Good Vs. Bad Dialogue Issues & How To Fix Them

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The couple is from back to the future and honestly I wish more people would build romances like this one where neither side has to say I love you

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The couple is from back to the future and honestly I wish more people would build romances like this one where neither side has to say I love you. Nobody needs to say "L" for people to figure out they are a couple and here is why just listen to this pastor analysis of Encanto movie I mean the very purpose of subtext is saying wasn't even showing there it is hidden in plain sight to be validated later honestly.

SO PLEASE IDIOTS Who say, "Oh, my Goodness?! Why can't they say they're in love with each other?" Go ahead face palm yourself if you want because it is a better rule of writing out romance. "The Characters Don't Have To Say It!" (Barbie & Ken in their real lives includes Dreamhouse Adventures A Touch of Magic Series excluding A Fashion Fairytale and A Fairy Secret movies this applies only to the most modern tv shows not anything else guys! Barbie in her real life world not once every time we get close it goes back to being oh he's just a friend a neighbor even.)
2. Example of Bad Dialogue: Melodrama

Musa from Winx Club falls into this bad dialogue problem because she is always angry yet never realizes she's ever angry period

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Musa from Winx Club falls into this bad dialogue problem because she is always angry yet never realizes she's ever angry period. And none of this anger from Season 3's not so midpoint all the way to Season 4's one sided conversations with Riven throughout the whole Season and her angry emotion is not earned because Riven's done nothing but be more of a gentlemanly gentleman than she is as an actual understanding girlfriend, Skylights. The example I believe the guy up above here at the top of the page is using a pure masculine dialogue problem from within a video game!

 The example I believe the guy up above here at the top of the page is using a pure masculine dialogue problem from within a video game!

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