by joni_one
At first I would like to thank you for giving us a chance. Hope you would keep supporting us throughout our journey.
Reviewer: lead-with-love
I like the plot. It's common yet very uncommon. It gives you that thoughts you are looking for along with the uniqueness. The cover is a little blurry. I wish you could just pick a clearer image and make the title bolder. That way you can grab the reader's attention. Plus you should add the author's name to the cover too. I love the whimsical ways you named the chapters, it kinda gives a flowy vibe to the story. Some of your chapters are short I guess.
The next thing I would say is about your literature. Your story has potential. It could use a little magic of words or phrases. I, myself am not that good with words. But I really find that quality attractive whenever I am reading a book. There are some minor errors in grammars or spellings. Nothing a quick revision cannot fix. I would say you have done a great job and keep it up.