The Sister Makeover (previously titled Ms. Popularity and Ms. Nerd are Sisters?)

Chapter 5 (re-edited version)

A/N: 

The re-edited version of chapter 5 wil have slight changes, but not enough so the plot is different. 

Thanks for reading!

-F4E

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I smoothed down my hair for the final time when looking in the mirror. I was wearing an off the shoulder top with dark skinny jeans. My blond hair was kept down and I added some eyeliner to bring out my hazel eyes. I slipped on my heels.

I was nervous because today would be the first day people saw the new me. I had also realized I would have no friends because of that no good Ryan. Who does he think he is? I thought he would be happy for me! He doesn't even know how much I get teased at school.

I wiped my sweaty palms on my jeans and went downstairs. Because, I didn't learn fully how to walk in heels, I tripped and fell downstairs.

"Okay, I'm going barefoot today," I muttered to myself.

I grabbed an apple and was about to head out to catchh the bus when I heard Jenny's voice.

"You're not thinking of taking the bus are you?" she asked.

"Yeah. I better go before the bus leaves without me."

She raised her eyebrows. "You're coming with me, girly."

I sighed. Before I could protest she was pushing me in her car. I hoped Jenny would take her time to get to school because I was so nervous, but it only took a few minutes to get to school. Perfect.

I weighed my options. I could fake being sick. Maybe even faint? I couldn't miss school. I got out of the car slowly and grabbed my old red backpack. It was held together by ducktape and I was too lazy to buy a new one.

I walked beside Jenny and nearly tripped on my heels. These are torture weapond used by the devil. Speaking of the devil, Charlotte walked up to us, her fiery hair swinging behing her.

"Hey Jen. Who's your friend?" Charlotte said eyeing me curiously.

"She's my-"

"I'm her cousin from Florida," I said interuppting Jenny.

Florida? What was I thinking? I know I have a tan compaired to Jenny's pale skin, but Florida? "My name is umm......" I thought of a name. "My name is Erica. And you are?" I replied. I saw Jenny's eyebrows raise.

"I'm Charlotte.  Are you staying here for long?" Charlotte said. I saw jealousy flash across her eyes. I grinned and nodded. "Anyways, Jenny have you seen Elizabeth? I have a suprise for her." Charlotte smiled evily.

"She transfered. Sorry, I guess you just have to find a new playtoy," I said shrugging my shoulders. Her mouth formed an O.

I realized I'm going to have fun with this. I can get revenge on all the people who made my life a living hell.

As I was walking into the building, I collided with a body. It was Ryan.

"Watch where you're going!" I snapped angrily.

"Listen Liz-"

"Shhh!!! Someone might hear!" I covered my hand over his mouth. "It's Erica. Got it?"

He nodded. I let go and walked away.

All thoughout the day, I've gotten a few wolf whistles, numbers (which I threw away), and glares from girls. Guess I have new enemies.

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As I was walking to class, I admired all the posters for the dance that coming up soon. The bright flyers stood out against the pale walls. I heard the bell and was late for class. As I was walking down the empty corridor, I was pushed into the janitor's closet. 

"Hey baby!" a voice said. It was a boy's. 

"Get away from me!" I screamed. He put a hand over my mouth.

He whispered in my ear, "I know you want me." His hot breath smelled like rotting fish.

I tried to push him away, but that just made him laugh. He was clearly stronger than me. He pushed me into a wall. I could see in the dim light that his hair was blond. I spat in his face. That only made him laugh even more. 

He tried grabbing my ass, but I kneed him where the sun don't shine. I guess that made him angry. He slapped me so hard i could see stars. I screamed out in pain, but that just made him duct tape my mouth and tie me up.

And then,

He raped me.

He threw my naked body on the dirty floor and took out a camera. He snapped a photo and left. 

Losing my V-card wasn't how I expected it. I can't believe I got raped by a douchebag who can't keep his hands to himself. I feel like screaming and breaking things!

I cried so hard, and all the memories of me being harrased (physically, mentally, and sexually) came flooding back. I cried and cried and cried. My limp body was still on the floor and there was a puddle of tears under me. 

I realized school had ended and I had nothing to wear because my clothes were ripped. I slipped on a janitor's uniform and walked home.

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"What happened?" Jenny exclaimed.

That just made more tears come out. I told her everything and she held me tightly.

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A/N:

I know, I know. She got raped. Its tragic. What I'm wondering was if I should write a seperate scene about what happened, but it might be rated R. Tell me what you think.

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-F4E