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Vacation on the Mountains

     Where is your favorite place to relax on vacation? The mountains are the perfect place to me. The air and water are so cold, wet, and fresh. I enjoy the view of the mountains, that is so beutiful and green. In the morning the clouds look very blue, the sun is very bright and the air is cool. I come out to sightseeing. Sunrise is one of the magic hours that must be seen. The view is amazing. I can see the rice fields, trees and houses from the top of the mountain. They look so small and beautiful. The yellow color of sunrise makes the atmosphere peacefull and warm. The maountains are noisy with the sound of birds and sometimes the sound of running water. I feel so happy and relaxed. When I am on vacation, I will always go to the mountains.

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Writing by Veggyana Mauliddyah.

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