Intruder Alert- (Louis Tomlinson oneshot)

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It was early in the morning, around 8:00 and I had just been awoken by the annoying sound of the alarm that had gone off at next doors house. I knew I couldn’t go back to sleep so I forced myself to get out of my overly comfy bed and walk over to my window. Once I had opened it the fresh, morning air swirled through my bedroom sending in the lovely spring warmth. I had a volleyball game with some of my mates at noon so I had plenty of time to get ready as it was still pretty early. I decided I would switch on some music and try to figure out what I would be wearing for the game later today. As I walked over to my closet I heard ruffling going on from down the hallway. This was weird as my parents wouldn’t be back from their trip until late tomorrow morning. I must have been hearing things I thought to myself and retreated back to all the clothes in my closet.

I finally decided on what I would be wearing- a plain, white t-shirt and a pair of cute, red sports shorts with my brand new tennis shoes I had just brought on sale at a small sports boutique in town. I did of course want to be comfortable whilst playing volleyball so I wasn’t too fussed about how casual I looked. All of a sudden “Just Dance” by Lady Gaga started playing from my iPod dock and usually I would skip this song but I had the biggest urge to do as exactly told, just dance. And that is what I did. Before I knew it I was on my bed jumping up and down singing the lyrics, “Just dance. Gonna be okay. Da-doo-doo-doo Just dance. Spin that record babe. Da-doo-doo-doo Just dance. Gonna be okay!” Once the song ended I fell back onto the bed, trying to catch my breath as my heart was racing. But then I heard it. The ruffling noise AGAIN! This was weird now as I was not just hearing things anymore. Someone was in the house.  

I needed to see who was out there, for all I knew if it was somebody breaking in I’d rather be there to scare them off than them emptying the house out. I was still wearing my PJs which were made up of a pair of black pyjama shorts and an oversized, baggy top that belonged to my boyfriend, but this didn’t stop me from going out to see who was there. As I opened the door to walk out of my room I heard footsteps coming towards my bedroom. I immediately found the closest thing nearest to me- this would do the trick, my hair straighter. It would hurt if I had to hit the person so it was good enough. The footsteps got really close and before I had time to think, I leaped out of my door and into the hallway. “GET OUT NOW BEFORE I CALL THE POLICE!” I yelled! Then all I heard was somebody laughing uncontrollably. Oh god. “Ha ha ha ha Hannah oh my it’s ok! It’s just me” Louis said in-between his laughing fits. “Shit Louis! I thought you were a robber!” I said laughing with him. “Babe, I came here to surprise you. I was defiantly not expecting all this from you!” Then his eyes made their way to my hand which was holding my black, shiny straighter. “That-that isn’t a oh my god HA HA HA” Louis couldn’t help himself from laughing at my weapon of self-defence. “Well you know, it was a spare of the moment decision Lou and my straighter was the closest thing near me!” I said waving the straighter in the air. “Oh babe, you are absolutely adorable!” Louis said, running up to me squishing me into one of his amazing bear hugs. “Next time don’t leave your front door unlocked, you never know which mad man could have walked straight it” Louis said trying to be serious. Oh well I thought, I was too loved up with being so physically close to my beautiful boyfriend. Gosh, he smelt so good; I could never get sick of this, I thought to myself. I breathed him in and admired how perfect he was. I was taken aback when he held me by my shoulders out in front of him. “Hannah, you weren’t just smelling me were you?” Louis said, a cheeky grin forming on his face. I went bright red and just nodded. “I guess I was. God that’s embarrassing”. Louis’ grin just became bigger and he took me back into his hug. “You do know you are the cutest girlfriend in the world Hannah?” Louis said, being serious. I didn’t say anything back because a) I was blushing like mad and didn’t want him to see and b) I didn’t want to say anything to ruin this perfect moment. But I just hugged him even tighter. “Oh and I got to say gorgeous, my top looks so much better on you.” Louis said before lifting my chin to meet his lips to mine.

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