Hi guys! Criticism would be much needed because I don't have an editor and I wrote this book when I was like, 13 or 14 haha.
I'm several years older now and through these years there were countless writers blocks and bursts of writing ideas.
I will not hate you or think negatively of you if you give me constructive criticism.
Reading my own story is quite cringeworthy so please help me as to not make it so cringe.
Thank you!
-Lilstar319
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Daughter of Nyx
FanfictionThe world will end one day And so will your life You are just a puny little demigod Who can't use the given time Why waste it for a tasteless war? Have some wine and some fun Stop wanting more Nights burden and Day's enemy One relative and no frien...
