Love.
A word so simple yet so complex. For Bruce, it meant family. Family that he lost and the family he created. But love can be harsh, especially if you can't express it.
"Bruce I love you but do you?"
"I love you dad."
"Old man, I once cared for...
Thank you for reading and joining me on this journey. I hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.
But.....
Before you all run off, please take a few seconds of your precious time to give your feedback / opinions. I would appreciate the feedback and if you don't feel comfortable commenting here, DM me. I promise I won't bite.
Feel free to DM me.
Here are some questions that I hope you would consider answering.
1. What did you like about this book? What's something that could be better?
2. How did I do on character development?
3. Did you like the ending?
4. Was the story what you expected? Met your expectations? Or the summary/description?
My reflection:
I enjoyed writing this story a lot. I had fun with it and it was nice writing as I was going. I had no plan for what would happen next. The story just happened. I write to practice and improve because I know my writing is anything but good. I know the story lacks of a plot but it wasn't really meant to have one. I suck at plots. This was to practice character development. I tried but feel I didn't quite get there yet but I'll keep working. Thank you for bearing with me.
I enjoyed reading your comments.
I wanna give a special thanks to @honeylovingbear @octoberbabyj @Curious_Rae for your support! Your kind words kept me encouraged so thank you.
More Reflection after editing (a year or so later):
I wanted to see how my writing has changed so I decided to re-read this and was honestly was embarrassed by my own writing and story telling. Couldn't help but edit stuff (had to stop myself from changing plot because I wanted to keep this as is.) I totally ignored Bruce and Jane's relationship. Jane had a lot of potential but I didn't flush her character out. She had a lot of insecurities and baggage which I didn't address.
Love you all! Till next time!
Take care and be safe!
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