Hello everyone! I would like to let you all know that this is my first fanfic, so please comment. I take positive criticism or any tips on how I can improve. Please let me know if you see any grammar mistakes! I worked really hard on the grammar and I'm sorry to say I'm terrible at it! if you like this story, I'll finish it! So please be sure to give me a review! thanks for all your help! I'll get started on the next chapter for those who like it! So I'll be sure to post it soon!
~ HiRainbows23
(P.S. Please no mean comments or pure hate! If you don't like it, you can just leave a comment saying so and why, no need to be mean!)
Thank You!
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When Two Hearts Go Soaring In The Clouds
FanfictionSoarin a determined little colt who will do anything to befriend a shy filly. She has a cyan coat with a rainbow mane. Her name is Rainbow Dash. Soarin will stop at nothing to become friends with the lonesome filly! No matter how stubborn she may o...
