by oompa_2
At first I would like to thank you for giving us a chance. Hope you would keep supporting us throughout our journey.
Reviewer: Arisha_Ibnath
The title itself speaks something exciting but I can't say the same to your cover. Your cover needs a lot of spice as Whenever we see a book we tend to get attracted to the cover The story is so, powerful and brilliant. I could see so much potential in this story that I was hooked up. I couldn't stop.
The flow was good but your characters seem to come out of nowhere in between conversations, that put me off or lost the magic I was attuned with. You could declare the characters name or any clue so that readers don't get confused.
The story is beautiful. There was fantasy also sci fi...also a promise of romance. What do we need more? The creative names of the power interested me a lot. You have a great potential and I m completely in love with your writing.