Mustique Love ( I won't Leav...

By Priya_Pranushka

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40 Years Middle Aged Businessman fall in Love with 20 Years Old Girl..Even He loves her because of Society an... More

Present+ Future = Past (Prologue)
Character Sketch
Nightmare
Journey Start
Businessman, Romeo
Trust
Different Feelings
Blank Cheque & Rs. 23
New Experience
Cheque Vs Trust
Condition
Special Guest
Surprise in the Party
Return Invitation
Train
I Trust Your Trust
King will come for Queen
I'm Surprised
She is Special
My Rocket
Lilly Flowers
Resignation
Hot Sun, Cool Breeze
Payasam
You are Fired
I Need Her
Am I In..?
Bommala Koluvu (Doll Festival)
Did I know You Before!!??
Homam
Promo
Regrettable Promise
Martial Status?
Don't You Know!!
Goodwill?!
Rule No . 8
It's Ok, Sir!!
Precious Girl
Eyes & Heart
Promo
Red..Red..
Rose Petals
Destiny (Maha Chapter)
Coward!!
Sorry!!?
I Love You, Devi!!
I am Blessed!!
Amar Loves Devi!!
Open Office
Horns!!
Sweets Sweeter!!
Real or Illusion
Jealousy Amar
Wings
Rejection
Special for me
I Miss You!!
Evil Arrival
I Miss Her!!
Deep Love
Chitchat
Promo
Disguise
Hours, Minutes, Seconds
Pen!!
Railway Track!!
New Friend!!
Special Service
Sharing
Devi W/O Amarendra Bhushan
Fear
Goodness
Sick
Steaming Love
Secert Room
Proofs
Truth
Realization
Invitation
Signature!?
Shock!!
My Name...?
Keys
Trust Me!!
Past, Present, Future
CEO
Wishes
Nervous
Plan
Problem
Solution
Long Drive
Devi Bhushan
Made for Each Other
Promo
Sugarcane
You, Me & Moon
Who is Devi!!
Confirmation!!
Gadwal!!
Fear!!
Where are You, Devi?
Past or Future
Reaction!!
Promo
Necklace!!
Changing of Emotions
I Know You Before!!
Poor Girl!!
My World!!
Will You Marry me?
Your Smile!!
Locked!!
Romantic!!?
James Bond!!
Worry!!
Devi Chandra Lekha
Promo
Hurts!!
Blood!!
She is My Life!!
My Would be Wife
Mrs. Devi Amarendra Bhushan
Prana Gandam (Threat to Life)!!
Gift to Would be Husband!!
I Swear!!
AâĪD Engagement!!
Promo!!
Evils Obstacles !!
Feelings
Unromantic Girl!!
Curtain Raise of Chandra Lekha
New Story
Candlelight Dinner!!
Wedding Cards!!
Birthday & Deathday!!
Past's Present & Present's Future !!
Prasadam (Sacred Food)
Truth is a Fire
Kukuma!!
You are only My World!!
One Year for "Mustique Love"!!
Anklets!!
Unknown Number!!
Chandra Lekha Room!!
Our Love 💕
I'm only his Love !!
Plan B!!
Amar's Luck!!
Crime Confession!!
Press Meet!!
Fire!!
Beautiful & Handsome!!
Vice Chair Person!!
Property!!?
Mangalasnam (Holy Bath)
Bride & Groom Family!!
Promo
Photo!!
You are only My Life!!
Aaku Vakka (Leaves & Betal Nuts)
Promo (Glimpse of Amar & Chandu)
Chandu's Brother!!
Amar Weds Devi
Heart Attack!!
Rebirth!!
She's My Responsibility!!
Take Care of Her!!
Promo
Heart Beat!!
Second Glimpse of Chandra Lekha!!
Illusion Kiss!!
Suspects!?
My Husband!! My Wife!!
Nervousness!!
Hearty Welcome!!
Separately!?
Promo
Gift!!?
Resembles!!
First Night!?
Promo
Shocking Kiss!!
Resembles of Chandra Lekha
Promo
Jewellery!!?
Burnt Past!!
Glimpse of Amar - Chandu!!
Excessive Love!!
Pariharam (Remedy)!!
Hidden!!
Happy Friendship!!
Princess!!
Happy Independence Day!!
Jitendra's Chammy (Special Glimpse)
Amar's Chandu is Amar's Devi!!
Happy Ganesh Chaturthi..🙏🙏
Connected Lifes!!
Happy Dasara & HBD to Our Sweety's Pabsu!!

Live for me!!

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At Hospital

Inside ICU

Doctors giving treatment to Devi..

On that time, Nurse came with Devi Reports..

Nurse : Doctor..Reports!!

Doctor : Ok!!

Doctor checked Devi Reports and became shock..

Doctor : OMG!! So, This is the Reason for Heart Attack..Now, How to say this to Amar Sir?

Doctor asked Nurse

Doctor : Nurse..Call Amar Sir to my Cabin..It is Emergency!!

Nurse : Ok, Doctor..











Inside Doctor's Cabin

Amar, Jhende came to Doctor Cabin

Amar : Doctor..How is Devi? She is Out of Danger, right?

Doctor : First You take Your Seat, Sir.

Amar : No Formalities..First Tell me, How is Devi?

Doctor felt difficult to say this to Amar..

Doctor : Sir..I don't know How to say this..

Amar : Doctor..Please Tell me..

Doctor : Just now Devi Madam Reports came..In her Blood samples, One Powerful Drug got detected..

Amar and Jhende became shock on heard this..

Doctor : Because of that Drug Overdose, Devi Madam got Heart Attack..

Jhende : What are You talking, Doctor? She didn't have any food, then How it is Possible?

Doctor : We don't know that, Sir..But it is True, Because of that Drug only, She got Heart Attack..

Jhende started thinking about this..

Doctor : Usually This Drug won't available anywhere now..Few Years before, For Emergency Purpose Doctors used to suggest only two Tablets to Heart Patients..That too with Doctor Preception, No one buy this..It is Very Rare Drug..Few Years before, It was banned..I Don't how can anyone get this Drug..

Jhende thinking about this and felt Jitendra did this..

Amar asked Doctor

Amar : Doctor..Tell me straight, How is Devi condition?

Doctor : Sorry to say this, Sir..Devi Madam Condition is Hopeless..

Amar and Jhende became shock on heard this..

Jhende : Doctor?!

Doctor : Sorry, Sir.. Devi Madam is in Medical Support now..But it won't workout after Sometime..

Amar got collapsed on heard this..

Doctor : We are Sorry, Sir!!

Jhende shouted on Doctor

Jhende : What is this, Doctor? This is City's No.1 Hospital, You have Best Specialists Doctors, Best Facilities..How can say this?


Doctor : Sir, You bring her so late, Devi Madam got collapsed when she completely can't able to hold it..And Till now there is no improvement in Devi Madam Condition..If She got saved means It must be Miracle only!!

Amar became broken on heard about Devi condition and came out with sad face..









Outside Cabin

All Family Members asked Amar

Subhadra : Amar..What Doctor said about our Devi condition?

Amar didn't reply to them and went to to ICU where Devi is there

All became worried on seeing Amar like that..

Padhu asked Subbu

Padhu : Subbu..Why Amar Sir didn't reply anything?

On that time, Jhende came out..

Subhadra asked Jhende

Subhadra : Raghava!! What Happened? Why Amar is like that?

Jhende can't able to reply to this..

Subhadra : Tell me, Raghava..Our Devi will be Fine right?

Jhende : Yes, Amma..Nothing will happen to our Devi..Our Love on her will save her..Don't worry..She will be Fine..She will be Fine only!!

Jhende left from there with disappointment..




Inside ICU

Amar came to Devi who lays on Hospital bed with Medical Support..

Amar said to Devi on keeping her hand on her Forehead..

Amar : Devi..You waited for this day we get married..Today we are married.. Now You are My Wife!! Then How can You leave me now..

Amar crying for this..

Amar : In Marriage, You Promised me You won't leave You..You can't leave me like this..I can't take that..


Amar holds Devi hand...

Amar : Even Chandu left me, I was depressed..But If You leave me, I can't live without You..You are My Life!! Devi..You are Eveything to time.. Please don't leave Me!! Don't do this to us..

Amar asked Devi..

Amar : Devi..I never request anyone for anything.. I used to get Whatever I want..This Company, Success, Property, Prestige, Eveything..But First Time, I requesting You "Please Live for me..For us..Please!!"

Amar crying on holding Devi Hands..









At Reception

Nurse gave Patient Files to Receptionist..

Nurse : These are Patient who will Discharge today..

Receptionist checked Files became confuse on seeing Devi file also..

Receptionist : Mrs. Devi Amarendra Bhushan joined in Hospital now only right..Then How can we discharge her today itself?

Nurse : That Madam condition is Hopeless..Already she is medical Support..There is Very less chance to live..

On that time, Subhadra heard this and became shock and shouted

Subhadra : Raghava!!

All Family Members came to Subhadra

Jhende : What Happened, Amma?

Subhadra : Tell me the truth, Is Devi condition is Critical?

Jhende became worried when she asked like that..

Jhende : Amma..Actually that is...

Subhadra : Is Devi condition Hopeless?

All Family Members became worried on heard this.

Subhadra : After talking with Doctor, Amar came out like he lost his Life and That's why he directly went to see Devi..Right?

Jhende : Amma..Actually Doctors said In Devi Blood Reports, they found Powerful Drug..

All became shock and worried for Devi..

Jhende : Devi Condition is Critical..But Doctors are trying..

Padhu, Subbu crying after heard about Devi condition..

Padhu : Ayo..Pedhamma Thali!! Devi is one and Only Daughter to us who born after so many Years of Our Marriage with Your Blessings..She is Your Gift to us..How can You take back Your Gift from us? It is so Unfair!!

Padhu asked Subbu

Padhu : Subbu..More than me, Devi loved You so much, If You call her, She will wake up..Please go and ask, She will listen to You..

Subbu tried to console Padhu..

Loki said to them

Loki : Aunty..Don't Cry..Amar Sir is there right? He won't let anything happen to You..

Hema : Yes..Aunty..For Amar Sir and for Us, Devi will definitely save..

Urmila said to Jhende

Urmila : Jhende..These Doctors can't do anything..Bring Top Doctors from Other Countries..

Prithvi also said to Jhende

Prithvi : Urmila said True..We can't take chance..Bring Top most Doctors for Devi Treatment..

Jhende : Sir..Already So many Doctors came here for Devi Treatment..They are doing their level best..Let's Hope Our Devi will be Fine only!!

Other Side, Preethi feeling guilty on heard this..

Preethi (Inner Voice) : This is all because of me only.. I'm only reason for Devi Condition..I will tell to Jhendiji..

Preethi said to Jhende

Preethi : Jhendiji..I have to tell you something..

On that time, Doctor came to them..

Doctor : Sir..So many People came to see Devi Madam from her Colony..Please someone of You come and talk with them..

Subbu said to Jhende

Subbu : Jhende Sir..We go and talk with them..

Jhende : Ok..Subbu Garu..


At Police Station

Jitendra shouted on Police

Jitendra : Listen..I have go to Hospital to save my Sister..Let me Go!!


Police : We can't do that..You are charged with high charges..You won't get bail also..

Jitendra : Hey..If anything happen to my Sister, I will blast this Police Station..

Police : Do Whatever You can!! We won't scare from You..And She is Amarendra Bhushsn's Wife not Your Sister..Just Stop Your Lies and Shut Up!!

Jitendra became angry on heard this..

Jitendra (Inner Voice) : What Happened to My Chammy? Who tried to harm my Sister again? Must be that Amar only tried to kill her like last time!! How to save her now?







At Hospital (Outside)

Devi Colony People came to see Devi on heard about her Condition..

Colony People : How is Our Devi? Please let us see her once..

Nurse : Please wait.. I informed to Doctor about You..

Other Side, Seshaya became shock on seeing them..

Seshaya (Inner Voice) : Vammo..This Devi have so much Following!!

On that time, Padhu, Subbu came there with Doctor..

Colony People : What is this Padha Akka? Our Devi went to Wedding Hall so happily..They invited all of us to Wedding..Then How can it happen?

Padhu : We don't know, Doctor said some Drug is there in Devi Blood Samples..Because of that, her Life is in Danger..

They all became shock on heard this..

Colony People: How can anyone harm our Devi? She won't think bad about anyone..

Padhu, Subbu cried for this..

Colony People : Whoever did this, If we know that Person, We will break his Legs and Hands..We will cut him into Pieces..

Other Side, Seshaya became scared on heard this.

Seshaya (Inner Voice) : Ammo..If they find I only did this, They will definitely kill me..I have to escape from here..

Colony People said to Padhu, Subbu

Colony People : Don't worry, Padha Akka ..Devi is Like our Daughter also..Our Prayers will definitely save her. Don't Lose Hopes!!

Padhu, Subbu nooded for this..


Inside ICU

Amar sit beside Devi on holding Devi Hand..

Doctors came there and said to Amar

Doctor : Sir..Sorry to ask You like this at this time, As Last Chance, We want to try one Procedure to save Devi Madam..We need your Signature on No Objection..Please!!

Doctor took those Forms and looked at Devi with tears...

Amar signed on those Documents with Heavy Heart..

Doctor : Sir..If You go out, We will start the Procedure..Please!!

Amar went out on looking at Devi with tears..




Outside Cabin

All Family Members are crying for Devi Condition..

Prithvi, Urmila trying to console Subhadra..

Hema, Loki trying to console Padhu, Subbu..

On that Amar came out..Jhende asked him

Jhende : Amar!?

Amar sit silently without any movement..

Jhende : Don't worry..Amar..Our Devi will be Fine..Please be Strong!!

After Sometime, At Hospital

Doctor came out with sad face..

All Family Members along with Amar asked them..

Amar : Doctor..How is Devi?

Doctor : We are Very Sorry, We tried Last Procedure to save her but No improvement..

Amar became broken on heard this..

All Family Members started crying on heard this..

Doctor : Devi Madam have only few Hours left to her!! After that..?

All became broken on heard this..

Amar got collapsed on heard this..

Padhu Requested Doctor

Padhu : Doctors means God..Then How can say like that? Save Our Devi..Please!!

Doctor : Sorry, Madam..If she got saved in these Few Hours,It must be God Grace!! Nothing is there in our Hands!!

They all cried on heard this..

On that time, Amar went to ICU

Amar said on looking at Devi..

Amar : I can't live without You, Devi..I'm Sorry!!

Amar left from there with broken Heart..



All Family Members came to Devi and crying on seeing her Condition..

Subhadra said to Devi

Subhadra : Devi..You Promise You will come to Our House as my Daughter-in-law...Then How can You leave us like this?

Subbu said to Devi

Subbu : Devamma..Because of My misunderstandings, You are in this Condition now..Please open Your Eyes, Now onwards, I won't say No to You Whatever You will ask me..

Padhu crying on seeing Devi Condition..

Padhu : Amma Devi..See, All are Crying for You..You can't see our Tears right.. Please Open Your Eyes, Amma..!!











Other Side, Outside Hospital

Preethi stood infront of God and Prayed to God..

Preethi : I know I did so many bad things to separate Devi and Amar Sir... But I never want to kill Devi..Today All are crying for her, Even I didn't mix those tablets, Because of me, those Tablets came there, That Seshaya took that Chance, This is all because of me....
I never Prayed to God till Now..First Time, I am Requesting You..Please Save Devi!! I can't bear that Gulity If anything happen to her!! Please save her!!

Preethi thinking after Prayer..

Preethi (Inner Voice) : First I have fo say this to Amar Sir..I will bear any Punishment for this..Even He will kill me also, I will die happily..


Preethi came to ICU to tell the truth to Amar..

Preethi asked Jhende

Preethi : Jhendji..Where is Amar Sir?

Jhende : Amar?!

Jhende realised Amar is not inside ICU..

Jhende went out and searched for Amar..

Jhende became scared when he didn't find Amar in Hospital and understand What he is going to do..

Jhende (Inner Voice) : No!! Don't do this, Amar!!

Jhende immediately went out to stop Amar..





At Bhushan Villa

Amar took Gun and stood infront of Chandra Lekha Photo with broken Heart..







Other Side

Sodamma : Jai Durgamma Thali!!

Sodamma shouted..

Sodamma : Thali!! Come Out!! If You make it Late..Dangerous things will happen.. It is Time for You for Your Arrival!! Come Out!!


Percap : Devi's Heart beat..Twist?



First of all Very Sorry for this Sad Update again.. Please Forgive me..😭😭😭🙏🙏

I'm So Sorry for making You all cry, Even I'm also crying when I am writing this Update..It is Very Difficult for me..😭😭😭😢😢🙏🙏🙏

Note : From nowonwards, I will update weekly once..Because of my work..I hope You Understand, Friends!! Please Forgive me for this.🙏🙏

Please Forgive me If any mistakes are there..


How was Amar Request to Devi? Please Tell me, Friends..

How was all Family Members cried for Devi Condition? Please Tell me, Friends..

How was Jitendra worry for Devi? Please Tell me, Friends..

How was Devi's Colony People Worry for Devi? Please Tell me, Friends..

How was Preethi Prayer to God for Devi? Please Tell me, Friends..

Will Preethi truth come out? Any Guess..Please Tell me, Friends..

Will Devi get saved? Any Guess..Please Tell me, Friends..

Who will Stop Amar? Any Guess..Please Tell me, Friends..

Who will save Devi? Any Guess..Please Tell me, Friends..

Whom Sodamma called to come put? Any Guess..Please Tell me, Friends..

How is this Update? Friends..



Thank You So Much for all Your Votes and Supportive Comments..❤️❤️💕💕

Pics Credit to Google..

Take Care, Stay Safe..

Loves You All...💕💕

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