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Name: Torrentgust
Ayy that's a cool name. I've never seen torrent- as a prefix OR suffix, and the suffix -gust is very underused. Points for originality!
Gender: Male
Another male
Clan: Gustclan
Nice. Gust is really underused
Rank: Warrior
Mm.
Age: 32 moons
Not that old
Appearance: Broad shouldered dark gray tom with white tabby stripes. Bright blue eyes.
I like the white tabby stripes. Gray by itself is overused but dark gray makes it more unique, so good job on that. I DO like blue eyes, but they are HORRIBLY overused on OCs. Technically, only white cats should have blue eyes (I think....?) but I'll let it slide.
Personality: Loyal, trustworthy, focused, he worries something will happen to his clan again. Fearful.
Not too many major flaws... Yeah, fearful is a flaw but it's not a big one (such as being snappy or something)
Backstory: Born and raised in Gustclan, he lived a normal life as an apprentice until a sickness broke out, turning cats into viscous meat eaters. He managed to with some of his clan, and lived a life always on the move to get away from the flesh eaters. He became a warrior when he saved the leader of his clan from a few of the flesh eaters when he was wounded. The suffix gust is in honor of the fallen clanmates during the sickness.
This is unique.. But somewhat unrealistic. I like how the suffix gust came in honor of his clan. Did anything else happen after? Did the flesh eaters keep coming and did he die or something..? I want to know more.
Rating: 6/10
The appearance is great, but blue eyes are overused. You should add more flaws as well as more details into the backstory, it's pretty unrealistic.. Otherwise, this OC is very unique! Good job :3
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