My Random Thoughts

Long Term Project That I'm Doing

"Fine Mom", Ash said. Ash quickly finished up his food.

"Well I'm going to sleep", Ash said out loud. "Night Ash", Everyone said.

Now's here's a snip-it of the revamped chapter:

It was a beautiful day in Kanto. Pidgeys were singing and Diglets were well digging.

Today we head to a small place called Pallet Town, home of no other than Ash Ketchum and his partner Pikachu.

Ash and Pikachu had just come back from his journey from Kalos and he's ecstatic to go somewhere new.

And so, our journey begins with a tummy grumble.

"Man, I sure am hungry," A raven haired boy said bluntly.

"Pika piii," Pikachu said in agreement with his trainer.

"I'm making food as fast as I can sweetie," Delia replied.

"Well I need lots of energy for when I go to that new region!" Ash exclaimed.

"Where are you even going, Ashy-boy?" Gary teased.

"Uhhh..," Ash hadn't thought that far ahead. "None of your business Gary!"

"Well," Prof. Oak started. "You just came back from the Kalos region, so how about Alola, or the other parts of Unova, maybe the-."

Ash cut him off. "Wait did you just say other parts of Unova?"

"Yeah," the Professor said. "What about it?"

"WAAA?! I NEVER KNEW THERE WERE OTHER PARTS OF UNOVA!" Ash yelled as he jumped out of his seat.

"Yo, Ash calm down," said Gary. "It's not that serious."

"Oh, sorry, I just got worked up," said Ash sitting back down.

"Well Ash, those areas of Unova were discovered about a few months after you went to Kalos so you couldn't have known." Oak explained.

"Alright, then it's settled! I'm going back to Unova!" Ash shouted.

"Pikaaa," Pikachu exclaimed.

"Alright Ash, but can you stay at least one day here? After all you're my only son." Delia asked.

"Sure Mom." Ash said. "One day wouldn't hurt!"

Ash and Pikachu hurried up and finished their food.

"Okay Pikachu, let's go and train!" Ash said out loud.

"Pikachu!" Pikachu said as he ran after Ash.

"He has too much energy," Gary stated.

"That's the way I like it," Delia said as she grabbed Ash and Pikachu's dishes to wash.

Ash and Pikachu as well as the rest of Ash's Pokemon began training. They must've lost track of time because Ash went to bed pretty late.

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As you can see, it's waayyyy better.

So that's what I've been doing.

I was also thinking of continuing the book. I already have a new chapter written and now we wait for me to edit and change the existing chapters.

Anyway guys I don't know when that's coming out but hey, at least I'm doing something. It'll be published on CoolDude627

Hmmm who should I tag...

wigglewriggle Did I tag you already? I hope not. Cause you'd be annoyed...