Chapter 17 Returnr [you were so close...]
StarGleam shock her head waling up from the derm. FireStar was looking at her and his gren eys where sorrid. "GlaeStar you were takling in yuour slept are you ok?" he asked. ["you were tackling in your sleep"]
JayFeather looked upsid to.
"Yeah yeah Im fin" StarGleam reponded gettin up. "I just had a badd dream thass all." "It's nothen." [liar]
"If your sur." Said FireStrar and they left the MonoPool and headed back too the Thundercaln camp.
"GleamStar your back!" they said happy, crowding all over her. [how did they know her name was going to be Gleamstar? As far as they're aware, she might be Starstar. Or Shitstar. Yeah, I like that one. ]
LakePaw and RedPaw looked sad thou, becas GleamStarg has sad they cant be in luv. [yeah well, fuck Staridiot]
But GleamSar ingored them. But she new she had too do somefing more impotent. [NU. IMPTENT.]
"LinoBlaz" she said locking for her deputy. "I nedd you to tack a patrole tothe Sadowclan boulder," "I need you ro tell BlackStar im leder know." [why? Just to rub it in? Bitch.]
she said and she turnd and walked over the keader's den evwn though everone was trying to ask her questns about the serimy. "Guysz let me to to bed" she said shoeing them awy. /"Let me have a niche to myself!" [great leadership skills, Staridiot]
They all walked away groabling. "She nevwr let's us have any fun" said BeryNoise. "Thats not kawaii at all." [I WILL kill you...]
GleamStar didnlt care sge was waiting for FireStar. Then FireHert came into her den. "I'm levving" he said and he lef. [Firemoron finally regains his intelligence]
StarGleam followed him uyelling "WAIT!1!11 Where are you gong?"
"Well I cant be ledder so I'm just goint to leaf for a while. [Firemoron, you cant leaf. No matter how hard the author tries, you are STILL not a tree!]
Maybe Ill be a rogue, or maybe I'll go join skyCaln. Who knows?" Then he luf. [NO. LEAVE SKYCLAN OUTTA THIS]
StarGamet was sad b/c [Now you're resorting to pathetic abbreviations ohmahlord]
that was her mentor and one of the cats she luvved leaving but it was ka since thass what he wanted to due.
"Its oka StarStar" said HawkFrot appearating out of nonwhere. "I mean I love you so its all god." [where did this come from?! He doesn't even know her!]
"I no" said StarGlea prring she wrapped her tail around HawkFrosts face [is that even possible?] she dint care that he was a rogue, she loved him.
And now they could be togethier!/ [SINCE WHEN?!]
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There are so many things wrong with this book omfg.
KILL ME PLEASE.
END THE SUFFERING.
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Kendall Tries to Read Starkit's Prophecy!
RandomOh god what am I getting myself into I have read a lot of these. They seem like fun, so I'M DOING ONE TOO! And I know perfectly well how horrible it is. Let's see if I survive...
