The Two Dragonoid Remake

Distraction

Velgrynd accelerated herself while Velzard decelerating the space around herself

But the two suddenly stopped

They just looked at Milim that are floating there visibly dreaming

“Ara~ see?” she says smugly

Velgrynd took a long breath “shut up things could've gone wrong! What if–” she's goes on a long complain

Not wanting to listen to her hour long complain she just goes down and pick up Milim

“Yeah whatever I'm going back first” she leaves her there

Velgrynd just stood there in pure disbelief

“If you wasn't my sister I would've killed you right here and right now...” she said to herself before followed behind

Later on in the afternoon

Velgrynd can see Milim in the garden eating some fruits so she landed behind her

“Ah Velgrynd here's yours!” Milim handed her an orange as soon as she saw her

“For me?” she asks as she took the fruit

Milim nodded “Yup "save some for Velgrynd" Velzard said to me!”

“So where's she now?” she took a bite without even peeling it

“Inside” Milim said nonchalantly making her spit out what she just bite to the side

She cough a bit before asking “Inside!?”

“Yup inside, she told me to wait here for you since she said she won't be long”

“and how long have you been waiting here?”

“When the sun is over there” she says pointing at the sky above the sunset

‘You better be not doing what I think you're doing sister’ She facepalmed thinking about it

She then secretly created a parallel existence and entered to search for Velzard

Inside

It is getting dark inside but Velgrynd still moving through normally

She then heard some erotic noise coming from one of the room and Infront of the room is Velzard sitting there silently panting on the floor

The two awkwardly makes an eye contact and signaled to each other to not make any noise

She then helped her get up and they walked to other room

Albeit already far enough they still whispering to each other

“Just what were you thinking back there!”

“I'm sorry I can't help it! I was going to just take some outdoor stuff and leave but those two are really going for it!”

She just looked at her disappointed

“Don't look at me like that! If you're there back then you would too”

She shrugs it off “So did you get them all?”

“Yes I put them in the kitchen”

“Alright let's pick it up and get back to Milim”

She nodded in response

They then quickly take all of the items and leave while trying to ignore the noises

After they're back on the front door

“You're right, they're really going for it...”

“Told ya”

Back with Milim

“Milim~ I'm sorry it took too long” Velzard quickly run up to her

“Hmph! But you said it won't be long!”

“I'm sorry~ then how about we sleep under the stars tonight?”

“Sleeping outside?”

“yes I'm sure it'll be fun!”

“what about mom and dad?”

“D-don't worry about them”
“yeah they'll probably catch up with us later on”

“Alright then... So where are we going to go?”

“Let's go to that mountain shall we?” Velzard said while casually pick her up on her back

And before Velgrynd can complain she already took off

Once again she just followed them from behind with a nonstop grumbling

On top of Canaat mountains

They are currently standing on a huge mountain and from there they can see the ice continent with some aurora on top and the clear night sky

“This place is great right Milim?” Velzard crouched down and let her get off

Milim just run to the edge of the mountain to look at the auroras “Onee-san look there's a color changing blankets in the sky!”

“Those are called Aurora and they're only visible on the northern sky” Velzard explain while standing beside her

“Heh of course you know about it” Velgrynd mutter to herself

Later on

Velzard and Velgrynd prepared a food and the place for sleeping tonight

They then eat together while watching the colorful lights in the sky

After finishing their dinner they lay down together on the same bed looking straight up to the night sky

“Look there's Velzard on the stars!” Milim says while moving her hand connecting a few stars that resembles Velzard dragon form

Velzard just stared at the stars that Milim choose and immersed herself in it

“what about me Milim?” Velgrynd asks curiously

“hm maybe those one” she pointed at the stars that line up nicely resembling her dragon form

She also immersed herself in the stars that Milim chooses just like her sister

“hm as for me it's-*yawn~*” she didn't finish her sentence

The two then looked at her and smiled

They then softly strokes her while saying
“it's already past your bedtime Milim”
“let's continue it tomorrow okay?”

She then fall asleep comfortably between them

““Goodnight””

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I can already see it is going better than the original :D

(Atleast I think that way...)

Please tell me what you don't like or you think bad about the original and what you think would make it better

Not going to lie, it's a bit painful for me to read criticism but it must be done!

Well thanks for reading I love all of you