Go To Sleep (Ch. 1)

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-Sofia P.O.V.~

I began to walk out from a dance party my friend invited me to. Dark and cold. I look through my phone and checked for the time "Its 9:12pm." I said to myself with a deep breath. During my way home I began to have this feeling like... Like if, someone is following me. I stop, stood for a second, then began to look around to see if anybody or something was following me. A couple of cars passed by, but all Im looking at is my surroundings and the open stores  located to my right. Not a single human was following me.

I saw nothing, so I ignored the feeling on my way home. When I entered my house It was silent.

"Okay...?" I thought.

Usually my mom waits for me to come home but apparently she didn't today. Turned on the lights, thinking to myself if my mom is even home.

As I walk to the kitchen I can see what my mother left for me on the kitchen table, a toasted sandwich. Next to it has an unexpected letter. I picked it up and began to read the letter to myself.

"Sweetie,

I'm not going to be home for a couple of days. I'm going to see how your father is doing. The doctor called, telling me that he isn't doing so well. So I decide to see him for a couple of days. I left you some money under your pillow, for you to keep. Just in case you need it for food or to go with your friends. Don't forget that I love you!

Love,

Mom."

Once i was done reading it, I turned off the lights forgetting how hungry I was and walked upstairs to my room.

I close the door behind me then walked to my bed. I layed there for a couple of minutes and looked under my pillow seeing the money she left me.

Its 100$. Staring at the hundred bill I realized the need to take a shower because of the dance party. Not that I got dirty or anything. Just the realization on how sweaty it is once you dance for too long.

I took off my clothes and took about 45min in the shower since I like to be clean. I went outside of my bathroom with a towel around my body. I put on some black underwear, a bra and a long white shirt. Later I brush my dark, brown, straight hair, then I put my dirty clothes in a plastic box I keep, where I leave all my dirty clothes in.

Once I was done, I went to bed and fell asleep. Hours later I hear a loud noise. At first I just ignored it but when I heard it again, I went to check it out. Went downstairs to see what was the noise all about. Sadly, I didn't see anything, so I imagined it was just the noise from our next door neighbors. I walk upstairs to my room closing the door behind me. I lay on my bed and covered myself with my red blanket. Later I look at my closet realizing that it was not opened when I left my room, but as I focus into the darkness I start to see a face with a big smile. It wasn't just a normal smile.

     I hurried and pulled my blanket off me and as I stood up, that creature ran and pounded on top of me.

He grabbed my arms tight above my head. "H-Hey! You jerk! Get the fuck off me!!" I screamed. He looked at me, and I looked straight at him acting like I had no fear, but I did. His eyes looked wide open looking into my soul. The realization of him not blinking made me look around his eyes and his skin was half black shaded as if his eyes never had any sleep. Looking down his face I saw this cut marked line on his cheeks like a big smile. As he inhales he says in a voice only a mad man would say "GO. TO. SLEEP!"

(Update! I KNOW SOME OF YOU READ THE ORIGINAL OF MY STORY BUT I FELT LIKE I WENT TO FAST. I HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY THIS NEW VERSION IF NOT SATISFIED LET ME KNOW IN THE COMMENTS WHAT YOU GUYS THINK ABOUT IT. SORRY FOR THE CHANGES! I HOPE I CAN DO MANNY THINGS WITH THIS STORY LIKE COMICS, MANGA, AND EVEN CLIPS IN THE FUTURE. IM WORKING ON IT SINCE IT ALL NEEDS MONEY TO COMPLETE AND GET ACTORS. PLEASE DON'T COME THEN LEAVE, BECAUSE ILL KEEP CHECK ON THE ONES WHO STAYS THEY'LL BE THE FIRST ONE TO VIEW THE CLIPS.)

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