101 Writing Tips from an Exhausted Reviewer

Past vs Present Tense

Some people, on the other hand, think present tense is fantastic. They find it more immersive and hooking. Some suggest that the novelty of it makes the reader pay closer attention. Some suggest that the immediacy of the verbs alone makes the events of the story seem more intense.

In other words, one tense is not better than the other. They are both effective in their own manner and, as long as they are mastered and used appropriately, then it doesn't matter which you choose.

My advice? While present tense is seen as more 'eccentric and unique' and past tense is seen as more 'traditional and common', write in whatever you feel most comfortable in. Don't worry about whether readers will turn away due to your tense. Regardless of a tense, a good story with enticing characters and a gripping plot is all you need.

So, if you write a story about Harry Styles and a French Fry, it doesn't matter what tense you use. No one will read it. Except me. Wait, never mind, just asked Painite -- she'll read it, too!

Now, let's say you've chosen your tense. Each tense has a few forms, and it's important that you know them before you start writing them.

Forms of Present Tense:

1. Simple Present:

French Fry slaps him on the face.

In other words, general story-telling. 'He says, she walks, they cry.'

2. Present Perfect:

French Fry has slapped him on the face.

Since it is has slapped, this is still present tense. This form is used to show the past in present tense. For example, a good way to use the above example is:

My gaze flickers between Harry's red cheek and French Fry's outstretched potato fingers. I can't believe my own eyes.

French Fry has slapped him square on the face.

3. Present Continuous:

French Fry is slapping him on the face.

This is showing things that are happening in the now -- even more so that simple present tense. In this example, we see French Fry slapping him on the face. We are reading that it is happening.

4. Present Perfect Continuous:

French Fry has been slapping him on the face.

Oh, poor Harry Styles if this is the case. Why? This means that the action started in the past, is continuing in the present (and may also happen in the future!).

5. Future in the Present:

French Fry will be slapping him on the face.

This tells you something that is going to happen in the future, but is written in present tense.

Now, what about past tense? This is where the fun really begins. There are nine of these.

1. Simple Past:

French Fry slapped him on the face.

Easy. Event occured in the past.

2. Past Perfect

French Fry had slapped him on the face.

This is talking about the past of what is happening in the story.

3. Past Continuous:

French Fry was slapping him on the face.

Again, similar to Present Continuous, it is somewhat more in the moment. We don't see that he was slapped in the face. We see the slapping of the face.

4. Past Perfect Continuous

French Fry had been slapping him on the face.

This conveys something that occurred in the past, continued to occur in the present, but is no longer occurring now.

And, that's it-- wait, there's more? Poor Harry and his cheek!

5. Past Habitual:

French Fry used to slap him on the face.

This describes something that once happened continuously or repeatedly. This can also be used in present tense. For example:

French Fry used to slap him on the face, but now she slaps him on his fingernail.

6. Time-Specific Past Habitual:

Back in 1891, French Fry would slap him on the face.

In this example of past habitual, a time-frame is included. And, yes, I've decided to make this a historical fiction. Fight me. Once again, this can be used in present tense stories.

7. Past Intensive:

French Fry did slap him on the face.

This is mostly used to confirm something that has already happened. This can be used to confirm events in stories written in present tense. Example:

I admit it — French Fry did slap him in the face. And I feel horrible for not saying anything about it.

8. Future in the Past:

French Fry was going to slap him on the face.

The name makes it quite obvious. This describes something that will happen in the future of the story without breaking out of past tense.

9. Past-Perfect Subjunctive:

Had he not been so handsome in a chicken suit, French Fry would have slapped him by now.

This one is a bit complex, but basically, it describes a counterfactual event in past tense.

So, by now, you're probably a bit overwhelmed. A bit confused. Are you only supposed to use one form of each tense? Absolutely not. These are just here to guide you when you're unsure if what you've written is conveying what you wanted it to convey. You're supposed to use a mix between each type of past tense, or each type of present tense.

Here are some ground rules, however:

1. Keep it consistent between past and present. Do not switch from past to present within your story (unless, of course, we're talking a completely different style -- flashback, letter writing, flashforward). There is nothing more disconcerting that changing tenses every second word.

2. Don't overuse the continuous forms. There are some instances where it is effective to use the continuous form. For example:

French Fry looked at Harry Styles and rolled her potato eyes. He was daydreaming. Again.

However, let's look at:

He was in love with strawberry ice-cream.

Is it more effective to say that he was in love with French Fry? Or is it more effective to just write:

He loved strawberry ice-cream.

Both of them are grammatically correct, and both of them work fine. However, you just need to make sure you don't overuse the 'he was' or 'he is' before the verb. It can get jarring for the reader.

Otherwise, that's it! Choose your tense and go to town! I hope you found this chapter informative and helpful. As always, if you have topics you would like me to discuss, let me know! Remember, you can also keep them light-hearted -- do you want me to write a ridiculously sugar-coated review? Or should I take out my kitchen knives and tear my own manuscript to shreds? Or should I talk about the types of authors? The types of awards on Wattpad? How to get reads on Wattpad? Should I do some myth-busting on what it's like to be a reviewer/community admin? Let me know. I'm always open to feedback.

In the next chapter, we will discuss planning a story and how to keep a plot cohesive. Stay tuned!