OBSTRUCTED HEART

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Author:  smritiagr

Genre: Romance

Age Category: Teen-Adult

Summary:  Story revolves around Anika's life after she settles as a store owner, posterior to her parents demise.  She raised her only sister, all by herself since she was 16.
After a few months of getting to know each other, Ketu proposed her for marriage.  But, her love life, while many secrets unfold gradually, suffered the lack of strong bond.
Will Anika and Ketu endive this together?
Or will Ketu be an equivalent of a "ketu" in her kundali?

•MY REVIEW•
Category 1
Book cover and description

I really love the cover; but the description could be better.

4/5

Category 2
Word choice, punctuation, grammar, spelling, and sentence and paragraph structure

There is a couple of misplaced commas and some sentences could flow better.  Overall, great descriptive words.

3.5/5

Category 3
Plot, setting, background/stories, and characters

The plot is okay but it wasn't interesting.  It needs more background of some of the characters.

3/5

Category 4
Writing style and pace on the story

The pace of the story is slow.

2/5

Category 5
Details and descriptions

Every place is described in most perfect detail.

5/5

Category 6
Originality (overall creativity)

The writer could be more creative.  Other than that it's a pretty good story so far.

4/5

TOTAL:  21.5/30  72%

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