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~Dialogues in Hinglish.. ~ A beautiful journey from engagement to Marriage! β€’ Based on Arrange marriage... So... More

<<β€’Character Sketchβ€’>>
Episode 1 : Meet the Guptas!
Episode 2 : Meet the Goenkas!
Episode 3 : Kaira agrees to get married!!
Episode 4 : Gayu is tensed for Naira
Episode 6 : A marriage proposal for Kartik!
Episode 7 : Kartik to meet an Alliance?
Episode 8 : Naira's emotional outburst!
Episode 9 : Milne ki Taiyari!
Episode 10 : Tere Sheher Mein!
Episode 11 : Mismatched!!
Episode 12 : Kartik learns about Anshika
Episode 13 : An unexpected situation for Naira!
Episode 14 : Dadi is Determined!
Episode 15 : Naira, Kartik's saviour?
Episode 16 : Kaira's first talk!❀️
Episode 17 : Kartik Meets Naira πŸ’ž
Episode 18 : Kaira on a Date?!
Important!
Episode 19 : The marriage is fixed
Episode 20 : The Roka!

Episode 5 : Happy time for the Goenkas!

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The episode starts with the Goenkas who were together doing their dinner sitting on the chairs respective to the dining table...

Manish said while looking towards the various dishes which were kept in front of him, on the dining table...

Manish:-(Surprised) Aaj itna jyada accha khana kaise bana hain bhai?..Woh bhi humaare ghar mein, Goenka Villa mein,(chuckles) Jahan pe diet khane ke alaawa kuch bhi nahi milta...

Akhilesh:-(nods) Haan bhaisahab!..Main bhi wahi soch raha tha ki jaake ek baar name plate dekh ke aau kisi aur ke ghar toh nahi chala aaya main!..and he lets out a chuckle...

Surekha:- (Hitting him on his shoulder playfully) Aap hi kaa ghar hain yeh Akhil...

Swarna:- (Smiling) Aur yeh sab khana ek bohot badi khushi ke mauke pe bana hain...

Manish:-(Curiously) Kaisi khushi bhai koi humein bhi batao...

Akhilesh:-(Nods) Haan thoda hum bhi khush ho le...

Suhasini:-(Excitedly) Areey humaare Kittu ne Shaadi naal haan kehdi hain...

Her sentence was followed by Swarna and Surekha's Haan..

Manish was literally shocked hearing her...

Manish:-(to Akhil) Akhilesh jara mujhe chimti kaato kahi main sapna toh nahi dekh raha..

Kartik nods his head side by side in disbelief while keeping his head in between his left hand which was kept on the dining table..

Akhilesh pinches Manish hard on his arm to make him believe that he wasn't dreaming...

Manish:- (Wincing in pain) Aaah!..(With wide eyes) Iska matlab yeh sach tha...!

Kartik:-(passing him a tight lipped smile) Haanji..Yeh sach tha..!!

Akhilesh quickly gets up from his seat and goes towards Kartik.. He excitedly Picks up Kartik in his arm and turns him round...

Kartik:-(stopping him) Chachu chachu!..Kya kar rahe ho aap yeh..Mujhe chakkar aa rahe hain...(moving his legs to and fro) Mujhe niche utaaro...

Akhilesh sighs and puts him down..

Akhilesh:- (Nodding his head side by side in disbelief) Kya Kartik!.. Itni jaldi chakkar aa gaye?.. Isliye kehta hun thoda Jim vim jaao.. Excercise karo.. (Showing his muscles to Kartik) Body shody banao..Abhi toh humein tere liye ladki dhundni hain..Aisa sukda hua dekh ke konsi ladki tujhe pasand karegi?..

Shubham says who was munching on parathas...
Shubham:-(with a Mouth full of paratha) I agree with you Chachu!..

He swallows the paratha which he was eating inside and says to Kartik..

Shubham:-(Proudly) Agar aap chaahe toh main aapko train kar sakta hun!..Lekin meri ek shart hain..Ki aapko Jim tak main drive karke leke jaaunga..(Dreamily) Aapki brand new BMW mein..Haaye!..

Kartik narrows his eyes at him..

He sits on his seat while Akhilesh too get settled on his seat...

Kartik:- (Smirking) Woh toh waise bhi tu roj mujhse chupake leke jaata hi hain...

Shubham:- (Pouts) Haan toh thik hain pehle chupaa ke chori karta tha ab bata ke karunga...

Kartik sighs in disbelief..

Surekha:- Waise Kartik Akhil ne baat toh sahi kahi..Kaise sukhe sukhe se ho gaye ho tum..Ab naa khud kaa khayal rakha karo aankhir kaar humein jald se jald tumhari Shaadi jo karwaani hain...

Swarna:- Haan chalo issi baat pe do gulab jamun aur lo...
And she serves him two more Gulab Jamuns..

Kartik:-(stopping her) Maa bass ab aur kitna khilaoge...Main khaa khaa ke fatt jaaunga...

Suhasini:- Areey kha puttar!..Acche se thus le apni maa ke haat ka khana phir shayad kabhi iske haat ka khana khane ki iccha hi naa ho..Aankhir kaar tujhe khilaane waali jo aane waali hain...and she chuckles..

Kartik:-(shying) Kya Dadu aap bhi..!!

Shubham:-(narrowing his eyes) Koi mujhse bhi puch liya karo..Aankhir kaar main bhi toh issi ghar ka beta hun!..

Swarna was about to serve Shubham Gulab Jamuns that she was stopped by Manish...

Manish:-(Showing his palm to Swarna) Koi jarurat nahi hain!..Jitna kam khana khaoge utni kam nind aayegi aur utni hi jyada padhai ho paayegi...Abhi exams aa rahe hain naa uspe focus karo..Yeh shaadi waadi iske liye hum log hain!..

Swarna takes back her hand sadly..Kartik too sighs at Manish..And Shubham continued eating his food silently...

Just then Suhasini gets a call..She wipes up her hands with the help of the tissue papers and picks up her phone..
Seeing the caller ID she gets happy..

Manish:- (Curiously) Kya hua maa kiska phone hain?..

Suhasini:- Pandit jii ka phone hain!..(excitedly; Getting up from her seat) Hum abhi unse baat karke aaye...

Manish just smilingly nods seeing her excitement...And she goes from there to talk with the Pandit jii while others just continued doing their dinner...

The Scene shifts towards Suhasini..

Suhasini:-(Picking up the call; smiling) Jii boliye pandit jii...

Pandit jii:- (Smiling) Namaste Suhasini jii..Jo tasveere maine aapko bheji thi unn mein se koi kanya pasand aayi aapko?..

Suhasini:- (Sighs) Jii nahi Pandit jii!..Woh saare ke saare ghusat ladkiyo ki tasveere thi..Humein toh sanskari bahu chahiye jiska man Komal ho, saaf ho, jo kapde chaahe kaise bhi pehen le par dil ki burri naa ho..Aur sach bataye toh waisi humein in mein se ek bhi nahi dikhi..(Again Sighs) Humein toh lagta hain aisi ladkiya hain hi nahi ab iss duniya mein...

Pandit jii:-(Assuring her) Areey aap chintit mat hoyiye Suhasini jii..Hum dhund nikalenge aisi Sukanya aapke ghar ke chiraag ke liye...
Aap bass bhagwaan se prarthana kijiye ki jald se jald aapko aapki pota bahu dekhne ko mil jaaye...

Suhasini:-(Sadly) Usi ke liye toh aankhein taras rahi hain pandit jii..(Hopefully) Ab bass aap hi humaari aankhari ummid ho...

Pandit jii:-(Smiling) Main aapko niraash nahi karunga Suhasini jii..Ab main phone rakhta hun...Aur agar aisi Sukanya meri drishti mein aayi toh main aapse avashya sampark karunga...

Suhasini:- (Nods) Jii..Shukriya!..

And she cuts the call...

She comes back to the dining table and sits on her seat...

Akhilesh:- (Curiously) Kya hua Maa?..Kya kahan pandit jii ne..

Surekha:- Haan maa jii..(Excitedly) Aapke Kittu ke liye koi kitti mili??..

And Kartik Chuckles hearing Surekha...

Suhasini:-(sighs) Nahi abhi toh nahi mili.. Par humne bhi ummid haari nahi hain...! Hum humaare Kittu ke liye apni pasand ki Pota bahu laa kar hi rahenge..

And all smiles seeing her confidence..

After some time all finishes their dinner and makes their ways towards their rooms..

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The scene shifts towards the Guptas... where all were just done with their dinner..

Gayu goes towards her room to study as instructed by Shikha...While Naira goes to help Shikha in their household works...

Naren was outside in the small garden of their house..
He was sitting on a chair in the teeth grittening cold..He was just admiring the moon in the dim light without covering his body with any shall or something which can give him some warmth...

He removes his phone from his pocket as something important strikes his mind...He dials a number on his phone and placed the phone near his ear while waiting for the another person to pick up his call...The call was received in three rings by someone...

Naren:- (Greeting) Hello..

Another person:- Hello!..

Naren:-(Assuring) Pandit jii?..!

Pandit jii:-(Nods) Jii jii.. Boliye Naren jii (Curiously) aaj kaise yaad karna hua humein...

Naren:- Jii woh darasal hum apni beti ki shaadi karana chaahte hain..

Pandit jii:-(Remembering) Aapki bitiya..Gayatri??..

Naren:-(chuckles) Areey nahi nahi woh toh abhi choti hain...Humaare jiji ki beti..

Pandit jii:- Ha haa..Naira Naira...Hain na?..

Naren:-(Nods) Haan jii..Bass ussi ke liye hum log koi accha sa rishta dhund rahe hain..

Pandit jii:- Areey aap chintit mat hoyiye..Hum hain naa..Ek se ek acche rishtey leke aayenge aapki bitiya ke liye..

Naren:-(Smiles) Jii dhanyawad!..

Pandit jii:- Bass aap aapki bitiya ki tasweer aur parichay patra humein kal de dena...

Naren:- Kal?..Aap aayenge yaa main aapke ghar aau?..

Pandit jii:- Areey nahi nahi..(Smiling) Hum khud aayenge aapke ghar..Isi bahane aapki bitiya se mil bhi lenge..

Naren:-(Smiling;Nods) Jii..
Toh chaliye ab hum phone rakhte hain..

Pandit jii:- Ji..
And he ends the call...

After finishing the call Naren places his phone again in his pocket that he hears Shikha shouting behind him..He turns to look at her who was shivering due to the cold...

Shikha:-(Shouting) Itni thand mein aap bahar kya kar rahe hain Naren jii..Andar aa jayiye warna jukham ho jaayega..

Naren:- (Casually) Areey kuch nahi hota Shikha..Tum bhi aao aur betho yahan pe..Dekho kaisi thandi thandi hawaa chal rahi hain..

Shikha:- (Refusing) Nahi nahi..Aap akele hi Baithiye aur jamke barf ka gola ban jaayiye... (Passing a tight lipped smile) Mujhe ice-cream banane ka koi shauk nahi hain!..

And she goes from there...

While Naren continued looking towards the Moon.. Analysing the past few years that he had spent with his family.. He was thinking how quickly the time flied as the Naira who just had learnt to walk now grew so bigger that he needs to find an alliance for her...The thought of his daughter's wedding was bringing tears in his eyes..He wipes them up before they could make their way out of his eyes..

He startled in surprise as someone hugs him from behind..
It was none another than Naira.. Breaking the hug she covers Naren with a woolen shall providing him the heat...Naren smiles seeing her care towards him..He patted her cheeks who was standing behind him..Naren makes her sit beside him on the bench...

Naira smiles and keeps her head on his shoulder while looking upwards, towards the moon..

Naren:- (Smiling a little) Tumhe yaad hain Naira beta..?! Jab tum bohot choti thi aur jab hum yahan pe baitha karte the tab tum humesha humse kehti thi ki tumhe woh chaand chahiye..Uss chaand se tumhe Lori sunani hain...

Naira chuckles and nods..
Naira:- Aur tab mere Kavi Mama jii kehte the..
Kahan se laau woh Lori ka lafz,🎵
Jo sirf tujhe hi sunai de..🤗
Duniya dekhe uss chaand ke tukde ko, 🌜
Par mujhe toh sirf tu hi dikhai de..❤

Naren smiles seeing that Naira still remembers that two lines..Which he used to tell her when she use to asked to get that moon to sing a lullaby for her...

Naren:-(Getting up from his seat) Chalo beta ab andar chalo..Raat bhi bohot ho gayi hain aur thand bhi bohot badh gayi hain..Chalo warna Sardi, jukham ho jaayega...

Naira nods and gets up from her seat..She starts going inside the house followed by Naren...

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The scene shifts to Kartik
who was sitting on the floor and was letting do his hairs a oil massage by his beloved Dadu..

She was sitting on the bed..  She Places a handkerchief sized towel on her lap so that the oil could not get spill on her saree... she takes out some oil from the bottle which was kept on the bedside table...She rubs her both hands against each other making sure that it got applied on both of her hands properly and then she starts massaging Kartik's hairs..She was rubbing her hands in his silky, soft hairs gently giving him a stress-free, relaxed and cool sensation...

Kartik just closed his eyes feeling the load from his head had gone...He has tilted his head a little so that his dadu can do his hair massage properly...He felt his eyes a little heavy as the wave of sleep takes over on them...that to break the wave he hears suhasini's voice..

Dadu:-(Smiling; Lovingly) Accha lag raha hain naa?!..

Kartik just uttered a hmm from his lips...

Suhasini smiles and continues doing her work more lovingly..

Dadu:- Aaj tumne humein bohot badi khushi di hain beta...Dekhna tumhare liye hum sabse changi kudi dhundke layenge...(smiles) Aankhir kaar humara Kittu puttar hain hi enna sona..Tujhe toh koi bhi ladki pasand kar legi...

Kartik smiles..

Dadu:- (Curiously) Waise tujhe kaisi ladki chahiye puttar?..

Kartik:-(shrugging off his shoulders) Jaisi aapko pasand ho..

Dadu:- Areey nahi aise kaise..Bata naa..!

Kartik:-(Thinking) Umm.. Accha thik hain..Waise toh maine iss baarein mein kuch jyada socha nahi hain..But haa..Mujhe koi common ladki nahi chahiye..I want someone different...!..I mean like padhi hui aur ambitious honi chahiye..Just like the way I am..Modern ho yaa sanskari it doesn't matter to me..But yaa down to earth honi chahiye..Apne traditions, apni family, values sabki usse kadar honi chahiye... Actually toh mujhe bhi nahi pata ki mujhe kaisi ladki chahiye..But yeah..I really want someone different..Jo baaki sabse alag ho..Jismein kuch hatke ho..I don't want koi aisa jisase milke pehli baar mein hi heart to heart connection feel ho..Cause that's not we call love..Its just an attraction..Love is the feeling which get gradually blooms in the heart and you are not even known about it by your heart..❤️ Hain naa dadu?..

Dadu:-(Smiles) Haan!..Tujhe kaisi ladki chahiye yeh toh tujhe usase mil ke hi pata chalega..Kyuki kabhi kabhi kisi ki koi cheez humaare dil ko kab chu jaati hain humein pata bhi nahi chalta..Aur someone different toh (Sighs) aaj kal hoti hi nahi hain..Sabko bass fashion aur status ki hi padi rehti hain..Mainu toh koi simple si, pyaari si bahu chahiye..

Kartik:-(chuckles) Aisi bhi chalegi.. Actually aisi hi chahiye..(Dreamily) Like the one piece made in millions...

Dadu:- Humara Kittu bhi toh laankhon mein ek hain!..

Kartik chuckles hearing this while Suhasini gets up from the bed...Wiping her hands with the tissue papers, she wears her glasses...

Dadu:- Chalo ab hum chalte hain...(Sternly) Aur tum bhi so janaa jaldi se...(teasing) Ek baar bass shaadi ho jaaye phir toh raaton mein jaagna hi hain!!...

Kartik quickly gets up from the floor and says..

Kartik:-(embarrassed) Dadi??

But it was too late because Suhasini was already ran from there...And here Kartik chuckles on her teasing...

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The scene shifts to Naira
who just enters into her room..It wasn't much lavish but it was simply beautiful and clean..

She comes near her bed.. Sitting on it she smilingly caressed Gayu's hairs who was sleeping peacefully beside her..After kissing her forehead softly, making sure that her sleep wouldn't break, she sighs and sits in a straight position.. Removing her dupatta from her shoulders she kept it on the bedside table...She turns off the lamp light and lays on the bed beside Gayu while covering herself with the duvet, providing some warmness to her body..She closed her eyes to get some sleep but it was miles away from her!..She was turning and tossing on the bed to get peace..But it seems like nowhere..!!

She finally sighs and opens her eyes...Her mind started analysing the things that happens with her today..The Naira which she was yesterday and the Naira which she is today has a lot of difference in between them..Today she became a girl who agrees to get married only for the family's sake..She agrees to sacrifice her dreams, as she doesn't think that they will be completed when she will get married...But Naira being Naira! She can't even say no to her Mama jii and Mami jii as she felt the have already done so much for her and now she doesn't wanna give them any chance to complain...She wanna be their best daughter, who obeys their every orders...

She automatically started missing her parents...Her Mama and Mami never make her feel that she is not their own daughter but somewhere or the other they can't take place of her parents..Her parents have the special place in her heart that no one can snatch from them...

Naira:-(in mind, nostalgic) Aaj agar aap yahan pe hote maa, papa toh mujhe aisa kuch bhi nahi karna padta ..Aap meri shaadi se pehle mere sapno ke baare mein sochte..Mama jii aur mami jii ne mujhe aap dono ki kami aaj tak khalne nahi di..Par aaj..Aaj pata nahi kyu mujhe aap dono ki bohot jyada yaad aa rahi hain..

She wipes the tears which just escaped from her eyes..

Naira:- (in mind) I know shaadi toh mujhe karni hi thi..But aise apne sapne bhulake kabhi bhi nahi karni thi..I wish mujhe koi aisa mil jaaye jisse meri fikar ho, mere sapno ki kadar ho, jo mujhe support kare... Par bachpan se leke aaj tak toh yahi sikhaya gaya hain ki pati aur patni mein humesha pati ki baat sunani chaahiye..Ek patni ko koi hak nahi hain shaadi ke baad apne sapne, apne profession ko continue karne ka..I don't know yeh sach hain yaa jhut..Aur shayad aaj ki duniya main aisa dreamy rajkumar exist bhi nahi karta hoga..

She sighs and closed her eyes, it was much difficult for her like she was closing the door of her dreams, but she has to do this..Soon she drifted into the sleep...

The scene shifts to Kartik
who was laying on his bed..The curtains of his room were opened giving entry to the cold waves of air and to the dim light of moon..He was laying on his hand which was folded behind his head..He was smiling thinking about the sudden change that takes place in his heart...He was hoping for the best life partner in deep inside his heart...He turns his face towards the moon..He was lovingly looking at it and was thinking that...

Kartik:- (Thinking) I don't know..Mera paala kiske saath padne waala hain..I don't even believe in arrange marriage but as Rishi ne kahan I should give it a chance..! Kya pata meri arrange marriage love mein convert ho jaaye..!!
Waise cute toh definitely hoti hain yaar arrange marriages..Woh starting mein jii jii kehke pukaarna, woh pehle aap pehle aap..(Shivers a little thinking about it) Its like butterflies in the stomach...Woh chup chupke phone pe baate karna and all that..Ab Kirti ka toh experience kar hi chuka hun main..Dheere dheere karke unn dono ko bhi pyaar ho hi gaya..(giggles) Ab toh dono apne honeymoon ki planning bhi kar rahe hain...(Dreamily) Let's see mere saath kya hota hain...!!

He covers himself with the duvet..And closes the automatic curtains with the help of the remote... Keeping it back onto the bedside table he Closes his eyes and soon he drifted into the sleep...


Precap: Kartik's marriage proposal for Naira??...
Goenkas to meet to Naira!..

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Author Note:
Hey guys!..I hope you liked it...!!
Are you guys excited for the next episode?..Do tell me in the comments...❤️
I will really appreciate if you guys help me to complete the target..🌝

~Stay tuned for the upcoming twist!!

Do votes and comments ❤️✨

~Vaish
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