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Alright two quick things.  First I couldn't resist with the title, ive been changing the lyrics to stupid songs all week.  Besides i was hoping that the correlation between both Noah and Steve being concerned with the doors being locked was obvious.  And speaking of Steve.  Normally i like everything to be a surprise with my stories BUT sometimes when i read a story, if i think something that isn't a pivotal plot point but would still make me dislike a character i like in a story, is going to happen i cant enjoy the rest of the story bc i am too paranoid that the awful thing is going to happen.  So i am going to tell you that there isn't any way anything is going to happen between Lennie and Steve.  Their relationship is just a friendship and neither of them like each other more than friends.  She would never do that to her best friend.

i would hope all that friendship stuff i put in the story would be enough to clue you in to nothing is going to happen.  i just know that if i was reading this story and thought that they were going to get together, i wouldnt be able to enjoy the story bc that would make me dislike Steve and Lennie too much.

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