Chapter 1: The soulmark (Discontinued)

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A/N: I will be restarting this story the new chapters will be post on 4-27-19 and/or 4-28-19

A/N:One piece does not belong to me nor do any of the characters and pictures they belong to Eiichiro Oda :( also this will be my first time writing a story so I would like to ask you if you can give me positive feedback on how I can make this story better. Thank you and enjoy!
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"Shitty geezer, can I talk to you for a minute? I need you to answer my questions" grey eyes stared questionably at the determined filled 12-year-old Ace "Sure brat but... CALL ME GRANDPA!!!!!!!" "NO WAY IN HELL SHITTY GEEZER!!!!" "HUH AND WHY THE HELL NOT BRAT!?!?!" "I'LL START CALLING YOU GRANDPA WHEN YOU STOP CALLING ME BRAT!!!" "HUH, WHY THE HELL SHOULD I DO THAT!?!?!?!" "WELL, THEN YOU ANSWERED YOUR OWN QUESTION!!! .....were getting off track." "Hmm...oh right...what do you want to talk about brat?" questioned Garp "Umm...before that...can we maybe go somewhere private first?" Ace nervously spoke out "Alright lead the way brat."
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" Jiji...I got my soulmate mark ....and I remembered you saying everyone has a mark which will lead them to their soulmate and gives them hints on who it may be...so...I was wondering if you may know anything about mine...which can perhaps lead me to my soulmate." ace shyly confessed out "hmm...alright let me see it Ace and I'll tell you if I can recognize it to someone."
"It's umm on my collarbone." ace says as he unconsciously lowers his shirt down to show a picture of a blue and yellow Phoenix on his collarbone going towards the left side of his neck (Picture above but imagine it blue and yellow not black and white.) Garp's serious voice startles ace and what he says next ruins Aces view on soul mates "Ace...Your soulmate is...don't go looking for them got it. Your soulmate is a very dangerous person so promise me you won't try to find them." "WHAT!!! Why not!?!?! You told me that soulmates are meant to be your precious person and that they are your other half. They are supposed to make you feel whole and now you're telling me because their dangerous I can't be with them or look-" "ACE!!! PROMISE ME YOU WON'T EVER LOOK FOR THEM! GOT IT!! PROMISE ME" "WHY SHOULD I PROMISE TO NOT TRY AND FIND THEM?!?!?" "BECAUSE!!! THEY WON'T HESITATE ON KILLING YOU!!!".............."what do you mean they won't hesitate on killing me Jiji?" ace weakly asked 'I hate having to lie to him but if it will protect him...then so be it.' "Ace, like I told you they are a very dangerous person and they won't hesitate on killing you got it-" yeah"-so promise me you won't try to find them." " I promise I won't look for them." ace sadly spoke out while on the inside his heart was slowing shattering " Good...well I got to go back to work so I'll leave you here."Garp spoke out as he was leaving ace to his thoughts 'I can't have a soulmate?....... They were right of course a monster like me can't have one. This sucks...why me why do I have to have a soulmate who wants me dead.' Ace laid himself against a tree as he started to cry himself to sleep
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Marco's P.O.V( in commanders meeting)
"Anything to report my sons?" Pops questioned us but I could hardly focus on what he was saying as I felt a searing pain on the left side of my neck and collarbone. A sudden gasp left me as I fell out of my chair clutching my neck. This a new experience as I don't really feel pain seeing as my devil fruit prevents me from feeling pain 'what's happening to me?  Why are they yelling so loud?'
"MARCO!!!!"
"HEY!!!WHAT'S WRONG?!?!?!"
"SOMEBODY GET BAY!!!!"
"My son answers us, can you hear us?" "Ye-yeah... I can...hear you guys."Marco replied as he slowing sat up while clutching his neck "My son are you alright now?" " Y-yeah, my neck is hurting but the pain is slowly going away now."Marco gritted out in pain "May I see your neck to see what is wrong my boy?" Oyaji carefully asked me 'sigh' "yeah," I said as I carefully let go of my neck and turned my head so they can see it. I heard collected sharp intakes of breaths around as well as surprised noises "What's wrong with my neck?" I questioned with a raise of my eyebrow "M-macro ....y-you got..your soulmate mark!" Thatch breathed out in stutters "Haha very funny Thatch. Don't joke around with that."I was annoyed he would even joke about that seeing as he knows I don't have a soulmate "M-macro, Thatch isn't lying about this. It's true, here look into my mirror."Izo told me as he handed me his makeup mirror. I stared in shock because staring back at me was an image of a red phoenix on my neck. (Imagine it red and orange)

 (Imagine it red and orange)

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"W-what the....wait this means my soul mates birthday was yesterday and their 12 years old!?!?!"I exclaimed out "Well at least this means you won't be a lonely grandpa for the rest of your life, pineapple-head"thatch slyly told me
"THATCH" I barked at him as he ran out of the room laughing his head off. 'I won't be alone anymore huh ... I can't wait to meet you my soulmate.'
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Please comment on how I did and please give me advice on how I can make this a better story Thank you!😄

Oh yeah, this is also a soulmate AU where 1 day after your 12 birthday you receive your soulmate mark and if your soulmate is younger then you then you don't get it until they do. The mark gives you a big hint on who it may be. I will also be changing Ace's devil fruit as you may probably know to which one by Marco's soul mate mark.
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Published: 9/9/18 (Sep.9,2018)
Word count: 1037

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