Chapter 2 afterthoughts

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Welp, that's it for now, I relly hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. I can't believe I pulled this off in one day. Although I refined the story in my mind for a few days before that, it also grew by a factor of about three while writing. I really tried to get all of my creativity squeezed into this. It's not like im writing things on a regular basis, in fact it was the first time trying to write something like this. I hope it doesn't show too much. But I'm pretty proud of it either way. Hope you will find this just as wholesome as I do.

I don't really plan on writing more into this story since I think I managed to close it off quite nicely, with room for some of your own imagination. But on the other hand I didn't really "plan" to write this story in the first place so who knows.

Again any writing/style tips are much appreciated

Again, I hoped you enjoyed reading this and perhaps I will write something else here one day.

Toodles!

Toodles!

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Here is the "Glossary" of bad translations ^^'

Beach Chair:

With the train I mean a train that runs between smaller towns or different districts of larger cities (Here they are called S-Trains)

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With the train I mean a train that runs between smaller towns or different districts of larger cities (Here they are called S-Trains)

With the train I mean a train that runs between smaller towns or different districts of larger cities (Here they are called S-Trains)

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Hand wrestler handshake:

Hand wrestler handshake:

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