With Your Love

By heyitshusna

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
<Authors Note>
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 11 (Re-posted)
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Author's Note
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
PLEASE READ
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
I need your help!
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Important!
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Very tragic news (maybe?) (Important!!)
Chapter 64
Epilogue

Chapter 15

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By heyitshusna

Chapter 15

I watch the bottle spin around in circles until it reaches its final destination, me

"Truth or Dare" Danielle asks me wiggling her eyebrows

I sigh and reply "Truth"

"If you could snog anyone in this room right now who would it be?" Danielle asks

The answer was easy for me, but I didn't want to answer too quickly. Zayn, definitely, no I didn't like him in that way, but me and Zayn were probably the closest out of the band, after Niall.

"Zayn" I say with a shrug

"Oh baby, you know where to find me" Zayn adds with a wink which sends me into hysterics.

"You ar supposed to be in love with Niall though" Louis says pouting

I roll my eyes "Zayn I love you" I say dramatically

"Oh Valerie our feelings for each other cannot be kept it any longer. Will you marry me?"  He asks sarcastically 

"For sure my love" I say pretending to faint

"And scene" Zayn says coming back to reality

Applauds break out through the room and I bow with Zayn's hand in mines

I smile and spin the bottle which lands on Harry

"Truth or Dare?" I ask him

"Dare" He replies

"I dare you to go down to the lobby in just your boxers and pretend to be drunk" I tell him

"How do you even think of these dares?" Harry mutters under his breath as he slides off his shirt in one easy movement. His abs were so nicely defined and I had a strange urge to touch them. I basically had to peel my eyes away from his perfect torso and he slid out of his sweats leaving him in nothing but his boxers

"You all can't come, or it's going to look suspicious" He says "Since it was Valerie's dare, she's going to have to come with me, but stay at a distance so no one thinks we are pulling a prank or something

"Okay" I reply standing up, trying hard not to look at Harry's V line. I walked over to the door with Harry right behind me

"You can look if you want babe" Harry whispers into my ear making me shudder. I pull my elbow forward and launch it right at his balls

Harry groans and bites his lip trying to sooth the pain

"4 FOR YOU VALERIE, YOU GO VALERIE!" Eleanor screams. I turn my head over my shoulder and laugh at Eleanor's reference to the movie Mean Girls that we had watched only a bit before.  I head out the door follow closely by Harry

"You shouldn't have done that" He mutters holding his crotch

"I'm sorry forgive me Harry?" I ask him trying not to laugh

"I'll forgive you, but you are going to pay for this" He says

"Okay" I reply with a roll of my eyes

"Now let's go and complete this dare"

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Me and Harry laugh as we stumble into Zayn and Josh's hotel room

"What happened?" Zayn asks

"Harry was pretending to be drunk and he was asking the receptionist to directions to a strip club and the receptionist said that he would strip for him-"

"IT WAS A GUY?" Louis asks laughing

"YES! And he tried to get up all on Harry and he slapped his bum!" I say in between laughs

"I'm never doing that again" Harry mumbles

I was laughing so hard I couldn't breathe

Harry spun the bottle that landed on Niall

"Truth" Niall says not wanting to do a dare after what just happened with Harry

Harry looked over at Danielle who shook her head

"Where did you and Valerie get beer from?" He asks amusement in his eyes

"What how did you know?" Niall asks looking over at me. I shrug my shoulders without a clue of how Harry knew about that night

"Me and everyone else couldn't sleep and we went to Valerie's room and it was slightly open and we saw you guys drinking beer" Harry states looking over Danielle the whole time. She gave him a reassuring smile

"Well, me and Valerie snuck into Laura's house and stole some beer from their" Niall ads with a shrug

"Oh, so badass" Louis states a smirk clear on his lips

I let out a small laugh

"I'm getting really bored" Zayn sighs

"Me too" suddenly an idea strikes me "Let's go to a club tomorrow might" I say with a smile

"But we're underage" Harry replies

"You guys are famous don't tell me you don't have connections" I sigh

The boys look at each other

"YOU ARE A GENIUS" Josh screams

"Why thank you" I reply

"But what are we supposed to do right now, Truth or Dare is getting so boring" I whine

"We're going to the beach" Louis announces

"What why?" Taylor asks

"Trust me" He replies

"You out of all people, I refuse to trust" Eleanor says with her hands on her hips

"Oh shush you, just trust me you guys, let's go" Louis says doing a superman pose

I thwack his head and follow the rest of the gang to the beech

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~**~

It was 48 degrees out and it was around 12 at night. Most people would be in bed, snuggling with their blankets after a long, nice, warm shower and later curled up with a nice book to read. Where am I? I'm at a bloody beach freezing to death. All I could do was blame Louis Tomlinson

"Okay, you all understand the rules?" Louis asks again

Since we were all bored, we went to the beach. We had made up a game that we were all going to go into the freezing cold water and whoever goes in the deepest, wins. Whoever chickens out and runs away has to do everyone's laundry for the rest of the trip. I just prayed it wasn't me, I already had trouble doing my own laundry imagine doing 9 other peoples laundry too is crazy!

We were standing right near where the waves crashed onto the sand

"On 3" Louis starts

I was going to die

"1.."

I'm going to die

"2..."

I'm going to die

"3!"

"I'm going to die" where my last thoughts as I plunged my body into the water. My whole entire body froze and numbed, and it took every muscle in my body not to run out of the ice cold water crying. I kept going deeper into the water and looked up to see no one had chickened out yet. My whole body rocked with the waved, I was so cold, if I didn't get out soon, my arms and legs would run away

I couldn't take it anymore, the water was up to my boobs, and they were so cold and numb, I have a feeling I dropped one. What a turn off would it be if I only had one boob?

I was going to turn around and go back, but from the corner of my eyes, I saw Zayn running out of the water

"DAMN THAT WAS FREEZING" He screams burying himself into the sand to keep him warm. Before I could even blink, we were all running out of the water, since Zayn had already lost. Normally, I would stay in the longest, just because I'm a bit competitive, but this was impossible, I rather someone blend my eyeballs!

"DID NO ONE THINK THIS THROUGH? WE ARE FREEZING COLD, AND WET, AND WE HAVE TO WALK BACK TO THE HOTEL" Niall screams clearly annoyed

We all fall silent, thinking about how we were going ot get back to the hotel

I sigh "Let's get walking"

"ARE YOU STUPID DO YOU KNOW HOW-" Niall starts

"DO YOU HAVE A BETTER IDEA? YOU STAY HERE AND WAIT FOR ALIENS TO TAKE YOU BACK TO THE HOTEL OKAY" I scream back at him

Everyone bursts out laughing except for Niall who just gives me an annoyed expression. That's how we worked, fought like husband and wife yet loved each other like brother and sister

"YOU TOLD HIM" Danielle says snapping her fingers

I let out a bark of laughter and grab her hand in mines

"Shall we?" I ask pointing forward asking her to leave this freezing beach

"We shall!" She replies giggling and leading me towards the hotel

"You guys?" Liam shouts over our shoulder

"WHAT?" Danielle hollars back

"Hotels that way" Liam says pointing the other way

I scowl "I knew that"

Josh lets out a small laugh "Sure you did"

"Oh shut up Josh" I mutter smacking him on the head

"Hey!" He pouts

I smile at him and pat his head "Grow a pair" I finish with a smile

He stares at me, his mouth hanging open, which sends me into hysterics. Of course I was cold, numb, tired, but this was actually kind of fun! However, that does not mean I will be doing it again, because I will not even think about coming to the beach at night ever again

"OG TO THE HOTE LWE GO!" I scream running towards the beach

I see Niall's mood is a bit better and he's running right beside me

"I bet I can get there faster then you can" He tells me

Even though  I couldn't run fast for the life of me, I was  very competitive, and I wasn't goingto let Niall win this

"You're on blonde" I reply running fast then I knew my legs could

*~*~*~*~*~*

I walked into my room, panting, holding my knees. My arms were on my back, and I was rying to calm my racing heart

I had beat Niall for once! I didn't even have time to let that thought process, as the door to my hotel room flew open to reveal Niall

His eyes were wide "You-you beat me!" He screeches

"That's right! What are you gonna do bout it?!" I ask I was so proud of myself, I ran a little bit less than a mile! It may not seem like a lot, but coming from me, believe me it was a lot. The most exercise I did ever since PE stopped in school, was accidently fall of my bed in the mornings

I started doing a happy dance and I heard Niall laughing

"Don't dance" HE says grabbing my shoulders to hold me still

I stick my tongue out at him but start laughing

"When do you think the rest of our little crew is going to get here?" I ask him

"I don't know" He admits truthfully

"So what do you want to do until they come?" I ask

"I don't know" He repeats

"You're so boring! I have an idea!" I say clapping my hands

"What?" He asks looking at me cursorily

"Help me pick out an outfit for tomorrow" I say. We were going to go out clubbing tomorrow night, and I needed help picking out an outfit! I knew whatever I wore, Niall wouldn't approve, so might as well let him help me pick out the outfit then him making me change 838595 times

"No" He says

"Okay then I'm going naked" I say with a shrug, I knew Niall wanted me to wear a turtle neck to a club, he was always so protective of what I wore. I don't dress like a slut, but come one, when you go to have a fun night out, who wears a turtle neck?!\

"Fine" He mutters following me to the room

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~

I had tried on over 13 different outfits, it was 3 in the morning, and Niall had denied every single one of them! Taylor was back, and she was asleep on the bed, but  I didn't let Niall leave because I needed him to help me!

"What do you want me to wear? My ugly holiday sweater my mum bought me?" I hiss

He smiles "That would be perfect"

I sigh "I give up!" Just as the words left my mouth, I saw a cute shirt on the side of my suitcase. I picked it up and smiled. It was a white crop top, and the back of it had horizontal lines that cut it open. I never wore it because it was too revealing. When I came to California, I promised myself that I was going to go out of my comfort zone, and just have fun. That's why when I went to dinner with my mum and her boss; I wore a bit shorter of a dress, and some different makeup. I wanted to try something new

"You are not going to wear that" Niall scolds

 "Niall, loosen up! Come on!" I tell him

"No! I don't want you to get raped!" He practically screams at me

I shush him "Taylor will wake up"

"Valerie, you are not wearing that out" He tells me again

"Niall, it's not that bad"  To be honest, it wasn't! A lot of people wore shirts like this all the time!

"No it's not, but Valerie, I don't want you to hook up with someone and come home pregnant!" He tells me

"Pregnant? Really Niall?" I laugh

"It could happen! You aren't ugly any guy would want to get in your pants" He whines

I burst out laughing "Gees thanks Niall"

He cracks a smile

"I have the perfect shorts to wear with this too!" I smile taking out my Forever 21 bag from the floor. I bought these black leather shorts from there when I went shopping with Eleanor, Danielle, and Taylor

Niall eyes widen

"You really are pushing me" He says

"Niall, I want to try something new, I'm so boring!" I explain

"You are one of the most entertaining people I know, if its stealing beer from your mum, going to the beach in the middle of the night, crashing a car, Valerie, I don't know if you've noticed but we aren't anywhere near normal" He tells me

"I meant my look" I explain

"Your look is fine Valerie" He reassures me

I guess he was right, I wasn't ever too revealing or covering too much. I was the perfect blend when it came to knowing how much to show

"I guess, but Niall, it's a night out, what else should I wear?" I ask

He sighs "I guess that outfits okay"

 "YES!" I say throwing the clothes onto the floor and doing a happy dance

"What did I tell you about that stupid happy dance of yours?"

I stick my tongue out at him and continue to do my happy dance

Niall laughs and joins me

Here we were in my hotel room, doing a retarded happy dance

"And I have the perfect jewelry-" I begin

Niall groans

"Save that talk for Taylor, I'm beat!" He tells me

"Now you know how difficult it is to be a girl!" I tell him

"What are you wearing tomorrow?" I ask him

"This really cute hot pink dress-" Niall begins in a high pitched voice

I burst out laughing

"You lil slut!" I tell him

"My boobs look great in it!" He continues grabbing his nonexistent boobs

I was literally on the floor laughing. Niall could keep me entertained for hours on end

"And don't even get me started of how good my ass looks in them" He says smiling

I wipe the tears from my eyes and finally calm down

"Damn I'm tired. I'm going to get going to my hotel room, good night Valerie" Niall says

"Night, and Niall?" I ask

"Yeah?" He asks facing me

"I'm going to have borrow that pink dress of yours" I tell him with a wink

HE lets out a bark of laughter and leaves my hotel room

Author's Note!

This was a very quick upload for me okay, I never EVER update this fast, I'm so proud of myself! Even if it meant getting my laptop taken away for the next couple of day, you guys are worth it (: I'm going to ask for 200 votes, idk if you guys will be able to do it, I'm asking for a lot. And if it's too much, I'm sorry! I WAS NUMBER 18 IN FANFICTION I WAS SO HAPPY OMG. UGH I LOVE ALL OF YOU <3  It was really weird even after I posted my last authors note, people were still messaging me asking me to get them together. Sorry if I come off a bit rude when I say this but, it's my story, and I'm going to write it the way I want to (: And I read all your comments I swear, I just don't get time to reply to all of them )': Love you my lovelies! Mwah :* Remember to vote, and PLEASE COMMENT! It encourages me to go on


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