BFB 16 (Prolouge) Rewritten

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(Everything before this is the same. So no need to redescribe it) 

Spongy begins to appear inside of Four as the others continue climbing.

Match

What's that?

Pencil

Eugh! Gross! I think Spongy- *nauseous sound* just got eliminated!

Liy

Guys, we oughta climb through Spongy! He's connected to the outside world!

Match

Are you serious? That's like, beyond disgusting.

Pencil

Yeah, but I mean thats the only way out….but still no-can-do, switcheroo!

Liy

Guys, face it. Four's mouth is just too high. Spongy is our last chance.

Pencil

You know what. Fine. Ill do it. 

Match

You seriously gonna leave me to try and compete again? 

Pencil

No offence Match but you over a bfdi, theres no Competition here. 

Match

But we Are like, bffs! Shouldnt our friendship value more then a prize? 

Pencil

Yknow what match, you would never understand me, this Competition is about Strategy, not friendship. 

Match

…… Fine then, if thats how it is, then it's over. 

Pencil

W-whats over? …

Match

THIS! Our friendship! Like you have gone like soooo greedy! What has gotten into you! This is not the pencil I met! 

Liy

Guys cut the arguement! We Are running out of time! 

Match

She might be. I'm Not. 

Match falls off. 

Pencil

FINE! I dont need your friendship anyways! 

Loser

Woah!

Loser grabs onto Spongy and widens one of his holes.

Loser, Bracelety, Liy, David, Dora, Stapy and Pencil jump through Spongy's holes. Firey Jr. is about to, but he is abruptly stopped.

Stapy

Woah! Um, Firey Jr, you might not wanna climb through here! Spongy's kinda flammable!

Firey Jr.

What? Aw, man!

Four continues to struggle.

Snowball

Oh my snowstorm! Four's actually struggling to do something! This I gotta see!

All the other contestants follow Snowball.

Bottle

Spongy's the largest contestant to be eliminated by 7 times!

Pie

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