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So today we have Rachnakar Priyu as a participant.
Book name: AniDita: The Heaven made match
Author: sparkling_tanu_
MC: Mild Romance is there.
Review:
It is a feel good story, The writer has enhanced the story by adding some of the cinema songs when needed which makes the chapter more beautiful while reading. The plot is good, creative and sounds new. Stopping with a cliffhanger is just another way for her to make the readers curious. The efforts you took for dialogues are really appreciable. Overall, the story is nice but still there are some downs which i will share in feedback.
Feedback:
Try to make the plot a little bit slow, I noticed the plot is moving faster where it shouldn't be. Before connecting with the scenes, the scene gets complete. So this is the only drawback other than that everything is well and good.
Try more, you can for sure!
~Stars out of 5~
Cover page: 0.5
Story line : 0.5(as of now)
Dialogues: 1★ (Try to give more dialogues to characters).
Words: 1★(For introducing new terms)
Presentation: 0.7★
Totally: 3.7 out of 5★
~Marks out of 100~
Story line (as of now): 14/20
Cover page: 15/20
Dialogues: 14/20
Words: 19/20
Presentation: 13/20
Total: 75/100
Name of the Author: sparkling_tanu_
Reviewed by: Hslwritings
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