So this story has been interesting to write. I started this story when I was 13 which definitely explains the differences in writing styles. The fact that I had left this fic for months at a time and then came back to it makes me think it really ruined the flow of the story.
I would love to rewrite it at some point, I really liked the potential that the storyline has. I actually came up with the idea while walking around Edinburgh and wrote the first few chapters in the same cafe where jk Rowling began Harry Potter which I think is utterly mindblowing.
Please let me know if youre interested in a rewrite. You'll be glad to know that my writing has significantly improved with the fact that im a 17-year-old English student and not a cringy 13-year old that spent way too much time reading Wattpad. Not my most healthiest habit that's for sure 🤣
If you do want a rewrite, would you prefer it on here or Ao3? Personally, I like Ao3 a lot more as a reader but I've never wrote anything on there so please let me know your opinion! :)