Hey KpopMahLifeu, I'm sorry giving you your review so late, but I just started College and it's not been easy, so🥺
Anyways let's get into it!
Format:
1. Book Cover
-Is it eye-catching?
-Does it go well with the plot?
2. Title
-Will it attract readers?
-Does it go well with the plot?
3. Description
-Is it interesting?
-How much of the plot it gives away?
-Does it attract readers?
4. Plot
-Is it overused or cliche?
-Does it make sense?
5. Storyline
-Do you think the story progresses well?
-Any potholes?
6. Ending
-How is the ending?
7. Emotion check
-How would the reader feel while reading or after he/she finishes the story.
8. Grammar, Vocabulary, description.
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BOOK COVER:
The concept of your book cover is cute, matching the plot, so I'd say it is quite good.
It can attract the reader if the shipe hopekook strongly✌🏻
TITLE: GETTING (BACK) TOGETHER
The title makes it catchy because of the was you've written 'back' in the brackets, I makes the reader curious as to what might have happened.
DISCRIPTION:
The description actually made me more curious as to what might have happened in their past!! I was quite excited to read it.
PLOT:
Oneshots generally don't have much of a plot, but yours did! And I was fascinated to read it.
It was different than all the other oneshots that I've read, and any reader have read so you did a good job. Oh and I love how Vmin are together lol.
STORYLINE:
There's not much to say about storyline in a oneshot so.
ENDING & EMOTION CHECK:
The ending was cute!!! And it satisfied me, I was quite well written👍🏻
As for the emotion check, I kept feeling giddy all the time and not every book makes me feel that.
Also I blushed when kook carried hobi princess style haha.
8. Grammar, Vocabulary, Description:
I noticed a few 'there' written as 'their' but except for that everything was great!
And I could imagine the scenes so the description was well done too!👍🏻
OVERALL:
You have written a great oneshot! I absolutely loved it, if you can then re read it and correct the 'there' and everything will be perfect then!🤩
Sorry for the late review again😓
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