Mahabharat: What if

By MK_Williams

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What if Duryodhan never helped Karn but instead insulted him? After Kunti abandoned Karn, Karn was taken by a... More

Getting ready
Maharthi Karn
Mata
Apologies
About the Chakravyuh
Mata's secret
Mata's story
The welcoming feast
Pitamaha's story
Gurudev's gurudakshina
Mata's advise
Duryodhan's decision
Drupad's defeat
Yudhisthir's vow
Subhadra's prank on me
Krishna
Rukmini's letter
Abducting Rukmini
The palace of mirrors
Discovering the truth of the lakshagraha
Escaping from the lakshagraha
Life as Brahmins
The birth of Dhrishtadyumn and Draupadi
Entering the illusory forest
Exiled from Kampilya!
Sacrificing myself
Nirjara AKA Hidimba
The return to Kampilya
Bhrata Bheem to be raja of the rakshaso
Bhrata Bheem's vivah
Birth of Ghatotkach
Bholenath ka varadan (Lord Shiva's boon)
Arjun's identity revealed to Draupadi
Draupadi's Swayamvar
Mata's impossible order
Narad Muni's advise
Govind's promise
Kaunteys in Hastinapur
Draupadi proves her innocence
Weapon raised in the court
Pitamaha's decision
We will take Khandavprasth and Ang.
Jyesht's truth revealed to Aryaverth. And the rajyabhishek.
Leaving to Khandavprasth and Ang.
Attack of the serpents and duel with pitashree Indr
Agni dev's gift and Indraprasth
Vrushali's return and her welcoming feast
Jyesht and My exile
Birth of Jagmohini and Janamejay
Jyesht and I arrive at Dwarka
Subhadra and Vrushali's wish
Subhadra and Vrushali marry Karn and Arjun
Panchali's objection and forgiveness
Happy Holi and good news
Madhav's suggestion
A challenge to Jarasandh
The decision of the Rajsuyyajna

Bhrata Yudhisthir's letter

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Arjun's P.O.V.

I was on the beach doing the memory exercise I dug holes and placed a cloth on it I jump on one leg

then jumped to my right

then rolled and reached the other side, and stood up. I turned around and saw Subhadra coming

"Be careful!" I called as she was going to step on the cloth

Subhadra's P.O.V.

"Be careful!" called rajkumar Arjun as I was going to step on the cloth

"Don't step on that." he said

Recalling

"Do not step on those illusory circles else you will fall in a ditch." said rajkumar Nakul I jumped across

"You dance quite well." said Arjun

Recalling ended

I smiled at Arjun thinking You can't fool me again.

Arjun's P.O.V.

"Don't step on that." I said, Subhadra smiled at me. I smiled thinking She thinks I'm trying to fool her again, well, she'll see.

and she started walking on the cloth I raised my eyebrows as she was going to step where I dug a hole she fell in it screaming

I laughed

"Did I not tell you? Now, wait, let me come to you." I said I jumped to her

and helped her up

she looked at me sulking

"I have dug holes in the ground and covered them with a cloth. This exercise is done to strengthen one's memory. But, apart from your bhrata Krishna you will not believe anyone." I said

"Do you still doubt bhrata Krishna?" asked Subhadra I shook my head

"No. I doubted him before I met him, but, now, I doubt myself." I said Subhadra smiled

"Tell me. What is the reason you came here?" I asked

"Er... There is a message for you from Hastinapur." she said stretching her hand to give me a scroll, I took it and opened it

Priya anuj Arjun

We are going to Varnavat for a puja in honour of pitashree. by the time you receive this letter we will already be in Varnavat. Come as soon as you can, the puja will be held a day before the new moon.

P.S. Jyesht will be there too.

Your bhrata Bheem

I know it was bhrata Yudhisthir who wrote this letter it is bhrata Yudhisthir's handwriting he wrote bhrata Bheem because if someone else read it before me they would have known Jyesht Karn is our Jyesht

"Where is Madhav? I need to seek his permission to leave." I asked

"Arthat, are you going back to Hastinapur?" asked Subhadra

"No, not to Hastinapur. Bhrata Yudh-" I stopped thinking Oops!

"I mean, Jyesht has asked me to proceed to Varnavat at once." I said

"But you hardly stayed in Dwaraka." said Subhadra sadly

"The wise men of Dwaraka say where there is Krishna, there is Dwaraka. And a mitra resides in the heart. If you see it from this angle, Dwaraka is right here." I said putting my hand on my chest

"So, what's the point of staying in this Dwaraka? I must follow Jyesht's order and leave." I said

Time skip

I and Madhav went to the city entrance

"In such a short time span I have acquired so much from you, Madhav." I said, Madhav put his hand on my shoulder

"The one who has the mental state to grasp things only he can acquire something, Parth." said Madhav patting me on my shoulder, I smiled at him

"You will come across the Triveni Confluence on your way. Do bathe in it. There lies the Lost River Saraswati. While bathing do think of the tale of mata Saraswati getting lost in that river." he said

"But I have not heard of this tale." I said

"It is said that Mata Saraswati could not walk on land bearing the holy fire on her palm. That is why she began migrating into the earth. If you think of this tale while bathing you will earn good fortune, mitra." said Madhav, I nodded

"As you say" I said we hugged

"Now you can proceed." said Madhav, I nodded

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