Ok first story no hate please but please give me positive feedback on how I can improve.
Annabeth's POV
I was ecstatic...I got to go to New York and go to high school with my Seaweed Brain!!! We're going to live in a monster proof house created by the gods. The school is monster proof as well. We're living with the rest of the 7 and Nico, Reyna, Thalia, Connor, Travis, Katie, Miranda, Grover, Juniper, Chelsea Alden --daughter of Athena, Huntress of Artemis, and legacy of Poseidon-- and Taylor Quinn, daughter of Hecate legacy of Hermes, blessed by Nike. Percy didn't know that we were coming yet but Sally and Paul did. We were leaving in a few days.
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We were all at Thalia's tree waiting for Argus to bring the van around. When Argus finally got there, we all piled in and settled for the ride. Well, most of us. Since Chelsea, Taylor, Thalia and I were the only ones without a significant other, Thalia, Chelsea and I sat in the front. It was so obvious that Connor and Taylor liked each other.
Nico's POV (just cause)
I was sitting next to Jason and Piper in the back... they were making out the whole time. I tried to start a conversation with Reyna but it got really awkward really soon, so I just sat down and tried to disappear since I didn't really have any other options.
Annabeth's POV
It was only like a 45 minute drive and I was bouncing up and down the whole time. "You're acting like a lovesick puppy," Thalia pointed out, smirking. "Shut up," I muttered, "It's the ADHD." "Riiiiight," Thalia sarcastically said. I didn't say anything. We were almost there and I could already see the huge house.
SisterofStolls: Ok hoped you liked it please give me positive feedback. First story no hate. I know it's short the next one will be longer I swear on the River Styx.
OwlSeaMoon: So I revised the chapter because she ⬆︎ had some grammatical issues and my brain could not stand the errors 😂 Btw if you didn't know, The OC characters are based off of us two: Taylor Quinn- daughter of Hecate, blessed by Hermes.
SisterofStolls- daughter of Hermes, blessed by Hecate.
Chelsea Alden- daughter of Athena, legacy of Poseidon, Hunter of Artemis.
OwlSeaMoon- the exact same as above ☝︎
Anyway, thanks for reading! Bye, and I hope you enjoyed this chapter. Give us a vote if you can, and feel free to comment CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Once again, BYE!
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Life After
FanfictionThis is a story after the Giant War. It focuses mostly on Percabeth but has: Tratie, Frazel, Jasper, ClarriseXChris, Gruniper, Reynico, and Caleo. Connor's also there but he's single. We made two OC's, Taylor and Chelsea. This is written by @Sister...
