Snow and Blood || ON HIATUS || (Rewritten Version)

𝕾𝕹𝕺𝖂 𝕬𝕹𝕯 𝕭𝕷𝕺𝕺𝕯

Started: 01/01/2022

Ended: N/A

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Hello, humans. Welcome to the re-write of the previous version of this book, Snow and Blood. Yes, instead of beating around the bush, I'm trying to get straight to the point as to why I made a whole new book and not just edit the earlier book.

I did this because of a very disturbing thing that I'd found out from some of my friends. They gave me a LOT of constructive criticism on the previous Snow and Blood; how my story is boring, the main character swears too much, her name is weird, the story ends too quickly, there's no interest, blah...blah...blah! I would've ignored this...but due to majority of my friends saying that there should be a re-write, I gave into the peer pressure.

I checked out the predecessor book to see if it really was true, and shockingly, it was. Even I cringed on how I'd shortened the story and nothing highlighting Keilar's experience was happening. I also realized while writing the next book, that the same was happening there too.

So, I instead started reading more KOTLC fanfiction. I've added numerous stories on my book list and have completed them to see from each writer's perspective and how to improve my writing. And I've picked up many skills to be proud of. I'm even using them in daily life!

Yes, I finished the upcoming book already, but that is also under editing and hiatus. This is the only A/N note that's in the book; nothing at the start or ending of any chapter. I'll possibly add some Author notes at the end of the story, but that is undecided. Here are some points to keep in mind as you read the chapters:

One, the process to finish this book will be slow, and I have no specific schedule of posting chapters; I'll post one as soon as I'm done with it.

However, you may give me about two to three weeks of time to complete each chapter (Yes, they'll be hard to write) because I'm changing most of the plot.

Two, the original story is similar to this one, but I change many things; like how the main character looks at the start, how she gets to the lost cities, etc...and I've added small elements that changes the personality of the characters.

Three, the characters from KOTLC may seem a little OOC (Out of character). They may swear very lightly, but I've omitted most of them to be more appropriate to younger children.

Four, this is literally changing most of the plot. The original KOTLC series will bend to my writing as Keilar goes through her own adventures. There are two protagonists: One is my OC, the other is Sophie. Keilar's role will be stressed, but Sophie will also get her own reading time.

And last, the ships that will be stressed upon will be platonic or romantic, each one marked with an 'r' for romantic and 'p' for platonic. Here is the List:

Sophie x Keefe or (Sokeefe, Keefoster, Team Foster-Keefe) (P at the start, but changes to R later on)

Marella x Dex or Mex or Dexella (P, may change to R.)

Biana x Tam (Bam, Tiana) (P, May change to R.)