This story is set in a fictional realm named Everast. This book is a work of fiction. the names, characters, places and incidents are products of the writer's imagination or have been used fictitiously and are not to be construed as real. Any resemblance to persons, living or dead, actual events, locales or organizations is entirely coincidental.
This is a first draft, so there's bound to be grammar issues. I'm not looking for any grammar corrections, but what I am looking for is a critic--someone to tell me if the book flows well, if the characters are relatable, etc. This story was once a short story under the name The Bastard Prince, and the title has been changed multiple times. However, I decided to stick with The Crownless as it fits the story.
I hope you enjoy this story and I welcome any criticism, votes, or comments. I will be placing some index(s) within the story, so you know who is who, what is what, etc. I also plan on making a map pretty soon here.
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The Crownless.
FantasyA Kingdom without a King. A King without a crown. A land on the brink of extinction. Talion Livingston was once the rightful heir to the throne of Martith Empire, a Kingdom within the realm of Everast-a land prospering with wealth and peace after...
