother to change in to saree and get ready for the bride visit....

She was angry but couldn't say anything seeing her mother's tears... But she was determined to make that groom ran away and never think about coming back....

She went to her room and tried to call him several times but he didn't pick up..... She throws the mobile in anger and got ready in a simple Saree.....
Even though her mother insists her to wear some jewelry.. But her single glare was enough to make her shut......

The grooms family has arrived kayal was with Gowri she said only the grooms parents are there not much group... And the groom was handsome too..

Nothing went inside Gowri's mind... All she thought was how to make that groom ran away from her house...

Within few minutes her mother came in to take Gowri with her....

When she saw the groom.... She was shocked..... Even his reaction was no less he was looking at her with wide eyes.....

He was suspicious when they entered through her house route itself.... He wanted to call her but his bad his mother already took his mobile from him and kept with her after putting it in silent mode....

Gowri was glaring at him with atmost anger.  .

She thought all this was his plan and he was playing with her..... Poor him who was same like her forced by her mother to come along... He had no clue about it.....

But he knows by the look she was giving him.. .. She misinterpreted everything and going to goast him. For sure..... He was pleading with his eyes... But that didn't worked.....

He was fully panicked when her father asked him to talk with her alone in her room....

He was at the top of nervousness.... It's not that he was going to her room it's actually very familiar for but nervous to face her alone...... Gulping the lump he followed her till she went inside the room...

She locked it once when he was inside..... Thankfully her room is soundproofed.....

Two families were on downstairs waiting for the couple who went to talk alone....both of their parents were tensed and nervous about the answers they going get....

Here inside her room... She was chasing him with a pillow to hit him... He was trying to escape from her beating......

Gowri :Dei thadimadu nilu daa.... Inaiku en kaiyala tha unaku savu"

(Thadimadu-bulkycow...

Dei thadimadu stop there.... Today your going to die in my hands)

Shiva :Aieee chellama naa ethume panala dii... Sathiyama enaku theriyathu una ponu paka tha kotitu varanga nu 

(Aiyeeee chellam... I didn't do anything dii..... Trust me I have no idea they brought me here to meet the bride which turned out to be you....)

Gowri : Apo na ilama vera oru pona paka poviro...... Setha da ne...

(Ohhh sir would be happy if it's some one else ah...... You are dead...)

Shiva: Apdi mean panala dii.... Please nambu.. Enaku theriyama tha kotitu vanthanga

(I didn't mean that way dii.... Please trust me they took me here with out telling me anything)

Gowri:En vetuku vara vali unaku theriyathu... Huhhh...... Night la pipe pudichu eri varapo mattum theriuuma da.. 

(Ohh you don't know the route to my house... Huhhh.... You only know how to climb the pipe and come to my room At nights right....)

Shiva : Aeiiiiii ila di na unga vetuku vara route la varapove doubt vanchu ana theriyathu di enaku.......

Wait nama actually ipo happy ah irukanum... Parents ah convince pandra vela micham... Nama poi nama love matter ah solrathuku munadi avangale namaku arrange marriage pana poranga

(Aeiiii.... No I was actually Suspicious when the car came in this route....but trust me I don't know about this beforehand...

Wait we supposed to be happy... We don't have to convince our parents for our marriage they themselves arranged it....)

She sat on the bed.,. He came and sat beside her taking heavy breaths.... Actually he was just acting which was stopped by her single glare.....

Gowri : Ama la na atha kavanikave ila da ....
Avnagala convince pandra vela micham....

Wait....... Namaku kalyanam aga poguthu da......

(Yeah.... You are right.. I didn't thought about that da ....they saved our time .....wait ....we are getting married da.....)

She turned towards him and said with much excitement...... He smiled at her..... And was about to hug her only to be stopped by her .....

Shiva : Ena dii...

Gowri : Elam kalyanathuku aparm tha....

(Only after marriage )

Shiva : Etheyyyy

(whatttt)

Gowri : ama.... Marriage mudiyura vara en mela un kai pada, kudathu

(yes...till our marriage no touching )

Shiva : aeiiii ena dii... Ithu lam aniyayam... Etho ithuku munadi na hug kiss la panatha mari solra...

Ithe room la thane 2 years munadi nama first kiss panom... Athu correct ah antha window pakathula.....
In fact nee than di en pudichu kiss adicha... Ipo ipaidi solra.... Ithulam othuka mudiyathu bongu....

(aeiiii thats too much.....you say like we never hugged and kissed before this......remember in this very same room 2 years back we shared our first kiss...that too exactly there near the window.....infact it was you who pulled me for an kiss now you are saying no touching.....i won't accept this at all)

Gowri : apdi tha da..... Nee mothala kelambu ingaiye vita nee nirutha matta....

(who cares.....first you leave this room or else you won't stop )

Shiva : atleast cheeks kiss achu kudri....

(Atleast give me cheeks kiss)

Gowri : Athelam mudiyathu.... Va kela polam elam wait panuvanga.... Unaku kiss venum na ena sekiram kalyanam panitu kotitu po...

(no way....now lets go down everyone must be waiting for us......if you want kiss then marry me as soon as possible )

Shiva  : Apo kalyanam agita madam ethukum thada poda mateingala....

(ohh if we are married them madam won't stop me or forbids me ever????)

He asked with mischief.... Making her blush....

Shiva : Solri...... Ethukum thada ilaiya.........

(tell me no boundries right )

She looked at him..... Mischief was visible in his eyes....

Gowri : Ama.... Kalyanam agita naa mulusa unaku mattum tha da  ...... Athe mari neee enaku mattum tha.....

Ipo vaa polam.....

(yesss...if marrige is done I won't stop you because I would be yours and you will be mine completely.....now lets go)

she dragged him towards the stairs who was grinning like an idiot....

Yes after that they both said they are okay.... Due to Shiva's impatience they got married in a month....






Remembering all this......Tear drops fell on the photo of them smiling at each other during he tied the thali around her neck.....

Shiva was sitting alone in thier room with their marriage album.... Where his chellama was smiling and laughing whole heartedly....

He creased her face......

In the next picture she was leaning near his saying something while he was holding the thali in his hand

He clearly remember those words she said...

"Nala yosichiko da.... Ipo en kaluthula intha thali erita kalam fulla naa tha un wife... Ena thavira yarukum antha edam kedaiyathu.   "

(think once again da.....if you tied this thali in my neck then I will be your wife for the rest of your life....no one is allowed to take my place in your life and heart)

"Na kudukavum matein diii .....I am yours alone..."

(I won't allow anyone else dii....I am yours alone )

She smiled at him... He tied that thali around her neck announcing the world she was completely his.....

He smiled at that photo with lot of pain....

Shiva : I am yours alone dii chellama....

Inga elarum nee ena vitum intha ulagatha vitum poita nu solranga..vera oru kalyanam panika solranga di....

But I know nee iruka.... Because I am still alive....En wife nee mattum tha di.... Unaku ena pakanum nu thonave ilaiya......Epadi dii un Shiva va pakama unala iruka mudiyuthu....

Enala suthama mudila diii.... Naraga vethainala iruka....

Enaikachu oru nal una na kandu pudipein dii..... Ilana neeye un Shiva kita odi vanthuduva... I know...

Varuva la........

(I am yours alone dii.......

everyone is  telling me that you left me alone in this world and you are no more and forcing me to marry someone else....

but I know you are alive....because I am still alive .....you are my only wife.....don't want to see me ....how can you be away from your Shiva.....

I couldn't do this anymore....it feels Like I am living in hell....

I will find you one day or else you will run back to me ....I know.......

you will come back right..... )

He asked to her who is smiling at him through the pictures which is hanging all around the room....









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