⭐ 𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐑𝐋𝐈𝐓 𝐁𝐓𝐒 𝐀𝐖𝐀𝐑𝐃𝐒 ⭐ (𝐉𝐔𝐃𝐆𝐈𝐍𝐆)

Kim Namjoon reviews.

Book Name; Eye Candy

Author; @Jellycuddles19_

Category; Kim Namjoon

Cover- 5/5

The cover is freaking gorgeous, A total fan of it <3

Title- 5/5

Suits the book. The author did a good job with the title, unique and expressive

First Impression: 8/10

I loved how it started, it was very luring...it built the curiosity in me to know what happened to the female lead, did she leave him or did something else happen?

The author established a strong base for the relationship between the leads in the start itself. Pushed me to know what happened.

Grammar and punctuation- 12/15

The grammar was alright, could be improved. Some punctuations were missing.

Plot: 13.5/15

I enjoyed how the plot builds up from chapter 1, it was interesting and it looked like the author knew what she wants with this book. I love how the plot was developing, side by side with the characters.

From Joon saving her from the goons to the marriage proposal, I liked the sweet moments in those chapters

The plot is so far romantic

As it's an ongoing book I look forward to seeing the plot develop more with Jane and Joons characters.

Vocabulary: 8/10

I would have loved some strong vocabulary as it would have complimented the plot a lot, the vocabulary was quite simple.

Descriptive writing- 8/10

Quite descriptive but I think some areas could have used a bit more description like in the initial chapters. It felt like the author was making a summary, could elaborate at the start of the book

Description: 3/5

The description builds the character but it was a cliche...I think there can be more effort put into the description.

Character development: 7/10

At the very start, we are introduced to the characters, and the character development was fast.... Jane's character felt rushed and Joon's was at a good pace. The side characters dint develops a lot.

Emotions- 14/15

It was great, the character's expressions were vell executed, when they were in love, when Joon lashed out at Jane in chapter 10 the emotions were visible, the effect it had on her. Joons sadness in the very beginning was also quite visible

Great book so far and im looking forward to the future chapters. The book's strongest point for me is the character's chemistry it was sweet, I liked how it blossoms. I think the author could slow things a bit, to express more of the plot.

you are doing great so far author keep up with the good work

Total score: 82.5/100

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Book Name; Mr perfect

Author; @Pink_Mania_Jin

Category; Kim Namjoon.

Cover- 5/5

It was simple and aesthetic

Title- 4/5