Not only is he my teacher and i love him but he's a vampire as well

Authors note: Okay guys this is my first storey ive ever written on here so i want some feed back. I can take criticism well.

Please tell me my mistakes. Anyways I guess I better get to the story.

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Not only is he my teacher and I love him but he's a vampire as well.

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I'm running faster then I ever have in my life I

check to see if it's following me. It's not. What ever "it" is.

I keep running just in case. Then I hear a ringing noise I

look

around to see what it is but can't tell. Next thing I know the

"it" jumps right out in front of me. I Scream.

I'm jolted awake and I'm breathing hard and drenched in sweat my alarm clock is going off. My mom is screaming at me to turn it off. I reach over with

shacking hands and turn it off. I get untangled from my now sticky sheets and walk to the bathroom connected to my room. That's when I look in the mirror and

nearly scream.

My long natural raven black hair is puffed up every where, my natural tan complexion is now very pale, and my blue-green eyes are very wide with shock.

My skin is glistening from the suns reflection on the sweat beads rolling down my face.

"Give me a dirty-torn up dress and a couple scratches here and there and I'll look like a zombie" I mumble grabbing my brush and carefully pulling it through

my hair.

I take a shower. Then I blow dry and straighten my hair. I put on just a tiny bit of dark shinny blue eyeshade and black eyeliner to make my eyes pop.

I grab my school uniform which is just a tad bit skanky for my taste and put it on. Along with my ballet flats. I run down stairs and grab a pop-tart to eat on

the way considering it's already 8:30 and I have to get to school by 9.

I jump into my Yellow with black striped camaro. The one that looks like Bumble Bee from Transformers. Here comes another year of school I think as I high

tail it to school.

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Another authors note: So how was it does it sound okay. Comment, vote, complain, tips, anything that will give me better writing experience anyways tell me if I should add the next chapter.