Please take this into consideration that this is the very first book that I am making online and showing to the world. I would like to have feedback and criticism for my work because I know there is always room to improve and edit chapters. I've had this idea about this book probably since the beginning of 2017 and it may not be perfect but that's why I ask for the people's word and to tell me what needs to be fixed or be improved. I hope to one day make this into an actual book and become a writer and everyone starts from somewhere and this is where I'm trying to start. This site is a way for random strangers to enjoy other's writing and to communicate and critique the works if so needed and I will not stress this enough by saying please tell me something is wrong or could be better because it helps me and my future go on if others pitch in and say something. Thank you for giving me any advice or positive words for my writing and I hope you enjoy the book
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The Three Worlds
FantasyA girl born with powers unknown to anyone on the planet or planets. Her entire life she could see the glow of life in anything and but also the agony of pain in others. Her sixteenth birthday her life changes very drastically and see's the world dif...
