Please critique this story as harshly as you wish. I will keep each comment, read them, and decide if I would like to change that something about my story. However, I will not be changing any details until the entire story is finished. After that, however, I will go through each chapter, one-by-one, and change what was suggested (possibly.)
Anyway, thank you for choosing to read "The Frigid Variety".
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The Frigid Variety
FantasyA whole species, a whole other race of humans live among us. They are humans able to shift into dragons; each belonging to one of four Varieties. For years, centuries, the Varieties were at peace. But now, they are at war. Telluris Pugna is a soldi...
