A Mother With A Baby- Juicy Writing

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A/N: Okay... So it's been awhile since I updated, but here we go. This is from some time ago from a writing help book called 'Juicy Writing' by Brigid Lowry, it's a great help for new and aspiring writers and a good reminder of some of the key aspects in writing for old writers. I know it's a bit weak, but I got a little stuck at the end. I hope you guys enjoy it! Any suggestions and comments are welcome :)

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One bottle of warm milk,

A Disney cartoon.

One teeny tiny dress made of imported silk,

A nanny for all hours who’ll bring along the moon.

You’ll need a rocking horse,

And a bubbly bath,

Hands that aren’t so coarse

And forget your deadly wrath.

A special spark it takes,

A warm heart full of love,

That’s what you’ll need to be

A mother of all hours.

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