*~.Rating your Warrior Cat ocs! (OPEN 2021)

*~.Canarysong.~*

Oc by: Bluestar_Starclan

Name: Canarysong

A/N: I love his name! I've never seen someone use Canary as part of their warrior name before! His name overall is really creative and I adore that!

Clan: ThunderClan

A/N: This is an overused clan that I see people use over and over again but aside from that, it doesn't really matter

Rank: Medicine Cat

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Pansexual

Personality: Canarysong is a charming and confident cat, but lacks sensitivity and intelligence. He is also quite physical in every way.

A/N: I like how he has flaws and seems like he's self centered in a way, I also like how he's a medicine cat that lacks sensitivity as usually medicine cats are caring and all, do again love the creativity of the character!

Looks: Canarysong is a tortoiseshell tom with white paws and navy blue eyes. His fur is medium-length and he is tall, fit, and lanky.

A/N: very descriptive, I like how he is described- his name goes well with this looks. I like how you didn't right just "blue eyes." And gave me the type of blue his eyes are.

Backstory (it's not much btw. He is still being developed.): He was born to his mother, Brightsong, and his father, Brokenheart. His father left him when he was a tiny kitten, so his mother was left to take care of him. When Canarysong was an apprentice, his mother passed due to greencough. The whole of ThunderClan mourned her, so when Canarysong was old enough to earn his full medicine cat name, his mentor named him Canarysong in honor of his mother. The rest is soon to come. He is 20 moons old, so more is to come.

A/N: Ok- First of all, I love his backstory! I love how he is named in honor of his mother, and it's sad how his mother passed away due to greencough, so it must have been hard for Canarypaw being alone since his father wasn't there to take care of him after his mother passed. (Stupid brokenheart >:(. ) I can feel that Canarysong's mentor was sort of the one to take care of him after his mom died, and if that's the case it's really sweet. I would have really like more backstory- but I can't blame you because it's a work in progress!

Age: 20 moons

Kin: Brightsong (Mother, Dead)—A white she-cat with medium-length fur and navy blue eyes.
Brokenheart (Father, Unknown)—A tortoiseshell tom with pale green eyes, short fur, and huge white paws.

A/N: I love both of their names and descriptions on their appearances. Brightsong and brokenheart seem to have names that Contrast (if that makes sense). Brightsong seem more of a cheerful, outgoing, kind she-cat because of the seem she is givin. Unlike brokenheart who gives off a more, mean vibe.
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Overall I rate this oc an 9/10 I love how original he is! From his name to the backstory, everything I read was. Unique and I would love to read more about Canarysong! Thank you so much for letting me rate your oc!