The Evil Saiyan Avoca (Rewrit...

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(REWRITING IT ALL) (1-9 is updated) (Erasing a lot of filler and nonsense) The story takes place on a planet... Mere

Chapter 1: Save Avoca
Chapter 2: Getting comfortable
Chapter 3: Visitors
Chapter 4: New life
Chapter 5: quick pitstop
Chapter 6: watching from afar
chapter 7: Going to earth
Chapter 8: Communicating more
Chapter 9: having a chat
Chapter 10: Meeting someone
Chapter 12: hello kakarot
Chapter 13: I refuse to lose
Chapter 14: how is he alive
Chapter 15: More time together
Chapter 16: arrival of a G.O.D
Chapter 17: hyperbolic time
Chapter 18: Spending quality time
Chapter 19: hello once again kakarot
Chapter 20: you're frieza?
Chapter 21: your name will be...
chapter 22: so you're Champa
Chapter 23: meet the new saiyan's
Chapter 24: Avoca lost control
Chapter 25: Avoca left!!
Chapter 26: Avoca?
Chapter 27: mysterious warrior
Chapter 28: getting back together
Chapter: 29: The tournament of power!
Chapter 30: I wish for.....

chapter 11: falling for eachother

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21 was looking at Avoca's injuries and she knew she couldn't really help him because she didn't bring anything but she remembered that one of her father's (gero) labs was nearby and it's the one that she slept in

21: follow me

Avoca: why? Where are you taking me?

21: I'm gonna help you, just follow me

Avoca: (sighs)......fine.....

21: you're such a child

Avoca: what? how am  a child?

21: always so moody and ignorant especially when someone is trying to help you

Avoca: fucking excuse me!! What did you say?

21: nothing.....I'm sorry (looks down), you had me worried, I was looking for you

Avoca: ....Why did I worry you, you don't even know me

21: I don't know why, but you looked injured and well I'm trying to thank you for saving me

Avoca (mind): I didn't even know she existed, I didn't even mean to save her.....

??? (Mind): No idea, you could of just told her when you first talked to her I guess

Avoca (mind): true but I just didn't really care, now it's gotten to out of hand, she is starting to follow me

??? (Mind): ......deal with it

21: so, how strong are you?

Avoca: ...what?

21: gosh, you're really nervous, have you ever talked to a cute girl before

Avoca: what!

21: (giggles) look we're here

Avoca: (silent) you're weird

21: did you say something?

Avoca: no...(mind) why did I say no!!

21: ok, follow me

Avoca: fine.....

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Couple minutes later:

21: sit down there (points at a chair)

Avoca: .....(walks over and sits) (mind) why the hell am I still here?

??? (Mind): oooooh, now I know why you're listening to her and also why you haven't destroyed the planet

Avoca (mind): What? Ok what do you think?

??? (Mind): You're trying to get laid

Avoca (mind): ........ you're an idiot....

21 starts putting alcohol on the shoulder injury, which makes Avoca snap back into reality

Avoca: (tightens his hand) .....ok next time give me a warning

21: ....I did but you were in a deep thought I guess, maybe it's cause a cute girl is healing you're wounds (smiles and puts her hands on her waist as if she was a hero)

Avoca: .......

21: so shocked, I figured you out

Avoca: I'm shocked that I'm still here...

21: .....do you want me to be quiet (puts here arms around her stomach and looks down)

Avoca suddenly got a huge wave of sadness and all of a sudden stood up and hugged her

Avoca: I didn't mean it that way, it's just that....I.....

21: you don't trust me?

Avoca: everytime that I got sorta close with someone, they ended up dying, and you're really beautiful and watching you die would be that last thing I want to see

21: ....(shocked but smiled)

21 only heard "you're beautiful", she didn't hear anything else, 21 jumped on Avoca and hugged him

Avoca (mind): what is going on, why did you make me to say that?!

??? (Mind): (laughs) you should have seen your self when you realized what you said

Avoca (mind): (vein pops out on forehead)....bastard...

??? (Mind): honestly tho, she is very cute

Avoca (mind): ....I......know...

21: can you stay here?

Avoca: wait what?

21: I hope you don't think it's too early but can you stay here with me, like sleep here with me, n-not with me b-but....

Avoca: yeah yeah, I get you, I'll stay if there's food

21: there's plenty of food

Avoca: that's all I need

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21 was just showing Avoca movies and telling him more about humans untill Avoca asked something

Avoca: you're an android right?

21: yeah.....why, you don't like it...

Avoca: ......I just wanted to know

21: oh ....sorry for me being akward or anoyying

Avoca: (took a deep breath and got closer to hugged her)

21 felt happy, very happy. A couple more hours passed and Avoca's injuries looked way better, even though he could have just healed himself he wanted to make her happy, night came and it was time to sleep, Avoca slept on the couch and 21 obviously slept in a room,

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Next day, lookout:

Vegeta: your not to bad, but you need to get stronger

Gohan: I'll try

Vegeta: what do you mean you'll try, you have to!

Gohan: my mom might not let me

Vegeta: ......your right, well at least make sure to not lose the power you have now

Gohan: ok, bye Vegeta, see you later (flies off)

Vegeta: I wonder what Avoca has been doing?

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2 weeks later
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Avoca pov:

I was sleeping on the couch but ever since I fell asleep I have been feeling a sort of pressure on my chest, I open my eyes only to see 21 sleeping on top of me, after a couple  minutes passed, I tried something, I put my arms around her back near her waist and slowly made her back face the couch (21's back was facing the roof when Avoca first woke up). As I was doing this I'm guessing she woke up because she started giggling and I started to get nervous

21: trying to pull a fast one are we

Me: what, no, I was just trying t-

She kissed me and I obviously didn't know what to do, I hugged her tightly and returned the kiss, we looked at each other's eyes and this is the third time I'm feeling this, I won't let anything happen to her, and she'll be mine only mine, wait what why am I thinking of this?...........

21: I don't know why but I have been feeling attracted to you....(blushes) and I wanted to know if you were too

Me: what I felt for you wasn't attraction because like I said earlier, I don't want you to get hurt

21: (puts a sad face)

Me: but I made a slight change in my plans

21: (looks back at me with hope in her eyes)

me: I like you and I won't let anyone hurt you, I'll never leave your side

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Author's POV

A couple months passed and now Avoca was training on a mountain, he had made clones of himself and was fighting them all at the same time, getting injured but continuing to fight, after a couple hours passed, he stopped and flew to capsule corp because it was bulma's birthday and she had invited everyone. As soon as Avoca arrived he noticed that everyone was already there including 21, Avoca walked over to Bulma and congratulated her then he walked over to Vegeta who was leaning against a wall with his eyes closed

Vegeta: ....

Avoca:  how is your training going

Vegeta: ....

Avoca: I meant, have you gotten stronger

Vegeta: you'll see later (smirks)

Avoca: (smiles)....

After that, Avoca walked away from Vegeta. Avoca had been going around the planet and getting the trust of everyone. He knew them now, Avoca walked over to an empty table and sat down, suddenly 2 arms warped around his neck which obviously shocked him but once he realized who it was he calmed down

21: ellooooo

Avoca: hi.......

21: still as quiet as ever huh

Avoca: ....yeah...

21: you hungry

Avoca: yeah kind of

21 was heading towards the kitchen when suddenly Gohan powered up

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21's pov

I was on my way to the kitchen when I saw Gohan powering up, he was very strong and I could tell he wasn't holding back, I looked at him then looked at the direction he was looking at only to see Avoca standing there, they were both smirking. Avoca was standing still not even a bit worried. They charged at each other and started fighting but I'm glad they moved away from Bulma's house, I was getting worried for Avoca but after a couple minutes Avoca flew down with an unconscious Gohan on his shoulder. Avoca placed Gohan on a chair and then he placed his left hand on Gohan's head, a couple seconds later Gohan woke up and looked at Avoca and smiled nervesly. I place a couple bowls on the table he was sitting at and then I told some chefs to keep bringing him food. Avoca sat down and started eating, I could only watch this with a smile on my face until he stretched out his arm to me and hailed out a cupcake, Avoca looked at me and smiled, I was so happy and I could tell that I was blushing but I grabbed it and ate it slowly but then he started placing more and more cupcakes Infront of me and I couldn't resist myself anymore but before eating them, I stood and sat on his legs, I was facing him and my tail went around him, like if I was protecting him, our faces were close to each other and then I saw how his tail got close to my face, his tail hailed a cupcake, Avoca began to feed me cupcakes with his tail while we looked at each other and similed.

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Avoca's POV

(mind) I'll keep her safe and I'll take care of her. She'll be mine and I'll live with her until my death, there is no going back now (smiles)
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Power levels:

Avoca (base): 10 billion

Gohan (ssj 2): 6 billion

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Vegeta (ssj): 3 billion

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