Hie!
I Just want to know,if you guys think that this story is going slow or something as it's my first time writing an actual story so yeah I need some reviews about the story line and how I can make it better...Writer,
Adiax
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Unlikely Love
Romantik**Started this because of someone a year ago but now I am going to complete this*** "In 'Unlikely Love,' follow the tumultuous journey of Arie Smith and Sky Dave, childhood enemies turned unexpected lovers. Despite their rocky past, their bond flour...
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Hie!
I Just want to know,if you guys think that this story is going slow or something as it's my first time writing an actual story so yeah I need some reviews about the story line and how I can make it better...Writer,
Adiax