Entry 3: The Gift

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The Gift by the_golden_fox was the third entry.

This story was really good! The irony in it was great, and I really loved the way the situation played out. The dark humor was great.

However, the story lacked details, and the part with Maria shopping had little to none. Description would have really helped to flesh out the story.

Rating: 8.5/10



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