Pretty angel and EXO (exo Hyuna fanfic)

Chapter 1: going to seoul

In EXO planet
Hyuna POV
"Oppa wake up oppa wake up now!" I cried why he isn't he waking up
"Oppa! I don't want to be alone please don't leave me oppa!" I cried my tear start to burst out and something touching my face it was my oppa "H-Hyuna....you has t-to..go inside the b-big gate..." He said and point at the door "wae?! Oppa" I cried "y-you...have t-t-to...run away f-from..the evil demons girl.." He said with weak voice "t-this..is my l-last..day with you..you h-have to run away now Hyuna..." He said
"I don't want you to go Oppa!" I cried "Muta..and Baron will follow you to the pla-" he said but he was coughing out a blood "Oppa!!" I cried "y-y-you will go to..seoul and find 12 boys call EXO and t-this is my moon locket...don't ever ever g-give this locket to someone else my time has come...goodbye Hyuna..heh-" he said and pass away... "Oppa! Don't leave! I don't want to be alone oppa! Why why do you pass away!" I cried loudly i was crying alone in the place my brother turn into a dust..."Oppa.. Goodbye..." I cried and something was open behind me went i turn around it was the big door
"Come in now Princess Hyuna!" A voice call me i walk closer to the door and found my way out
After i came out it was big and has many tower the door close "what is this place?" I said to myself and it start to raining a heavy cold rain i walk by myself in the rain it midnight
"Oppa...what should i do.." I cried my vision start to blurry and i faint in the middle of the road nothing was around just me alone...
Meanwhile in EXO van
"Yawn* i so sleepy i want to go home faster!" Kai whine
"You probably a sleepy head.." Suho said and laugh
"Haha.. Hyung when will we get to our dorm.." Chen said "in a minute" D.O said
"Hey! Stop the van someone is laying down on the road!" Kris yelled "what?!" Suho said and stop the van
"Hey! Are you crazy!" Suho yelled "wait maybe he or she is lost.." Lay said
We walk out of the van "hey wake up what are doing in the middle of the road?" D.O ask but no answer
"It a girl she look so pretty.." Chanyeol said "ouch! Her forehead is hot!" Tao said
"She sick we have to bring her to our dorm!" Luhan said and carry her to the van
"Geez..what is she doing in the middle of the road?" Kai said "don't be rude to a girl we can just leave her alone or else she will die of coldness in the heavy rain" Kris said "yeah,Kris is right" Xiumin said
Arrive at EXO dorm
"Kris carry her to my bed,i will get a jacket and t-shirt and a don't ask.." D.O said in shy tone
"O-okay.." Kris said and carry her in bridal style and put Hyuna in bed "okay..now we have to change her cloth.." D.O said "what should...we cannot change a girl cloth!" Baekhyun said in panic tone
"We have no choice i will close my eye changing her.." D.O said and close his eye tight after done changing D.O bring her cloth to the washing machine "Guys tomorrow we will buy girls clothes for the girl" D.O said
"Who will go buy?" Chen said "you,Kris,Suho and Xiumin" D.O said "okay" They all said
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