HORROR RESULTS

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Judges: PrincessAurora016

AndSiriusly_Jaidyn

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EMBERS:

SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 10
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 50

WRITE UP: Outstanding!

The story is absolutely outstanding! The grammar and spelling is totally phenomenal. The book cover is catchy and the description is hooking. The amazing storyline keeps you on the edge and the reader never knows what would happen next. Overall experience- marvelous!

OTHER JUDGE:

SPELLING 7

GRAMMER 8

BOOK COVER 7

STORY DESCRIPTION 9

STORY LINE 9

TOTAL 40

WRITEUP: FABULOUS

FINAL MARKS: 41

THE LONE HOME :

SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 9
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 49

WRITE UP: FABULOUS!

The story is amazing and the grammar is perfect. Though there are a few misspellings in the description as well as the first chapter. The book cover is appealing. The story description is compelling and nudges the reader to read more. The story line hooks the reader right from the first chapter!

OTHER JUDGE:
SPELLING 8

GRAMMER 7

BOOK COVER 9

STORY DESCRIPTION 10

STORY LINE 9

TOTAL 43

WRITE UP: OUTSTANDING

FINAL MARKS: 43

TERRA FIRMA :

SPELLING 8
GRAMMER 8
BOOK COVER 8
STORY DESCRIPTION 5
STORY LINE 4

TOTAL: 33

WRITE UP: GOOD

The book cover is amazing and the grammar is on the point. But there are some misspellings. The story description and story line were both rather confusing. As I was reading the story I had no idea whats was going on, how the world had gotten to be so destroyed. The story was not interesting enough, as u felt there was not enough details...

A GHOST STORY

SPELLING 9
GRAMMER 9
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 48

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