Greetings,
The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm sorry it took me so long to finish it. Although I pumped out Parts One and Two pretty quickly, Parts Three and Four took significantly longer, and for that, I apologize. However, in the end, I got it finished (obviously), and I hope you enjoyed it. I also apologize if you were expecting a longer story, but this is about how long I expected it to be. Note the tag "Short Story". Additionally, I'll admit that this story turned out to be significantly darker than I originally imagined it would be. Whether or not that's a good thing is entirely up to you. It was pretty difficult figuring out how to tell a story with literally only one character, no dialogue, a weird perspective, and essentially no explanations for anything going on in the story, but I think that's where its charm lies: in its mystery.
Did you enjoy it? Make sure to give me some constructive criticism down in the comments.
Thank you for reading my story, and stay tuned. I might have some new stories coming your way.
~ Jared_765
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The Mansion
Short StoryA man who can't even remember his own name awakes in a mysterious mansion, and things get surreal quickly. Will he be able to escape the evil clutches of it? Will he find out the secrets behind it?