Smile

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"Your smile is beautiful!"
The woman admired the younger boy. The boy blushed and tilted his head down to hide the blush forming on his cheeks. He shyly says thank you.
" Your parents must love you so much! You're adorable!"
The boy whispers another thank you before zipping down the road with a plastic bag in hand. His shoes click on the sidewalk as the plastic bag ruffles with each step.
The peaceful and neat surroundings of the town slowly become more hostile and dirty as he races through different alleyways. 
Finally, the boy then reaches a metal door in one of the alleyways. Upon opening it, a dark and open room greets him, the only light coming from a TV. Its light illuminating the faces of a man and woman huddled on an old, green sofa. Beer bottles lay empty and discarded on the floor below the man. The smell of alcohol drifting towards him barely making him wince.
The boy then walks into the kitchen and sets the plastic bag down on the counter.
" Finally your back! What took you so long! Bring me my smokes!"
The harsh and ruff voice of the woman doesn't affect the boy as he slowly inched towards the living room, after reaching into the plastic bag.
"Hurry!"
The boy stands in front of the woman with his hands behind his back. The woman casting him an irritated glare.
"Give it to me already!"
The boy slowly brings his hands from behind his back. The woman's face falls.
"H-how d-did you get that?"
The boy glances at the man. The man's body slumped on the couch as foam and drool drip from the corners of his mouth. His eyes lazily half opened, eyes glazed over.
The boy looks at the woman. The woman who did everything, but love him. The woman's face pales as she stares at the boy.
The corners of his mouth slowly lifting upward. The woman's eyes widening with his smile, frozen in fear, as he lifts the metal blade.
" I have a beautiful smile."

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A/N
Wow I actually decided to write something and post it. Anyway, I'm a new writer here on wattpad, so don't expect anything good. I do write outside of wattpad since way back, but never published anything not even online, so woohoo.
This story is actually a prompt idea I found online. It's where you end the story by using the same sentence you started with to create a horror, or suspense, mood. (Of course you can adapt it slightly like I did)
I tried it and found it fun to do and highly encourage others to do the same. It doesn't have to be as long as mine, or anything like mine. You make it the way you want! I found it fun to see where you could take the prompt.
Anyway, I'm writing long again. To sum
up, don't expect much activity from me, I really don't plan on publishing anything big, at most a few quick read stories, or even some with 2 to 3 chapters.
So hope you enjoy and don't forget to SMILE!!!

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⏰ Last updated: Nov 09, 2018 ⏰

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