Mahabharat: What if

By MK_Williams

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What if Duryodhan never helped Karn but instead insulted him? After Kunti abandoned Karn, Karn was taken by a... More

Getting ready
Maharthi Karn
Mata
Apologies
About the Chakravyuh
Mata's secret
Mata's story
The welcoming feast
Pitamaha's story
Gurudev's gurudakshina
Mata's advise
Duryodhan's decision
Drupad's defeat
Yudhisthir's vow
Subhadra's prank on me
Krishna
Rukmini's letter
Abducting Rukmini
Bhrata Yudhisthir's letter
The palace of mirrors
Discovering the truth of the lakshagraha
Escaping from the lakshagraha
Life as Brahmins
The birth of Dhrishtadyumn and Draupadi
Entering the illusory forest
Exiled from Kampilya!
Sacrificing myself
Nirjara AKA Hidimba
The return to Kampilya
Bhrata Bheem to be raja of the rakshaso
Bhrata Bheem's vivah
Birth of Ghatotkach
Bholenath ka varadan (Lord Shiva's boon)
Arjun's identity revealed to Draupadi
Draupadi's Swayamvar
Mata's impossible order
Narad Muni's advise
Govind's promise
Kaunteys in Hastinapur
Draupadi proves her innocence
Weapon raised in the court
Pitamaha's decision
We will take Khandavprasth and Ang.
Jyesht's truth revealed to Aryaverth. And the rajyabhishek.
Leaving to Khandavprasth and Ang.
Attack of the serpents and duel with pitashree Indr
Agni dev's gift and Indraprasth
Jyesht and My exile
Birth of Jagmohini and Janamejay
Jyesht and I arrive at Dwarka
Subhadra and Vrushali's wish
Subhadra and Vrushali marry Karn and Arjun
Panchali's objection and forgiveness
Happy Holi and good news
Madhav's suggestion
A challenge to Jarasandh
The decision of the Rajsuyyajna

Vrushali's return and her welcoming feast

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By MK_Williams

Vrushali: Vrushali is an adopted daughter of Rohini and Vasudev. They found her in front of their palace gates in Dwaraka in a basket. She is a brave and skilled sword fighter and archer. She has a strong bonding with Subhadra.


Two days later in Dwarka

Subhadra's P.O.V.

I was in my chamber's balcony waiting for Vrushali. Then suddenly I heard conchs blow

"She's back!" I exclaimed and ran to the rajbhavan entrance while running there I bumped into Jyesht (A/N: Jyesht as in Balaram)

"Oops sorry, Jyesht!" I apologised

"Just going-"

"To the rajbhavan entrance, I know, I know." said Jyesht

"See you there." I called running off evryone was waiting, arrows came and hit the ground right in front of us Vrushali walked up to us kneeled bowing her head and joining her hands

"Pranipat." she greeted we all raised our hand blessing her, she walked to Mata Rohini, Mata Devki and Pitashree touched Pitashree's feet

"Pranipat, Pitashree." greeted Vrushali touching Pitashree's feet

"Ayushman bhavah." he blessed

"Pranipat, Mata Rohini." greeted Vrushali touching Mata Rohini's feet

"Dheryavan bhavah." she blessed, Vrushali looked at Mata Rohini who hugged her she hugged back

"Pranipat, Mata Devki." greeted Vrushali touching Mata Devki's feet

"Ayushman bhavah." she blessed Vrushali looked at Mata Devki she hugged her they pulled away Mata Devki cupped Vrushali cheeks

"So good to see you again. You've grown so much, nearly my height." said Mata Devki, we laughed, Vrushali looked at me and walked to me

"Pranipat, Didi." she greeted, she was going to touch my feet I stopped her, smiled tearing up and hugged Vrushali she hugged me back

"I missed you so much, Vrush." I said

"I missed you too, Didi." said Vrushali, we pulled away

"C'mon, I'll show you your chamber, I had it decorated myself." I added, Vrushali smiled I took her to her chamber when we entered Vrushali gasped, the chamber was full of weapons. Vrushali hugged me

"Thank you, Didi." she said we sat on the bed

"So, Didi anyone you like?" she asked, I blushed slightly knowing what she meant

"Er- yes." I replied

"Ooh who's that lucky rajkumar?" she asked

"Rajkumar Arjun." I replied

"But he is already married. All the Pandav are, to rajkumari Draupadi." said Vrushali

"Yeah, I know, Vrush." I said

"But-" Vrushali stoped as we heard conchs blow

"Pranipat, Kumari." greeted a dasi

"Yes, what is it?" I asked

"Kumar Krishn has come back from Indraprasth with Maharaj Karn, the rest of the rajkumar and Maharani Draupadi." said the dasi I face lightened up with more happiness

"And Maharani Rohini has ordered to come for their welcome." said the dasi, I nodded

"We'll be there." I said, the dasi nodded and left

"Come, Vrush." I said holding her hand and we walked to the rajbhavan entrance. I saw Jyesht Karn, with someone walking next to him probably Maharani Draupadi. I thought then my eyes fell on rajkumar Arjun I smiled at him and he smiled back, I looked at Vrushali she was staring at Jyesht Karn I snapped my fingers in front of her face, she shook her head coming back to her senses she looked at me I raised my eyebrows and she blushed a bit, I smiled, Jyesht Karn and Maharani Draupadi touched Pitashree's feet

"Pranipat, Mamashree." they greeted in unison

"Kalyan ho." Pitashree blessed raising his hand Jyesht Karn and Maharani Draupadi touched Mata Rohini and Mata Devki's feet

"Pranipat, Mamishree." they greeted in unison

"Ayushman bhavah." blessed Mata Rohini and Mata Devki

"Putravati bhavah, Putri Draupadi." blessed Mata Devki, Maharani Draupadi smiled she looked at me and Vrushali she walked to us

"Pranipat, Maharani." we greeted in unison

"Jiji." said Maharani Draupadi

"No, no no!" I exclaimed shaking my hand

"You can't address us by Jiji." I said, Maharani Draupadi gave a low giggle

"I'm not addressing you as Jiji, but asking you address me as Jiji." she said, Vrushali and I smiled and hugged Jiji Draupadi she hugged us back we pulled away

Draupadi's P.O.V.

Govind's Bahanen smiled and hugged me I hugged them back we pulled away

"What are your names?" I asked

"I'm Subhadra, and she is Vrushali." said Subhadra puting her hand on herself and her sister

At night in the welcoming feast

I saw Aray Putra Arjun he was looking a bit sad I walked o him and sat next to him he didn't realise me

"Aray," I called puting my hand on his shoulder, he looked at me

"Panchali?" he said and wiped his tears

"What are you doing here? Why aren't you with Jyesht?" he asked

"What is wrong?" I asked

"Nothing, Panchali." he said, I sighed

"You can tell me." I said

"You won't understand." said Aray Putra Arjun getting up

"Then make me understand." I said

"I'll tell you later, Panchali" said Aray Putra Arjun

"No, tell me now!" I snapped, he looked at me

"It's about Mata." he said

"What about Mata?" I asked, Aray Putra Arjun looked down not saying anything

"Panchali," I heard Aray Putra Yudhisthir call I turned my head and looked at him

"It's Mata's birthday today and Jun always does something special for her." he said

"Oh, I see." I said lowering my tone

"And this time we can't even meet Mata." sighed Aray Putra Arjun

"Who says so." we heard a voice

Arjun's P.O.V.

"And this time we can't even meet Mata." I sighed

"Who says so." we heard Mata's voice I turned around and Mata she was smiling, I ran to her hand hugged her I cried on her shoulder she teared up too we pulled away

"Mata." mumbled bhrata Yudhisthir and hugged mata I saw Panchali wipe her happy tears

"Happy birthday, Mata." I wished Nakul and Sahadev were walking to us 

"Bhrata Jun we wanted to ask tha-" Nakul stopped as he saw Mata

"Mata...?" he and Sahadev asked, Mata nodded spreading her arms Nakul and Sahadev hugged her

"Where are Karn and Bheem?" asked Mata, I saw Jyesht behind Mata I opened my mouth to say that Jyesht was bihind her but he shook his head and hand telling us not to tell Mata anything, Jyesht closed Mata's eyes from behind

"Who is it Mata?" asked Nakul with a smirk Mata held Jyesht's hand and smiled

"It's Karn." said Mata

"How did you know?" asked Sahadev, Mata smiled Jyesht removed his hand from her eyes he hugged Mata she hugged him back they pulled away

"Hear all! Rajkumari Subhadra and rajkumari Vrushali are making their entrance!" said a guard, and Subhadra and Vrushali entered the courtyard I realized that Jyesht and Vrushali were looking at each other I poked Nakul with my elbow.

"What?" he asked in a whisper, I pointed my head to Jyesht, Nakul looked at Jyesht and saw he and Vrushali were looking at each other

"Oh." said Nakul he smirked at me

"Looks like you are not the only one who loves a Yadavkumari, bhrata Jun." he teased me

"Shut up." I snapped slightly hitting his head Vrushali walked to me and Nakul with Subhadra next to her

"Pranipat bhrata Arjun. Pranipat, bhrata Nakul. Pranipat Maharaj Karn." she greeted us Jyesht, Nakul and me

"Pranipat, Bhabhish- Oops sorry. Pranipat." I greeted joining Vrushali blushed a bit I looked at Subhadra and she was looking at me

"So," said Vrushali, I slightly shook my head and looked at Vrushali

"Didi Bhadra told me you play the Veena very well." she said, I looked at Subhadra shocked She told her. I thought

"Er... I... well... I... yes I do play the Veena, but not that great." I said

"Yeah he doesn't play as great as Subhadra." said Nakul, I looked at him

"Didi, can you please play something for me?" asked Vrushali, Subhadra looked at Vrushali and bit her lips

"Er..." Subhadra struggled to say

"Play, Subhadra, even bhrata Arjun is eager to hear you play it." said Nakul, smirking at me Subhadra looked at mt I nodded she blushed looking down and nodded

"Okay, I'll play it." she said, Subhadra went and sat on the floor bed took the Veena in her lap and started playing 

Subhadra finished playing everyone clapped Subhadra gave her respect to the Veena she stood up, joined her hands

"Thank you." she thanked

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