BALVEER RETURNS FANFIC

THE WRONG DECISION

Debu : Oh waise mayapuri mein kaun rehte hai ?

Ashi : Mayapuri mein asur aur mahamaya dhari yodha niwas karte hai. Unki prawatti aise toh nakratmak hoti hai par mayapur wale sabhya hai.

Debu : Acha ....

The chitchat continues for a long time .

Debu : Aapse millar acha laga 😁.

Ashi : mujhe bhi 🥰.

Debu : Waise aapse ek winti hai .

Ashi : Kya ?

DEBU : Yahi ki mujhe sochne ke liye samay chahiye .

Ashi : Acha hua aapne bol diya mujhe bhi samay chahiye.

Debu : Aap veerkaksh mein vishram kijiye main chalta hu . Alwida.

Ashi : Alwida 😇.

Debu goes to parilok where everyone was anxioisly waiting except for u alreday know shivanaya they were gone somewhere else. As debu entered ananya fired with questions .

Ananya: kaun hai woh ladki ? Kaha ki hai ? Kya woh main hu ?

Debu : Anu .....uhm.....woh.......

Vivan : bataiye na bhaiya kaun hai woh ?

Debu : woh mayalok ki rajkumari hai.

Vivan and ananya : kya ?

Debu : ha mujhe pata nahi shaurya ne yeh faisla kyu kiya ?

Ananya : Pata nahi ........( she started crying before completing ger words ) kyu shaurya kyu.......

Debu : Anu ..... (reaches out for ananya but she aparates )

Vivan : oh no ! Kahi yeh mayakumari ke pas toh nahi gayi ?

Debu : Mujhe jana hoga isse pehle ki ananya kuch galat kare.

Vivan : aap shourya ke pas jaiye main jakar veerkaksha ko dekhta hu.

Debu : sambhal loge ?

Vivan : ha promise.

Debu : par tum mayakumari se kuch mat kehna kyunki usse bat bigaf sakti hai.

Vivan : sure.

BOTH BALVEERS APARATES TO VEERLOK TO THERE RESPECTIVE DESIGNATIONS. UNLIKE VIVANS THOUGHT ANANYA WASNT AT VEERLOK.

DEBU: YEH KAHA CHALI GAYI ?

VIVAN : GHAR PAR ?

DEBU : JAKAR DEKHNA HOGA.

VIVAN : BHAIYA AAP UDAS HOTE TOH KAHA JATE ?

DEBU :MAIN KISI SHANT JAGAH JATA JAISE KI VEERLOK OFC . YA FIR PARILOK KYUNKI YEH MERA GHAR HAI.

VIVAN : AGAR AISA HUA TOH ........

DEBU : VIVAN KYA TUM YEH BOL RAHE ANANYA APNE GHAR YANI KAALLOK (SHWETLOK ) GAYI HOGI ?

VIVAN : MUJHE WAHI LAGTA HAI.HAME JANA HOGA.

DEBU : NAHI HAM NAHI MAIN . TUM DHARTI PAR JAO .

VIVAN : PAR BHAIYA ......

DEBU : JAO ( APARATES)

DEBU REACHES KAL LOK AND STARTED SEARCHING ANANYA . AFTER SEVERAL HOURS OF SEARCHING ANANYA WAS FOUND TIED WITH A ROPE IN ONE CORNER . AND HER FALWLESS SKIN WAS MARKED WITH WHIPS.

DEBU'S POV :

I ARRIVED KAL LOK . AND FOUND ANANYA SENSELESS WITH INJURIES OF WHIP ON HER SKIN. I DONT KNEW THAT I CANT SUFFER HER PAIN UNTIL THIS MOMENT. I RAN TO HER AND TRIED WAKING HER UP . BUT SHE WASNT WAKING . I STARTED READING HER MIND AND THE THING I SAW WAS UNEXPECTED.

ANANYA'S POV :

I FELT HIM . HE WAS CRYING HOLDING ME . HE WASNT LETTING ME GO. I WAS UNABLE TO MOVE . I WAS UNABLE TO EVEN SPEAK. ITS WAS SO PAINFUL FOR ME WHEN HE WAS CRYING AND INSPITE BEING THERE I WAS UNABLE TO CONSOLE HIM . AFTER FEW MINUTES OF CCRYING HE STOPPED . I FELT A WARM HAND ON MY HEAD . IT STARTED PIERCING AS IF SOMEONE WAS GOING IN MY MIND.
YES HE WAS READING MY MIND. FINALLY HE CAN KNOW ABOUT THAT STUPID...................................... I FELL UNCONCIUS. WHEN I WOKE UP I WAS AT VEERLOK BEING TREATED. I MUMBLED

POV ENDS :

ANANYA : DEBU...... ( MUMBLED)

DEBU : ANU MAIN YAHI HU ( HOLDS HER HAND )

ANANYA : DEBU TUMNE MERA MIND DEKHA ?

DEBU : HA DEKHA . ( SUDDENLY HIS EYES STARTED BURNING BUT HE CHANGED HIS EXPRESSION ) PAR EK PROBLEM HAI .

ANANYA :KYA ?

DEBU : YAHI KI TUMHARE PAS MIND HI NAHI HAI (HE LAUGHED )

ANANYA : YOU DABBU (GETTING ANGRY ) ABHI BATATI HU TUMHE .

Ananya started beating debu with a pillow while debu was laughing trying to catch it.
MEANWHILE VIVAN ENTERS THERE .

Vivans pov :
I entered there . I saw them i saw debanya fighting and giggling as always . I was sad that this laughter was about to end as a heartbreak. I talked to shaurya and he said he cant change his decision. And that RAY how dare he touched didi. I would have killed him if shiv bhaiya wouldnt stop me. Argh .... i should go let debanya enjoy there moment i thought . I turned but someone called me from behind.

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Thats all guys hope you guys liked the new twist .
And what happened with ananya will be told soon.
What ray did and why shiv was stopping him all that.

This is

The lazy pen

Signing off

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